celticman

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I have 1182 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2674278 times and 1208 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1668 of my 15,587 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1701 votes

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Jack O'Donnell

 

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unkissed

Many my days and many my tomorrows Until you no longer remember me in your prayers Shame burns away our ignorance and confusion Some unholy night’s...
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Gold cherry
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Twosies or Threesies

I said to Archie, ‘But you could get put up against a wall and shot’. My wee brother was standing huddled beside us in the close, out of the wind and...
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Wednesday Club

We yakked on about God and laughed at the devil. Really, it should be the other way about. I met the devil when I was nine or ten, but I blanked most...
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Tuesday Club

The Tuesday Club wasn’t what it looked like, older men in short and sannies panting and out of breath after playing three-a-side fitba on the wooden...
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You are not your illness.

The girls left a heady brew of perfume behind. I poured Etian some water and he was well enough to sit up in bed and sip it. He began coughing and...
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1668 of my comments have received 1701 Great Feedback votes

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the cold old days. Ronnie

Posted on Thu, 12 Oct 2023

the cold old days. Ronnie Simpson, for example, played for Queens Park at 14. It was better than working down the pit, but ofen just a blast from the past 

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Posted in Poem for the Goalie

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you've pouured centures into

Posted on Thu, 12 Oct 2023

you've pouured centures into so few words. Bravo!

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Posted in This England

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technology is pretty

Posted on Thu, 12 Oct 2023

technology is pretty wonderful, even though the stuff that keeps you alive is a killer You can google likely prognosis. Good and bed, like most things, I expect. 

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Posted in A LITTLE BIT INTERESTING

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we alays chase our dreams

Posted on Tue, 10 Oct 2023

we alays chase our dreams Jenny. New tomorrows is what we crave. 

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Posted in Curious Magic

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sleep, don't weep. 

Posted on Thu, 05 Oct 2023

sleep, don't weep. 

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Posted in First To Wake

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Assad is no Muggins. 

Posted on Wed, 04 Oct 2023

Assad is no Muggins. 

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Posted in Holidays in Timbuctou, by Alfred N.Muggins (rogue reporter!)

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Frank was greeted by his

Posted on Wed, 04 Oct 2023

Frank was greeted by his smiling wife who was sitting up, smiling [sometimes you can get too much smiling]

$20 is a good deal. 

I like your notes at the end. But in fiction, unnecessary. If I listed my influneces, I'd run out of...

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Posted in Devil's Advocate (Part Three of Three)

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thanks iinsert. you're right.

Posted on Tue, 03 Oct 2023

thanks iinsert. you're right. no eyelashed. no eyebrows. bit of a mess. but I guess you're use to that. thanks for pick of the day, drew. jenny, as always, thanks for your continued support. you make me sound as if I know what I'm doing. marinda...

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Posted in Love Story 2

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wife better? deal with the

Posted on Mon, 02 Oct 2023

wife better? deal with the devil? But we know it doesn't work. What next? 

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Posted in Devil's Advocate (Part Two of Three)

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