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This is very good. Jason's
Posted on Fri, 14 Feb 2014
This is very good. Jason's voice is just right. You don't need to say 'I make an effort at politeness'. You've already shown it and that's added commentary. Similiarly, appearances' sake is a bit convoluted and would be better left as appearance...Read full comment
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enjoyed this. thanks.
Posted on Sun, 26 Oct 2008enjoyed this. thanks.Read full comment