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The good days were as fleeting as a summer shower. In June 2101 our community numbered 3284. On my seventy-fifth birthday, seven years later, we had...
Having read 30 and then 31, I see how well they fit together like pieces of a jigsaw.
30 starts off slow and seems to move up a notch as the alohol takes hold. By 31 the the pace has quicked and continues to wind up until you get to the...
but they always seemed to enjoy being the centre of attention. I guess Brian is a one off. Interesting read, I don't know how you can come up with so many good ideas.
I know how much time and effort it takes to write a story, I hope you...
However, I was kind of disappointed you changed the opening para from just meat to like he's meat. I found the change dilutes the impact. It may well be incongruous, but I feel the flat statement 'Just meat' somehow sums up a bored dog's...
Interesting you describe the brutal techniques of the fifties and early sixties. I remember the disgusting post-war state crap and the garbage that was shovelled onto the plates that passed for school dinners. (I went home during primary school...
Obviously Americans don't know the addage
Posted on Thu, 11 May 2017
Better the devil you know than the devil you don't.
So the white boys Wisconsin etc etc got the the real devil.
The black guys just got fucked again, but that's not news.
Posted in Hillary's Deplorable Basket in Wisconsin
Very clever writing,Jack
Posted on Tue, 21 Feb 2017
Having read 30 and then 31, I see how well they fit together like pieces of a jigsaw.
30 starts off slow and seems to move up a notch as the alohol takes hold. By 31 the the pace has quicked and continues to wind up until you get to the...
Read full commentPosted in grimms31
There are some great stories in Spanish folklore
Posted on Sat, 12 Nov 2016
I know it is your chosen country and I don't blame you, they are lovely people. You have certainly captured the mindset of local Spain.
(I spent a lot of time in the Canaries and Island rivalries are as intense as the regional ones in the...
Read full commentPosted in A Miracle in Villablanco
Hello Joe, I've met people a bit like Brian
Posted on Fri, 11 Nov 2016
but they always seemed to enjoy being the centre of attention. I guess Brian is a one off. Interesting read, I don't know how you can come up with so many good ideas.
I know how much time and effort it takes to write a story, I hope you...
Read full commentPosted in Brians Gift.
Dark days ahead
Posted on Thu, 10 Nov 2016
The Bear is licking his lips.
How long before he goes is search
of honey in the fields of golden stars
on blue abandoned by red stripes
and red crosses on white?
The cost of turning your backs...
Read full commentPosted in Dream On
You make a good point, however
Posted on Tue, 25 Oct 2016
I think: "very convenient for Charles" a better line (but it doesn't rhyme)...
Read full commentPosted in DIANA PRINCESS OF WALES
Very magnetic piece this, London
Posted on Thu, 21 Jul 2016
However, I was kind of disappointed you changed the opening para from just meat to like he's meat. I found the change dilutes the impact. It may well be incongruous, but I feel the flat statement 'Just meat' somehow sums up a bored dog's...
Read full commentPosted in Dogs
Bissextile Buffoon
Posted on Thu, 30 Jun 2016
Posted in Boris
My favourite time of the year is here Rhiannon
Posted on Wed, 27 Apr 2016
You have captured the essence of the things I love about springtime.
Ed
Read full commentPosted in Pembrokeshire in April
Sadly so true, Bee
Posted on Thu, 14 Apr 2016
Interesting you describe the brutal techniques of the fifties and early sixties. I remember the disgusting post-war state crap and the garbage that was shovelled onto the plates that passed for school dinners. (I went home during primary school...
Read full commentPosted in Fear of Drowning - (re post for - poetry monthly)
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