celticman

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I have 1180 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2652384 times and 1206 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1662 of my 15,564 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1694 votes

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Jack O'Donnell

 

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Ugly Puggly 3

‘I’ll need to nip hame to get my Keycard,’ I told Ugly Puggly. He stared out of the window and said nothing. Drifting snow camouflaging the kerb...
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Cherry

Ugly Puggly 2

I waited until we were stranded between traffic lights on Great Western Road before I spoke. People thought Ugly Puggly was being ignorant, because...
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Cherry

Ugly Puggly

Agnes said, ‘Did you see The Clydebank Post ?’ ‘Nah, why would I?’ I shook my head. Sitting on the stairs, pulling on my work boots. A snarled lace,...
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answering machine

My online pals joke phones are called mobile for a reason. Mine is a ten-quid model. Any drug dealer in prison would be proud of it. Top-up and Pay-...
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Cherry

the eleven-minute bore.

My jacket was in the bar. She’d little more than a blouse, with a red bra playing peek-a-boo. The wind cut through thin clothing and buffeted our...
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1662 of my comments have received 1694 Great Feedback votes

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watchers and waiters have

Posted on Mon, 23 Oct 2023

watchers and waiters have their story. you tell it here. what you fear. or worse, made to play ball. 

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Posted in Come to the Sports Hall

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we're all part of the

Posted on Sun, 22 Oct 2023

we're all part of the vanishing point, whether we want to be or not. 

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Posted in Fifty Cornish Sunsets

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insomonia seems to be a

Posted on Sun, 22 Oct 2023

insomonia seems to be a modern curse, but perhaps not. Night owls are nothing new. Relaxation brings is back to you. Yes, indeed. 

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Posted in Transcendental Journey of Meditation

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the geese are gone but we

Posted on Sun, 22 Oct 2023

the geese are gone but we hear them in your words. 

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Posted in Blagdon Lake in Winter

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based, of course, on

Posted on Sat, 21 Oct 2023

based, of course, on Thatcdher, the milk snatcher. 

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Posted in The Sinisterish Milkman

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craigs are vague. Spencers

Posted on Tue, 17 Oct 2023

craigs are vague. Spencers are expensive. what next with the heavy cable? 

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Posted in 'Parcel for you..' Part 3

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wondeful story telling wich

Posted on Tue, 17 Oct 2023

wondeful story telling wich sounds very near the bone. 

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Posted in The Hall of Glass Coffins

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we're just too old to

Posted on Thu, 19 Oct 2023

we're just too old to understand. 

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Posted in LookTok

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heaven and hell. they're all

Posted on Tue, 17 Oct 2023

heaven and hell. they're all there within us. 

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Posted in The Other Side of Paradise

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Motherwell is next week's inspiration point.

Posted on Sun, 15 Oct 2023

 

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Posted in Jacques in the Box

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