celticman

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I have 1182 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2701029 times and 1208 of my stories have been cherry picked.
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answering machine

My online pals joke phones are called mobile for a reason. Mine is a ten-quid model. Any drug dealer in prison would be proud of it. Top-up and Pay-...
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Cherry

the eleven-minute bore.

My jacket was in the bar. She’d little more than a blouse, with a red bra playing peek-a-boo. The wind cut through thin clothing and buffeted our...
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the ten-minute bore

Christmas-Eve was a big thing in the Blaksketts. We are at the proud tip of a long peninsula leading to nowhere. You had the Christmas lights on...
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Tuesday Afternoon.

Swat away the murky day Clasped hands upwards to pious heaven Exchange it for sniggering and hee-hawing Sharp hinterlands and hard-ons Feet that can...
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Sometimes forever

I wore a beanie beneath another two-tone wool hat. The colour of my hair was a snapshot of fashionable black and white. The Weird Fish logo and the...
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1671 of my comments have received 1704 Great Feedback votes

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insomonia seems to be a

Posted on Sun, 22 Oct 2023

insomonia seems to be a modern curse, but perhaps not. Night owls are nothing new. Relaxation brings is back to you. Yes, indeed. 

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Posted in Transcendental Journey of Meditation

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the geese are gone but we

Posted on Sun, 22 Oct 2023

the geese are gone but we hear them in your words. 

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Posted in Blagdon Lake in Winter

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based, of course, on

Posted on Sat, 21 Oct 2023

based, of course, on Thatcdher, the milk snatcher. 

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Posted in The Sinisterish Milkman

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craigs are vague. Spencers

Posted on Tue, 17 Oct 2023

craigs are vague. Spencers are expensive. what next with the heavy cable? 

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Posted in 'Parcel for you..' Part 3

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wondeful story telling wich

Posted on Tue, 17 Oct 2023

wondeful story telling wich sounds very near the bone. 

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Posted in The Hall of Glass Coffins

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we're just too old to

Posted on Thu, 19 Oct 2023

we're just too old to understand. 

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Posted in LookTok

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heaven and hell. they're all

Posted on Tue, 17 Oct 2023

heaven and hell. they're all there within us. 

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Posted in The Other Side of Paradise

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Motherwell is next week's inspiration point.

Posted on Sun, 15 Oct 2023

 

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Posted in Jacques in the Box

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homeless people are people.

Posted on Sun, 15 Oct 2023

homeless people are people. so are people being bombed and shot at. so are people with mental-heallth problem. so are people with addictions. What they have in common as you show isn't just they are homeless, but demonised and scapegoated....

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Posted in Lacking a Home, Not a Soul

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designed by NASA at

Posted on Sat, 14 Oct 2023

designed by NASA at Shefflield University. Of course, all men are. 

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Posted in 'Parcel for you..'

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