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I have 1182 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2682855 times and 1208 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1671 of my 15,599 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1704 votes

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Angel (90) Retrial

After a few months a guard took Angel to see Mr Howard, her Queen’s Counsel, in one of the holding pens near the church. Pippa and the rest of the...
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Angel 89 (Panto)

Angel was in the audience for the Christmas panto in the multi-faith arena, Jack and the Bean crop, but she knew every line as Pippa played Jack and...
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Angel (88) Christmas

After lock-up, Pippa fingered the small bruise below her eye, more of a pointing exercise to show Angel where Georgie had punched her.

Angel 87 (Pizza Face daddy)

Angel was more angry than scared when she hurried through the gate to meet Pizza Face at visiting time. Her hair brushed against her shoulder was...
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Angel 86 (salvation)

During afternoon association Angel picked up a Mars bar from the low table in front the blue cushioned seats on which she sprawled listening to the...

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1671 of my comments have received 1704 Great Feedback votes

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An escape route opens. 

Posted on Sat, 24 Dec 2022

An escape route opens. 

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Posted in The hidden painting chapter 1

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look forward to part 2. 

Posted on Sat, 24 Dec 2022

look forward to part 2. 

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Posted in Drumming Up The Christmas Trade!

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perhaps and perhaps not.

Posted on Wed, 21 Dec 2022

perhaps and perhaps not. Usually, we don't give a jot. But your parents. They're in heaven, or helll will folllow. 

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Posted in Hereafter

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bloody druids. they get into

Posted on Wed, 21 Dec 2022

bloody druids. they get into everything and don't even believe in Santa. Good one, Jenny. 

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Posted in Ancient Festival

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ah, not all black and white.

Posted on Tue, 20 Dec 2022

ah, not all black and white. nicelly done. 

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Posted in The Last Christmas (Part Two of Two)

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the rigth mix of santa and

Posted on Mon, 19 Dec 2022

the rigth mix of santa and shit behaviour. We really are rooting for Diane and her son. 

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Posted in The Last Christmas (Part One of Two)

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a love story that is lovely.

Posted on Tue, 20 Dec 2022

a love story that is lovely. well done. 

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Posted in Familial Bliss

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I lke that you turn the

Posted on Thu, 15 Dec 2022

I lke that you turn the sister against her brother, becasue he's possibly gay, it must be him. But then you pan back and show the real culprit. well done. 

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Posted in A Christmas Carol : Conclusion

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you've made ice nice. I liked

Posted on Wed, 14 Dec 2022

you've made ice nice. I liked your reading, it adds extra brio. But I thnk canvas[s] has only one s. 

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Posted in Mid-Winter

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I'm not sure I'd be a tree,

Posted on Thu, 08 Dec 2022

I'm not sure I'd be a tree, Jenny. I'd be too hollow. 

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Posted in Would I Be A Tree

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