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I have 1182 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2653243 times and 1207 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1662 of my 15,575 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1694 votes

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Jack O'Donnell

 

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You and Me—forever—Anne.

You and Me—forever—Anne. Anne kept her eyes shut and waited for her number to be called. A whiff of cigarettes made her grimace, even though it was a...
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Penthouse

‘Awright lads,’ Cooper’s da was bald with a booming voice. He shouted a derisory greeting as we dodged furniture in the living room. He’d the comfy...
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JOHN MCLACHLAN (Kojak) 1962-2011

Tony Quinn opened the living-room window and shouted me into Kojak’s house on Lilac Avenue. It had one of those boxy silver wheelchair ramps taking...
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The Reckoning

Their turf roof sunk into the sides and the hut staggered like a drunken soldier. It stood out from the others because it lay on the knob of earth...
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Remember Me As I Was.

Oatmeal for breakfast on a Monday, served lukewarm or cold. I chewed slowly, the plastic tray on his lap as I sat on my bunk. Grey food, slop, you...

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1662 of my comments have received 1694 Great Feedback votes

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I think your team will win. 

Posted on Sat, 22 Jul 2023

I think your team will win. 

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Posted in Ride a White Horse to Banbury Cross! By Alfred N.Muggins Part 1

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a delight, apart from Jacob

Posted on Fri, 21 Jul 2023

a delight, apart from Jacob-Rees Mogg, obviously. 

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Posted in Our Man in Golubac

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I'll put off the place of

Posted on Wed, 19 Jul 2023

I'll put off the place of rest, as for the rest you've covered it. 

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Posted in In A Place Of Respite

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a fish could  become a dragon

Posted on Mon, 17 Jul 2023

a fish could  become a dragon--could happen. You made it happen. 

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Posted in Dragon Gate

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I'm reading about Babi Yar. A

Posted on Mon, 17 Jul 2023

I'm reading about Babi Yar. A different kind of obssession with food. But we all need to eat. That's what makes us human as you show with a nice slice of humour. 

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Posted in Shadowy Visions Of The Past

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living beyond is often beyond

Posted on Sat, 08 Jul 2023

living beyond is often beyond imaginatioin. Well done for taking us there. 

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Posted in (This Life) Part 10 – Chapter 1: The Dream Catcher’s Tale

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Enjoyed your poem. I'm no

Posted on Wed, 12 Jul 2023

Enjoyed your poem. I'm no archeologist, but I've often heard the theory of  Red Castle is becasue running out of grey paint castle is too much of a mouthful, in Welsh or Scot's. 

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Posted in Castell Coch (Red Castle)

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I thought it was a goat. 

Posted on Tue, 11 Jul 2023

I thought it was a goat. 

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Posted in Every Picture Tells A Story

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brids are beauty in action,

Posted on Tue, 04 Jul 2023

brids are beauty in action, as you show. 

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Posted in It's Too Late For Things Missed

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if I'd be writing this I'd

Posted on Fri, 07 Jul 2023

if I'd be writing this I'd have made  your dad dying as a hoax to get you home. Reality. That's a different story. Wonderful storytelling. 

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Posted in Miss Australia 1978 – Part Four of Four

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