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I have 1216 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 3602416 times and 1252 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1921 of my 16,174 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1984 votes

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Cherry

Ugly Puggly 49

Cold outside with a hint of rain. Smirry. Our conversations usually involved the weather, even though most folk now worked inside. Dave was at my...
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Cherry

Ugly Puggly 48

I went outside to have a gander at where we’d buried the body. The grass around the decking was overlong, more like weeds. A chestnut tree on the...
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Cherry

Ugly Puggly 47

Things were going better than I hoped. I’d gone to the shop and got a Daily Record and rolls. The shopkeeper was waiting for me, edging forward to...
Cherry

Ugly Puggly 46

A slight tingling was in the tips of my fingers, pins and needles in my left hand. I didn’t want it to turn into an irregular party and me doing the...
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Cherry

Ugly Puggly 45

I checked the bedroom for booze, I might have missed, before going into the toilet. My face in the mottled mirror above the sink wasn’t pretty. ‘Who...
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1921 of my comments have received 1984 Great Feedback votes

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RIP. 

Posted on Wed, 13 Nov 2024

RIP. 

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Posted in That's OK Then!

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I don't know where you're

Posted on Wed, 13 Nov 2024

I don't know where you're going with this, but hey, I like it, anyway. 

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Posted in Tales of the Unconnected

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ah, difficult and breathing

Posted on Sat, 09 Nov 2024

ah, difficult and breathing is always optional, paternity fade out. 

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Posted in A different way to measure time

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43 it is then. Or isn't.

Posted on Mon, 11 Nov 2024

43 it is then. Or isn't. There are no such things as facts now. Dead bodies don't exist. Women and children died of natural causes. They are just trying to find which bits fit together. 

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Posted in Letter of Rejection

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good to see you (I mean

Posted on Sat, 09 Nov 2024

good to see you (I mean Archibald) off the sauce and back to wriing about booze. 

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Posted in Who's That Girl? (Dead Reckoning series - Part 34)

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you are fire, the creator. 

Posted on Fri, 08 Nov 2024

you are fire, the creator. 

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Posted in Watching the Fire

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Ah Atlantic praise for this

Posted on Thu, 07 Nov 2024

Ah Atlantic praise for this mourning note to Scottishness or is it Norseness? 

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Posted in East Coast Scotland (Reflection)

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'feeling a little ridiculous'

Posted on Wed, 06 Nov 2024

'feeling a little ridiculous'. Fine for stories and narrative. But not for scripts? It's all show and tell. Feelings fall into that world of neither? 

BBC is now open for scripts of 30 pages or longer. 

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Posted in Meat Crimes - Scene 4

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I'm not sure it is surreal.

Posted on Wed, 06 Nov 2024

I'm not sure it is surreal. It feels very, very real. 

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Posted in Message : Post Scriptum

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we're all complicated. When

Posted on Sun, 03 Nov 2024

we're all complicated. When we make life simple, we start lying. 

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Posted in He Was

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