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I have 1997 stories published in 16 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 3691413 times and 612 of my stories have been cherry picked.
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Cherry

So near, so far

Unmasked smile eyes interlock through glass awhile bright twinkle, blown kiss – its touch they miss, and chatter lost – another cost for young and...
Gold cherry

Coastal Cottage (Pembrokeshire)

(painting J Maddocks) White-washed cottage … Sometimes ocean calm … sometimes grey and wild …
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Gentle and Mighty

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] He’s gentle and kind, he’s mighty and just. Seek Jesus and find He’s One you can trust. This man stilled the...
Cherry

Roaming the world, and beyond

I’d like to go to deserts and see the sand dunes shift. I’d like to visit jungles, and on the ocean drift. I’d love to see an iceberg, and polar bears – not near! …

A yellow world

She felt like vigorously colouring in, some energetic pressing back and forth, and filling in, not delicately shading different colours in, and proudly finished and presented – a yellow rainbow, yellow cloud …
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1453 of my comments have received 1495 Great Feedback votes

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You have the ability to

Posted on Mon, 31 Oct 2016

You have the ability to squeeze in a lot of interesting detail to keep the reader's attention, Elsie. Having done quite a bit of distribution of leaflets from chapel, I know the feeling of suddenly the variety of steps, paths, letterboxes all...

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Posted in A Tour of My Neighbourhood

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So easy for a situation to

Posted on Sat, 29 Oct 2016

So easy for a situation to escalate when there is tension and a bit of distrust and resentment. 'The solution, it was decided, is straightforward replies with honesty during these questioning periods.' seems that there was a calming...

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Posted in Chet and the Prisoners - 18

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I can't remember whether Toyo

Posted on Fri, 28 Oct 2016

I can't remember whether Toyo's wife is Japanese. If so, it seems hard about not reading anything in Japanese, but I suppose they just don't have enough fluent Japanese readers to check out what is being read? Friendship like this between the...

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Posted in Chet and the Prisoners - 17

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Richard, Would this be a kite

Posted on Tue, 25 Oct 2016

Richard, Would this be a kite, or buzzard, or …? Rhiannon

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Posted in I Am Strength

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Neatly written again. I guess

Posted on Tue, 25 Oct 2016

Neatly written again. I guess even if the arrow in the eye were mythical, it would seem to be symbolic of the conquest. Rhiannon

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Posted in KING HAROLD GODWINSON

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The German Government soon

Posted on Sat, 22 Oct 2016

The German Government soon rewarded him with a detainee officer’s pay of $2.50 per week.” Does that mean he was a prisoner of war not an internee? Or, I suppose, maybe it means he was in US at the outbreak of war, so wouldn't be...

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Posted in Chet and the Prisoners - 12

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 … but the signs of the new

Posted on Fri, 21 Oct 2016

 … but the signs of the new cloaking to come are there in the buds!

I like the encouragement to pause a moment, and listen, look at something more closely, Richard, and 'visiting feral feathers' has its humour! Rhiannon

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Posted in A Tree Branch

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Hi, Richard. I like 'wept'.

Posted on Thu, 20 Oct 2016

Hi, Richard. I like 'wept'.

'Follow me' is for others to click on as everyone has a section (under 'Read' on the right hand side of the screen) of 'Authors you follow'. If you click on anyone else's 'Follow me' their link should then be on...

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Posted in Environmental Interlude

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Interesting little picture. I

Posted on Tue, 18 Oct 2016

Interesting little picture. I hadn't heard the word 'polliwog' for tadpole before. Rhiannon

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Posted in The Toe

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Much of interest and

Posted on Mon, 17 Oct 2016

Much of interest and informative here. I felt the ease in temperature a little with the snow falling. When he mentions making the furniture, I remembered part of my father's letter about his war experiences when they made some furniture, and...

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Posted in Chet and the Prisoners - 8

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