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I have 1121 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
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Sooz 5

Better get goin’, or we’ll miss the train,’ Badger had to crane his neck to speak in Eddie’s ear. A DJ dressed as Elvis but wearing an orange wig appeared and he’d pumped the volume up, flinging in a medley of ABBA classics beginning with Winner Take it All and working his way back to Waterloo to get the girls dancing.
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Sooz 4

Groups of men stood near the walkways leading to the flight deck. Unshaven fellows with bleary eyes fooling about like young lads in thick boots and...
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Sooz 3

Fatty Patty got quite a reputation on the rig, and Eddie got the nickname Fast Eddie because he had to play detective. Track her down, pronto. Hose...
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Eddie sat on the top bunk with Fatty Patty spread out like an incontinence blanket with bumps. He’d a fag in his mouth and he scowled at the doll. ‘...
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It all started as a bit of a joke. Eddie was toying with his cheesecake and having a smoke. His ginger hair had begun to retreat from his forehead...

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1376 of my comments have received 1410 Great Feedback votes

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thanks drew, insert and lena.

Posted on Mon, 10 Oct 2022

thanks drew, insert and lena. onward and perhaps not upward. on and on. 

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Posted in Ugly Puggly 86

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Even Mikes. [Mike's]. Ah, the

Posted on Mon, 10 Oct 2022

Even Mikes. [Mike's]. Ah, the true believers win. 

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Posted in Cleanse your soul

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yeh, I can see why your mad.

Posted on Mon, 10 Oct 2022

yeh, I can see why your mad. But Todd's got a shit job. If his client isn't in, he has to take the package away and return with it. I'd guess putting it in the bin means he'd delivered it. For him, anyway, job done. Mininmal wage. Long hours....

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Posted in Employee Of The Month TODD!

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I always wondered why my

Posted on Sun, 09 Oct 2022

I always wondered why my eldest brother tried so hard to make my dad love him. We were brothers, not half brotthers. And he wasn't cruel to me (well, only in the usual ways). People always say you must have loved your dad. Nah, I say. I loved my...

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Posted in More Than Words.

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I've got a Renauld van that's

Posted on Sun, 09 Oct 2022

I've got a Renauld van that's locked me out. I used to have to go away and lleave it parked before it would let me get in and drive it away. Electronics. I paid hundreds of pounds to diffierent garages to get it fixed. I've still got the van....

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Posted in I Recognized it.

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a busy week. we always fill

Posted on Sun, 09 Oct 2022

a busy week. we always fill it with our fears. sometimes our joys. I get angry at dentist who go angry wiht patients for not being patient enough. 

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Posted in chemo 11

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the journey continues indeed.

Posted on Sun, 09 Oct 2022

the journey continues indeed. 

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Posted in In the Vale of the Shadow King (Part Six of Six)

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the fight is not yet over

Posted on Fri, 07 Oct 2022

the fight is not yet over good against evil. 

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Posted in In the Vale of the Shadow King (Part Five of Six)

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the shadow king appears. look

Posted on Sun, 02 Oct 2022

the shadow king appears. look forward to the battle at the end. 

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Posted in In the Vale of the Shadow King (Part Four of Six)

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we produce gas, but not even

Posted on Mon, 03 Oct 2022

we produce gas, but not even enough for ourselves. Germany gets 80% (or did) from Russia. It had stacks of it. Still does. But we're not buying. They even sabatoged their pipeline. 

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Posted in Crunch Time (The Unwanted Revolution – By pricing!) (Or is it more of a Coup D’etat than a Revolution?) (By the Energy Companies? The new rulers of western (or is it just lap dog Britain?) society?) by Alfred N.Muggins Part 3

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