hilary west
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189 of my 1,349 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 191 votes




Hi Rhiannon,
Posted on Mon, 03 May 2021
Hi Rhiannon,
You have encapsulated the calm of the bay and also what it can be like in stormy conditions. Lovely painting too. There are many lovely places in Pembrokeshire! Hope you feel better soon.
hilary
Read full commentPosted in Coastal Cottage (Pembrokeshire)
Hi marandina,
Posted on Tue, 27 Apr 2021
Hi marandina,
I liked the alliteration in this at the beginning and the rest of it showed such imagination. Nice one!
hilary
Read full commentPosted in Footsteps on Mars
This is a haunting poem full
Posted on Sat, 01 May 2021
This is a haunting poem full of feeling. So sorry for your loss!
hilary
Read full commentPosted in Impaired
Hi Jenny.
Posted on Tue, 27 Apr 2021
Hi Jenny.
The sunrise is truly inspirational, isn't it? This was described very well ! I remember going away for a few days to the seaside and waking up early I saw a beautiful sunrise from my room over the sea. It's something that stays...
Read full commentPosted in Sunrise
A poem from the heart: very
Posted on Wed, 14 Apr 2021
A poem from the heart: very well written !!!
hilary
Read full commentPosted in Setting Sons
A lovely little gem, Rhiannon
Posted on Fri, 09 Apr 2021
A lovely little gem, Rhiannon, so short but so full of beauty !
Hilary
Read full commentPosted in Good Friday Stroll, 02/04
This is very beautiful Jenny:
Posted on Fri, 09 Apr 2021
This is very beautiful Jenny: a loving tribute to your uncle.
Best Wishes,
Hilary
Read full commentPosted in Moving Forward
You keep up the rhythm and
Posted on Thu, 25 Mar 2021
You keep up the rhythm and rhyme so well in this poem, Luigi. I am not so keen on this new tech stuff : Ipods, streaming, it's all Greek to me !
Hilary
Read full commentPosted in A Lack of Application(s)
Hi Rhiannon,
Posted on Fri, 26 Mar 2021
Hi Rhiannon,
Lovely little poem. I liked the image of the spoke of a wheel and the picture too to illustrate it. Nice and whimsical !!!
hilary
Read full commentPosted in Looking down on the city’s departures …
Hi Jenny,
Posted on Sat, 27 Mar 2021
Hi Jenny,
Loved the section about the dormice and then the beautiful garden imagery : super !!!
hilary
Read full commentPosted in Pastiche
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