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I have 1182 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2676689 times and 1208 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1668 of my 15,591 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1701 votes

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Ugly Puggly 15

I couldn’t get the electricity to work. I tried everything but paying for it. Flinging my arm around Dave’s shoulder in a rough clutch, he turned his...
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Ugly Puggly 14

Ugly Puggly’s room was messy and and stunk of urine and weak bleach. Clothes were piled on an unmade bed. A half-eaten bread roll in the bin. He...
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Ugly Puggly 13

I was in the depot and it was near knocking-off time. So I was trying to look busy by opening and shutting the back of the van doors, and skulking...
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Ugly Puggly 12

Ugly Puggly was a surprisingly good cook. By that I meant he could do more that toast and beans. He baked his own bread and could even do vegetarian...
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Ugly Puggly 11

The shopkeeper said he was very sorry to hear about Agnes. ‘Cheers,’ I could never mind his name. I’d called him Raj, when I was drunk and he smiled...

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1668 of my comments have received 1701 Great Feedback votes

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the light in spite of

Posted on Tue, 28 Nov 2023

the light in spite of everything is still alive in you and dusk. 

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Posted in at dusk today

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asymptomatic, Jean, you're

Posted on Thu, 30 Nov 2023

asymptomatic, Jean, you're almost normal. whatever that means. it sounds good. 

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Posted in Friendly Fire

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a murder of crows is such a

Posted on Sun, 26 Nov 2023

a murder of crows is such a wonderfully apt description. you take it and fly. 

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Posted in A Murder of Crows (Transcendence)

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Great read, but the ending

Posted on Tue, 21 Nov 2023

Great read, but the ending had me confused. With the reference to Marley and Mary, it had me wondering if the narrator was a dog. And I was missing something. (Not unsual in my case). 

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Posted in Those We Leave Behind

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the not so rich and the

Posted on Sat, 18 Nov 2023

the not so rich and the famous, including you too Turlough. No statues yet, but let that not be a regret. Feed the ducks and prosper. You're the right side of the turf. 

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Posted in Patrick Kavanagh and Me

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who knows? But we'll all find

Posted on Sat, 18 Nov 2023

who knows? But we'll all find out in the less than gentle night. 

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Posted in Do Not Go Gentle Into That Dark Night

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that seems true, to you and

Posted on Sat, 18 Nov 2023

that seems true, to you and me, and so many others that yearn to be free and write a great novel or two, or even one would do. Barely noticed, but sitting on a shelf, itself, something.  

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Posted in To see the day of light

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the side effects of the side

Posted on Sat, 18 Nov 2023

the side effects of the side affects are always the killer. Then I guess everything is. I feel I shouldn't say I enjoy reading your dispatches from the front line, but I do. Hallucinations are always interesting. 

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Posted in Chemo2 - session 3

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it rocks Jenny 

Posted on Fri, 17 Nov 2023

it rocks Jenny 

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Posted in Analogy Of Adventure

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you've nailed it. Don't know

Posted on Thu, 16 Nov 2023

you've nailed it. Don't know if that helps? 

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Posted in Anxiety

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