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I have 1179 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2608988 times and 1205 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1656 of my 15,536 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1688 votes

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Creeping F-ing Jesus.

The old man pulls a crumpled hanky from the side pocket of his jacket, and blows his nose. He peers at his notes and then at us with watery grey eyes...
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Vermin

The gaunt old man in the pinstripe suit hovers over the microphone and starts speaking in a strange accent before they are ready. ‘It’s a ridiculous...
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Depression

I am what I am not That’s what I’ve been taught The timekeeper in my head keeps each tick of the day He feeds me guilt pain on not going away, again...
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dog days.

The washing machine sloshed and whirled, the edge of the dog blanket appeared and tumbled in on itself, before going into the spin cycle making the...
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What did Jesus do? 4

Peter the Apostle brought a more to life than life attitude and his faith was like flying fish. He couldn’t sit on his arse for a minute. We lit a...

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1656 of my comments have received 1688 Great Feedback votes

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aha, bit of fluff indeed. I

Posted on Sat, 19 Aug 2023

aha, bit of fluff indeed. I did a similiar story set on an oil rig. Can't remember what it was called. You set the tone well, with the older guys wondering if it was even legal. Maybe he's not that weird. A growing market. 

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Posted in His Bit of Fluff

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how do we recognise ourself?

Posted on Thu, 17 Aug 2023

how do we recognise ourself? birds at least can fly away from themselves. 

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Posted in The Loneliness of a Cuckoo

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wonderful. I'm sure there are

Posted on Wed, 16 Aug 2023

wonderful. I'm sure there are better visitors than you, but few so poetic. 

in dark green gillet instead or armour, [should this be 'of'?

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Posted in The Heritage Man

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honoured indeed, Ed. 

Posted on Tue, 15 Aug 2023

honoured indeed, Ed. 

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Posted in Nunca Te Rindas

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still smelling the roses,

Posted on Sun, 13 Aug 2023

still smelling the roses, Jean. That's a good sign. 

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Posted in Dozey Bella and Cippy

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better if she murdered him

Posted on Sat, 12 Aug 2023

better if she murdered him first and then found out about the doll house later. That's Tory policy, I  believe. It's no crimiinal. 

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Posted in A confession

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white skin in a passport. the

Posted on Fri, 11 Aug 2023

white skin in a passport. the irony of no blacks, irish of dogs, is sunak, patel and braverman would have been denied a job in the post office by Winston Churchill. Not regardeed as properly British and never would be. 

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Posted in Trip of a Lifetime

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I've not really been follwong

Posted on Fri, 11 Aug 2023

I've not really been follwong the story Reo Stakis, of course, had hotels that mysteriosly burnt down some say for the insurance. The Crooked House Pub is a great name for a crooked scheme. 

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Posted in The Crooked House Pub.

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'cows' indeed. reminds me of

Posted on Fri, 11 Aug 2023

'cows' indeed. reminds me of that poetic celebration of bovine encephaly. 

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Posted in Holy Cows

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weedkiller  yeh, associated

Posted on Thu, 10 Aug 2023

weedkiller  yeh, associated with Parkinson disease too. Councils love it. 

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Posted in begone

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