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I have 251 stories published in 21 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 588930 times and 19 of my stories have been cherry picked.
184 of my 1,343 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 186 votes

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hilary west

I have been writing for over 25 years and some of my work is on here. In my time I have written novels, short stories, poetry, plays and assorted ephemera. I hope you enjoy your time discovering my site.

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The Florrie and Jack Dialogues : A Turn for the Worse ( Episode 8)

A Turn for the Worse Florrie : I know this sounds funny, Jack, but I am disappointed. Jack : About Trevor and Keith? F : Yes. J : It couldn’t last,...

The Florrie and Jack Dialogues : A Gay Pride (Episode 7)

A Gay Pride Florrie : Trevor is out of jail, Jack. Jack : I’m glad, Mum. It must have been so different from Wolverhampton university. F : You are...

The Florrie and Jack Dialogues : Coming Out (Episode 6)

Coming Out Jack : Any more news from the prison, Mum? Florrie : Your Aunt Cilla was telling me Trevor is so involved with the writers group it takes...

The Florrie and Jack Dialogues : A Prison Romance (Episode 5)

A Prison Romance Florrie : More rumours, Jack. Jack : What do you expect in prison? F : Well, I didn’t expect to learn from a prison guard my nephew...

The Florrie and Jack Dialogues : The Write Stuff : (Episode 4)

The Write Stuff Florrie : Do you know, Jack, your Aunt Cilla was telling me Trevor has lost the will to live in that prison? Jack : Two years is an...

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184 of my comments have received 186 Great Feedback votes

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Hi,

Posted on Tue, 01 Jun 2021

Hi,

This is a fitting tribute to the man! You have a marvellous way with words. Quite brilliant.

hilary    

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Posted in Roy Batty (Tears in Rain)

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Hi Jenny,

Posted on Mon, 24 May 2021

Hi Jenny,

You are very good at recalling the past and seeing all those little details. A splendid little picture of times gone by.

hilary     

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Posted in When We Were Young

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Hi marandina,

Posted on Wed, 12 May 2021

Hi marandina,

Your poem is very true and very topical. It is the tragedy of our time.

hilary   

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Posted in The Last Elephant

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Hi Jenny,

Posted on Thu, 13 May 2021

Hi Jenny,

This is a lovely poem of fond memories : soft as a summer shower! Nice one.

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Posted in Capturing Garden Memories

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One of your best, Jenny. You

Posted on Thu, 06 May 2021

One of your best, Jenny. You aren't thinking of giving up this mortal coil, are you? Strong presentiments of passing yet with the beauty of nature giving real hope.

Hilary   

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Posted in Resting Place

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Hi Rhiannon,

Posted on Mon, 03 May 2021

Hi Rhiannon,

You have encapsulated the calm of the bay and also what it can be like in stormy conditions. Lovely painting too. There are many lovely places in Pembrokeshire! Hope you feel better soon.

hilary     

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Posted in Coastal Cottage (Pembrokeshire)

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Hi marandina,

Posted on Tue, 27 Apr 2021

Hi marandina,

I liked the alliteration in this at the beginning and the rest of it showed such imagination. Nice one!

hilary     

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Posted in Footsteps on Mars

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This is a haunting poem full

Posted on Sat, 01 May 2021

This is a haunting poem full of feeling. So sorry for your loss!

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Posted in Impaired

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Hi Jenny.

Posted on Tue, 27 Apr 2021

Hi Jenny.

The sunrise is truly inspirational, isn't it? This was described very well ! I remember going away for a few days to the seaside and waking up early I saw a beautiful sunrise from my room over the sea. It's something that stays...

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Posted in Sunrise

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A poem from the heart: very

Posted on Wed, 14 Apr 2021

A poem from the heart: very well written !!!

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Posted in Setting Sons

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