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Angel 80 (lock up)
The taxi driver had the engine running and the Hackney cab was warm. He barely turned his head to look to at them, voice like falling gravel, ‘Where...
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Angel 79 (hard decision)
Angel opened her mouth and closed it again, her tongue stuck to the palate like a spoon. Tears, hard gems, too painful to cry in a lifeless body. If...
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Angel 78 (old friends and new)
Pizza Face made tea, toast and cheese for her and Adam picked at it as they made small talk. He wasn’t a religious man, but he kept touching her,...
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Angel 77 (Partick home)
Bandit flung Angel’s bag in the boot of his gleaming white BMW and slammed down the boot. Parked on the pavement in at the hedge, Pizza Face had to...
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Angel 76 (waiting for the Bandit)
‘This is nice,’ the old man flicked the switch and two bars of the electric fire glowed. He sat squinty on the chair an old army coat as a pillow at...
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yes, indeed can be poisonous,
Posted on Fri, 20 May 2022
yes, indeed can be poisonous, Beauty often is.
Read full commentPosted in Eves' Tears
you're certainlty not
Posted on Wed, 18 May 2022
you're certainlty not grossing us out. You're living it and we follow what you're going through. Nothiing gross. Nobel.
Read full commentPosted in Janus 12
I think she wants to give
Posted on Wed, 18 May 2022
I think she wants to give birth to the baby Jesus. I really like this, but too much exposition. .Need to lighten it a bit with dialogue. Perhaps some kind of arguement about which baby Jesus they want? the black or white one?
Read full commentPosted in Legend of the Pah - 8 (S T Vasectomy Clinic)
Living in the moment Jenny.
Posted on Mon, 16 May 2022
Living in the moment Jenny. An open book. An open window.
Read full commentPosted in Open Windows Of My Soul
yeh, made tastier by being
Posted on Fri, 13 May 2022
yeh, made tastier by being forbidden, I guess.
Read full commentPosted in The Forbidden Kiss
sometimes a word is enough.
Posted on Fri, 13 May 2022
sometimes a word is enough.
John Steinbeck (1902–1968)
' The writer must believe that what he is doing is the most important thing in the world. And he must hold to this illusion even when he knows it is not true.'
Read full commentPosted in Word
the worse case scenario, as
Posted on Thu, 12 May 2022
the worse case scenario, as you know, is undigested food. Well, there's a lot of worst-case scenarios and you've covered most of them. Nothing gross about it. Keep writing from the front line.
Read full commentPosted in Hospital 3 and Janus 11
lovely, but living in
Posted on Mon, 09 May 2022
lovely, but living in Scotland we dont' learn about sunshine until we're adults.
Read full commentPosted in You learn about the sunshine
I'm glad you've remained
Posted on Wed, 11 May 2022
I'm glad you've remained obfective enoght to write it all down.
Read full commentPosted in Hospital 2, Janus 10
I can't tell my trees from my
Posted on Mon, 09 May 2022
I can't tell my trees from my woods, but you make it sound easy.
Read full commentPosted in Maple Tree Den
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