hilary west
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I have 245 stories published in
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Some interesting dialogue in
Posted on Wed, 14 Jan 2015
Some interesting dialogue in this schooly fantasy. Pretty terrible teachers and pupils!!! It kept me reading !!!
Read full commentPosted in The Songstress' Lore of Lies
A very economic word
Posted on Mon, 27 Jul 2015
A very economic word picture that is quite beautiful. I like the phrase 'breasts - tinged pink'; it is very evocative!
HW
Read full commentPosted in Flypast
It can be very important to
Posted on Thu, 23 Jul 2015
It can be very important to get away as you say in this poem, a blessed relief, no matter how much you care for your loved ones when they age and get terrible problems!
Read full commentPosted in Valued Escapes (IP)
I really like this one,
Posted on Fri, 01 May 2015
I really like this one, Rhiannon. with its sense of rhyme and half rhyme. It's a gem!
Read full commentPosted in Catching the eye
Great cascading sequence of
Posted on Mon, 06 Apr 2015
Great cascading sequence of words.
Read full commentPosted in The River shows us truth
A very apposite poem for
Posted on Fri, 03 Apr 2015
A very apposite poem for Easter, Rhiannon. Maybe it will make us all reflect on the reality of Christ's message!
Read full commentPosted in The Crux of the Crucifixion
I must confess a terrible
Posted on Sat, 28 Mar 2015
I must confess a terrible thing happened to a hedgehog in my garden once. It was before people like Alan Titchmarsh told us to look under rubbish heaps before setting them alight. I never gave it a thought and yes one was under the leaves and...
Read full commentPosted in Hedgehogs
I liked the line 'quiver in
Posted on Wed, 11 Mar 2015
I liked the line 'quiver in the cage' : the rest was very tender too!
Read full commentPosted in Things left unsaid
A good advert for S.O.U.
Posted on Sun, 01 Mar 2009
A good advert for S.O.U.Read full commentPosted in An Ode to Southern Oregon University
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