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I have 248 stories published in 21 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 481277 times and 19 of my stories have been cherry picked.
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hilary west

I have been writing for over 25 years and some of my work is on here. In my time I have written novels, short stories, poetry, plays and assorted ephemera. I hope you enjoy your time discovering my site.

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Mad Smithers and the Government's All Under Control Plan : Episode 5

Mad Smithers 5 (At the Institute) ANDREX : Was this a trick, Malcolm? DARREN : Yeh, there are no game boys. MALCOLM : Look, boys, the brainwashing...

Mad Smithers and the Government's All Under Control Plan : Episode 4

Mad Smithers 4 HARDCASTLE : So what have you found out, Smithers, about the state of the nation’s hearts? SMITHERS : Too soft by far, Hardcastle. I...

Mad Smithers and the Government's All Under Control Plan : Episode 3

Mad Smithers 3 (Notice on wall says ERECTILE DYSFUNCTION CLINIC) (Smithers is sat in waiting area. A nurse stares at him while he is seated. As he...

Mad Smithers and the Government's All Under Control Plan : Episode 2

Mad Smithers 2 (At Loose Lucy’s Parlour) Smithers : It’s me, let me in. Loose Lucy : What do you want? How dare you show your face after kidnapping...

Mad Smithers and the Government's All Under Control Plan : Episode 1

Mad Smithers Episode 1 (At the Institute) Smithers : I must change society irrevocably, Malcolm. Malcolm : Is that the agenda, Smithers? Smithers :...

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171 of my comments have received 173 Great Feedback votes

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An engaging little ramble,

Posted on Thu, 02 Sep 2021

An engaging little ramble, Jenny. Well done!

hilary     smiley

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Posted in Trees Called To Me

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Hi,

Posted on Mon, 30 Aug 2021

Hi,

This was such an engaging piece of prose with many nice touches. I think the foreign climes are often an inspiration and this story proved this!

hilary west  

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Posted in Chinese Whispers (edited and updated, 2021)

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Hi Jenny,

Posted on Tue, 17 Aug 2021

Hi Jenny,

Lovely, wistful poem about getting older but still enjoying all the nature around you. Maybe you can't be as actively involved (all that digging) but you can still 'stand and stare' at the beauty of nature.

hilary     

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Posted in It's A Wonderful Life

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Nice, nostalgic poem on the

Posted on Tue, 17 Aug 2021

Nice, nostalgic poem on the end of childhood. As always a well-written poem that is very evocative of times gone by.

hilary     

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Posted in Leaving Home

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Hi,

Posted on Tue, 03 Aug 2021

Hi,

This is a lovely poem with marvellous language. And what is normal? I think we all know it doesn't really exist in this multifarious world where everything is heterogeneous.

hilary       

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Posted in Saccades of Sands

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Hi Jenny.

Posted on Wed, 04 Aug 2021

Hi Jenny.

This is absolutely beautiful, Jenny. You have excelled yourself. I would be very proud to have written this one, ah woe is me. Very well done !!!

Best Wishes,

hilary        

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Posted in Foxy Till Dawn

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Hi,

Posted on Thu, 03 Jun 2021

Hi,

A lovely encomium to the hawthorn and economic too. I love the smell, it is so redolent of early summer! I remember it in hedgerows from aeons ago.

hilary   

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Posted in Hawthorn

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Hi,

Posted on Tue, 01 Jun 2021

Hi,

This is a fitting tribute to the man! You have a marvellous way with words. Quite brilliant.

hilary    

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Posted in Roy Batty (Tears in Rain)

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Hi Jenny,

Posted on Mon, 24 May 2021

Hi Jenny,

You are very good at recalling the past and seeing all those little details. A splendid little picture of times gone by.

hilary     

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Posted in When We Were Young

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Hi marandina,

Posted on Wed, 12 May 2021

Hi marandina,

Your poem is very true and very topical. It is the tragedy of our time.

hilary   

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Posted in The Last Elephant

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