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I have 250 stories published in 21 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 497859 times and 19 of my stories have been cherry picked.
175 of my 1,330 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 177 votes

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hilary west

I have been writing for over 25 years and some of my work is on here. In my time I have written novels, short stories, poetry, plays and assorted ephemera. I hope you enjoy your time discovering my site.

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Mad Smithers and the Government's All Under Control Plan : Episode 2

Mad Smithers 2 (At Loose Lucy’s Parlour) Smithers : It’s me, let me in. Loose Lucy : What do you want? How dare you show your face after kidnapping...

Mad Smithers and the Government's All Under Control Plan : Episode 1

Mad Smithers Episode 1 (At the Institute) Smithers : I must change society irrevocably, Malcolm. Malcolm : Is that the agenda, Smithers? Smithers :...

An Introduction : Mad Smithers and the Government's All Under Control Plan

MAD SMITHERS AND THE GOVERNMENT’S ALL UNDER CONTROL PLAN This bit of writing was originally intended as a comic strip but it never materialised. I...

The Florrie and Jack Dialogues : Final Curtain (Episode 9 - Conclusion)

Final Curtain Jack : I can’t believe it, Mum. Florrie : No, Jack, I’m devastated. My only nephew gunned down on the cusp of greatness. It was...

The Florrie and Jack Dialogues : A Turn for the Worse ( Episode 8)

A Turn for the Worse Florrie : I know this sounds funny, Jack, but I am disappointed. Jack : About Trevor and Keith? F : Yes. J : It couldn’t last,...

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175 of my comments have received 177 Great Feedback votes

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Hi,

Posted on Thu, 03 Jun 2021

Hi,

A lovely encomium to the hawthorn and economic too. I love the smell, it is so redolent of early summer! I remember it in hedgerows from aeons ago.

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Posted in Hawthorn

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Hi,

Posted on Tue, 01 Jun 2021

Hi,

This is a fitting tribute to the man! You have a marvellous way with words. Quite brilliant.

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Posted in Roy Batty (Tears in Rain)

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Hi Jenny,

Posted on Mon, 24 May 2021

Hi Jenny,

You are very good at recalling the past and seeing all those little details. A splendid little picture of times gone by.

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Posted in When We Were Young

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Hi marandina,

Posted on Wed, 12 May 2021

Hi marandina,

Your poem is very true and very topical. It is the tragedy of our time.

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Posted in The Last Elephant

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Hi Jenny,

Posted on Thu, 13 May 2021

Hi Jenny,

This is a lovely poem of fond memories : soft as a summer shower! Nice one.

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Posted in Capturing Garden Memories

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One of your best, Jenny. You

Posted on Thu, 06 May 2021

One of your best, Jenny. You aren't thinking of giving up this mortal coil, are you? Strong presentiments of passing yet with the beauty of nature giving real hope.

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Posted in Resting Place

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Hi Rhiannon,

Posted on Mon, 03 May 2021

Hi Rhiannon,

You have encapsulated the calm of the bay and also what it can be like in stormy conditions. Lovely painting too. There are many lovely places in Pembrokeshire! Hope you feel better soon.

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Posted in Coastal Cottage (Pembrokeshire)

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Hi marandina,

Posted on Tue, 27 Apr 2021

Hi marandina,

I liked the alliteration in this at the beginning and the rest of it showed such imagination. Nice one!

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Posted in Footsteps on Mars

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This is a haunting poem full

Posted on Sat, 01 May 2021

This is a haunting poem full of feeling. So sorry for your loss!

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Posted in Impaired

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Hi Jenny.

Posted on Tue, 27 Apr 2021

Hi Jenny.

The sunrise is truly inspirational, isn't it? This was described very well ! I remember going away for a few days to the seaside and waking up early I saw a beautiful sunrise from my room over the sea. It's something that stays...

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