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I have 1120 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1686201 times and 1126 of my stories have been cherry picked.
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Ugly Puggly 13

I was in the depot and it was near knocking-off time. So I was trying to look busy by opening and shutting the back of the van doors, and skulking...
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Ugly Puggly 12

Ugly Puggly was a surprisingly good cook. By that I meant he could do more that toast and beans. He baked his own bread and could even do vegetarian...
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Ugly Puggly 11

The shopkeeper said he was very sorry to hear about Agnes. ‘Cheers,’ I could never mind his name. I’d called him Raj, when I was drunk and he smiled...
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Ugly Puggly 10

I used to go to my local, three or four times a week. I caught the odd cry of ‘Hi, Jim,’ but that was from old timers like Jock. He didn’t wait for a...
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Ugly Puggly 9

I wandered through to the kitchen. While the kettle was boiling, I picked out a mug from the debris in the sink. Tap water was boiling hot. I ducked...
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1364 of my comments have received 1396 Great Feedback votes

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even Orcs need to pee too. 

Posted on Sun, 15 Jan 2023

even Orcs need to pee too. 

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Posted in Argibel The Orc : The Bitter Romantic Chapter 1

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words that swirl through you.

Posted on Sun, 15 Jan 2023

words that swirl through you. 

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Posted in The bridge of Sante Fe

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ah, sadness epitomised. 

Posted on Tue, 10 Jan 2023

ah, sadness epitomised. 

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Posted in Flight Path

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Let if go. That's a song out

Posted on Thu, 12 Jan 2023

Let if go. That's a song out of Frozen. Very apt. 

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Posted in Allowing Letting Go

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Utopian dreams are never easy

Posted on Tue, 10 Jan 2023

Utopian dreams are never easy, Dreams of girls much easier. 

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Posted in Part 2 of the Union: 1973

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sibling rivalry and

Posted on Sun, 08 Jan 2023

sibling rivalry and metaphysics..  

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Posted in "Willow's Missing Tail" 7

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I'm with both of you in this

Posted on Sun, 08 Jan 2023

I'm with both of you in this one. 

https://www.thecreativepenn.com/2023/01/01/my-2023-creative-and-business...

For years...

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Posted in 2023 A Trustworthy Liar

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graveyards have a way of

Posted on Sun, 08 Jan 2023

graveyards have a way of digging deep into us. truth telling. 

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Posted in Why Does It Always Rain In Graveyards?

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Darren’s 5’ 11” head and

Posted on Thu, 05 Jan 2023

Darren’s 5’ 11” head and looks Jeff in his 6’ 4” eye. [Might need to re-write this bit to eliminate ambiguity. I don't think Darren's head it 5 foot eleven]

great start, want to know more. what they were looking for? 

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Posted in The Spook Dog (first bit)

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well done,   foresight and

Posted on Wed, 04 Jan 2023

well done,   foresight and fire. 

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Posted in When Lily Was Here

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