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I have 1182 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2701017 times and 1208 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1671 of my 15,599 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1704 votes

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Depression

I am what I am not That’s what I’ve been taught The timekeeper in my head keeps each tick of the day He feeds me guilt pain on not going away, again...
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dog days.

The washing machine sloshed and whirled, the edge of the dog blanket appeared and tumbled in on itself, before going into the spin cycle making the...
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What did Jesus do? 4

Peter the Apostle brought a more to life than life attitude and his faith was like flying fish. He couldn’t sit on his arse for a minute. We lit a...
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What did Jesus do? 3

My dad used to tell everybody how smart I was. He used to show me off, tell me to memorise things like long poems that rhymed. (And that was no crime...
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What did Jesus do? 2

‘Jeez, wae the electricity, all the stuff in the freezer will go aff.’ Ian ran his fingers through his hair. And he pouted. His beard was patchy,...

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1671 of my comments have received 1704 Great Feedback votes

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Old dears. That sounds like

Posted on Thu, 24 Aug 2023

Old dears. That sounds like Nellie. You and the cat did well too. Not so old dears. 

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Posted in Nellie the Devilment

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salad days, indeed. Those

Posted on Tue, 22 Aug 2023

salad days, indeed. Those shiny bits of paper seem worth the world .but are fool's gold. 

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Posted in Steve Mason and the Last Day of School (Part Two of Two)

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daisy chains, didn't we all?

Posted on Mon, 21 Aug 2023

daisy chains, didn't we all? even us boys. 

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Posted in Swathed In Nature's Beauty

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Ah, didn't tell us what kind

Posted on Sun, 20 Aug 2023

Ah, didn't tell us what kind of grades they got. I guess we've got to wait for that. Leave on a high (or low). Physics is always a bastard. Not that I ever did physics. 

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Posted in Steve Mason and the Last Day of School (Part One of Two)

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aha, bit of fluff indeed. I

Posted on Sat, 19 Aug 2023

aha, bit of fluff indeed. I did a similiar story set on an oil rig. Can't remember what it was called. You set the tone well, with the older guys wondering if it was even legal. Maybe he's not that weird. A growing market. 

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Posted in His Bit of Fluff

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how do we recognise ourself?

Posted on Thu, 17 Aug 2023

how do we recognise ourself? birds at least can fly away from themselves. 

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Posted in The Loneliness of a Cuckoo

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wonderful. I'm sure there are

Posted on Wed, 16 Aug 2023

wonderful. I'm sure there are better visitors than you, but few so poetic. 

in dark green gillet instead or armour, [should this be 'of'?

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Posted in The Heritage Man

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honoured indeed, Ed. 

Posted on Tue, 15 Aug 2023

honoured indeed, Ed. 

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Posted in Nunca Te Rindas

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still smelling the roses,

Posted on Sun, 13 Aug 2023

still smelling the roses, Jean. That's a good sign. 

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Posted in Dozey Bella and Cippy

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better if she murdered him

Posted on Sat, 12 Aug 2023

better if she murdered him first and then found out about the doll house later. That's Tory policy, I  believe. It's no crimiinal. 

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Posted in A confession

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