hilary west

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I have 250 stories published in 21 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 497859 times and 19 of my stories have been cherry picked.
175 of my 1,330 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 177 votes

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hilary west

I have been writing for over 25 years and some of my work is on here. In my time I have written novels, short stories, poetry, plays and assorted ephemera. I hope you enjoy your time discovering my site.

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Mad Smithers and the Government's All Under Control Plan : Episode 7

Smithers 7 (At the Institute) SMITHERS : So, Malcolm, everybody has been brainwashed throughout the kingdom. MALCOLM : Yes that is correct. Together...

Mad Smithers and the Government's All Under Control Plan : Episode 6

Smithers 6 (At Loose Lucy’s Parlour) LOOSE LUCY : Oh, Luigi, how was it for you? LUIGI : As perfecta as my pasta. LOOSE LUCY : Do you know we have a...

Mad Smithers and the Government's All Under Control Plan : Episode 5

Mad Smithers 5 (At the Institute) ANDREX : Was this a trick, Malcolm? DARREN : Yeh, there are no game boys. MALCOLM : Look, boys, the brainwashing...

Mad Smithers and the Government's All Under Control Plan : Episode 4

Mad Smithers 4 HARDCASTLE : So what have you found out, Smithers, about the state of the nation’s hearts? SMITHERS : Too soft by far, Hardcastle. I...

Mad Smithers and the Government's All Under Control Plan : Episode 3

Mad Smithers 3 (Notice on wall says ERECTILE DYSFUNCTION CLINIC) (Smithers is sat in waiting area. A nurse stares at him while he is seated. As he...

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175 of my comments have received 177 Great Feedback votes

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At least she did the washing

Posted on Mon, 13 Sep 2021

At least she did the washing-up !!! An entertaining read.

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Posted in Macrobiotic Mayhem

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Hi Di,

Posted on Fri, 10 Sep 2021

Hi Di,

This got my mouth watering. I really liked the juicy feel to it and also the phrase 'dullfull' when talking of less glamourous potatoes. A little gem !

hilary    

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Posted in preserving time

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Hi Jenny,

Posted on Tue, 07 Sep 2021

Hi Jenny,

You capture the turbulence of nature in this autumnal poem and the dissolution of colour that night brings, only to reappear in another day!

hilary     

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Posted in Yin And Yang Of Autumn Forest

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Hi Jenny,

Posted on Sat, 28 Aug 2021

Hi Jenny,

It is very interesting to see your thought patterns down on paper. Some lovely phrases in this, too numerous to mention!

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Posted in Curious Ambiance

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An engaging little ramble,

Posted on Thu, 02 Sep 2021

An engaging little ramble, Jenny. Well done!

hilary     smiley

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Posted in Trees Called To Me

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Hi,

Posted on Mon, 30 Aug 2021

Hi,

This was such an engaging piece of prose with many nice touches. I think the foreign climes are often an inspiration and this story proved this!

hilary west  

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Posted in Chinese Whispers (edited and updated, 2021)

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Hi Jenny,

Posted on Tue, 17 Aug 2021

Hi Jenny,

Lovely, wistful poem about getting older but still enjoying all the nature around you. Maybe you can't be as actively involved (all that digging) but you can still 'stand and stare' at the beauty of nature.

hilary     

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Posted in It's A Wonderful Life

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Nice, nostalgic poem on the

Posted on Tue, 17 Aug 2021

Nice, nostalgic poem on the end of childhood. As always a well-written poem that is very evocative of times gone by.

hilary     

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Posted in Leaving Home

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Hi,

Posted on Tue, 03 Aug 2021

Hi,

This is a lovely poem with marvellous language. And what is normal? I think we all know it doesn't really exist in this multifarious world where everything is heterogeneous.

hilary       

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Posted in Saccades of Sands

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Hi Jenny.

Posted on Wed, 04 Aug 2021

Hi Jenny.

This is absolutely beautiful, Jenny. You have excelled yourself. I would be very proud to have written this one, ah woe is me. Very well done !!!

Best Wishes,

hilary        

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Posted in Foxy Till Dawn

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