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I have 1212 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 3497427 times and 1246 of my stories have been cherry picked.
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Cherry

Love Story 21

Da groaned and leaned on me as he lowered himself to the floor and shut his eyes. ‘Don’t die, Da,’ I wailed as he sucked in each breath in and blew...
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Love Story 20

I wore my smartest clothes and shined my shoes before we set off to the Police Station at Hall Street. Nobody else hurrying along the canal in the...
Cherry

Love Story 19

I piled my shirt and trousers on the chair beside the window and crept shivering into bed with my socks on. Tossed and turned. Yawned, throwing my...
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children of the coming apocalypse

[Playtime] Close your eyes Cover your ears Don’t look for a reason To have reason And we’ll be in the clear We’re children of the coming apocalypse...
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Love Story 18

I zigzagged down the hill towards the phone box. It always smelled of pish as if somebody had used it a toilet, which they had from the damp stains...
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1874 of my comments have received 1931 Great Feedback votes

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mum is always best. 

Posted on Thu, 08 Jan 2026

mum is always best. 

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Posted in Gone But Not Forgotten

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It makes me mad enough to

Posted on Sat, 13 Dec 2025

It makes me mad enough to write a letter to the Daily Mail about the segregation of schools. Nobody believes in anything any more. All children go to interdemonational nurseries or they're just left about street corners with their fags. In our...

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Posted in A Hare’s Breath 3 - The Accident

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makes sense of a kind of

Posted on Thu, 11 Dec 2025

makes sense of a kind of sadness. 

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Posted in The Day, Every Day

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ah, GlosKat, I think I need

Posted on Wed, 10 Dec 2025

ah, GlosKat, I think I need an eye test. Ludwig Wittgenstein: What a picture must have in common with reality in order to represent it after its manner—rightly or falsely—is its form of representation. We see what we think we see, even if we don'...

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Posted in R&D 5

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violence is believing it's

Posted on Thu, 11 Dec 2025

violence is believing it's necessary as you show. 

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Posted in Variable

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cheers TJ, who knows what

Posted on Wed, 10 Dec 2025

cheers TJ, who knows what path we take? Not Abraham. Not me. 

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Posted in R&D 5

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I wondered where Pudgy

Posted on Tue, 09 Dec 2025

I wondered where Pudgy Maxwell's van went to. He might well have sold it to your dad. He'd drag two seats out of the pub, with a punter standing in the middle. Bit shuggly. But good enough to get you to the Celtic match. Pope John Paul II...

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Posted in A Hare's Breath 1 - The Van

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aye and aye, sadly true.

Posted on Tue, 09 Dec 2025

aye and aye, sadly true. where are we noo? 

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Posted in The Big Picture

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the poet in you, indeed,

Posted on Thu, 04 Dec 2025

the poet in you, indeed, Jenny. 

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Posted in Happiness Of Anticipating Inspiration

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to be out and about is poetry

Posted on Tue, 02 Dec 2025

to be out and about is poetry to bring home. 

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Posted in "Winter Constitutional"

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