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I have 1997 stories published in 16 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 3690825 times and 612 of my stories have been cherry picked.
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Shiny Brown

Rain or sun we’ll have fun in the squelchy and squishy jump and splash it thickly melted-chocolate sticky of the path in the wood today: bluebells...
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Elusive Silver

An enigmatic colour this on the scales of a herring or a ‘silverfish,’ and the reflecting sheen of a mirror’s screen, greyer than white, whiter than...
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His Majesty

I may choose to be a loner, I may hide my past and plans; but I can’t flee my Creator, every inmost thought … Power and love of God consider, when you feel he does not care; he alone wise help can render, strength renew: persist in prayer.

The Impossible Move

They seem to think life started in the sea – somehow, but plants appeared on land, and then – unplanned some moving creatures in the water thought...

Supernaturally kind

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] The gospel of peace for a world full of grief – good news we release of help and relief from One high and mighty … No spirit mysterious imagined, unknown. …

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1453 of my comments have received 1495 Great Feedback votes

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Some vivid descriptions again

Posted on Sat, 07 Jan 2017

Some vivid descriptions again. I think the birds here don't sing much at dawn until the spring.
Rhiannon

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Posted in Promises of Spring.

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This is fascinating, though I

Posted on Thu, 29 Dec 2016

This is fascinating, though I'm not one for nonsense poetry on the whole, but my husband was saying recently that his memories of Jaberwocky were that he thought most of the words had derivation from real words, if you could go into it, and just...

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Posted in Tim Timpany - Poetry Monthly

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I especially liked – It sees

Posted on Mon, 19 Dec 2016

I especially liked – It sees the joy that could be, amid the chaos that is

A troubled world, but even
'the smile we give a stranger The hand extended in friendship The smallest act of kindness That requests no...

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Posted in The Christmas Heart

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I enjoyed your singing word

Posted on Mon, 05 Dec 2016

I enjoyed your singing word-play 'nonsense' Elsie. Keyboards can be enslaving and mind-and-limb numbing. Though I felt the burst of freedom and lively activity could get rather self-centred and hedonistic?! Rhiannon

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Posted in Humour - Wasting me foddle dee doddle dee time (nonsense rhyme for Poetry Monthly)

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 I think of rhymes as part of

Posted on Mon, 28 Nov 2016

 I think of rhymes as part of what makes verse 'sing' or something like music, and, as I think your intimating, does help to clip it into  memory, not heavy and forced, but slipped in unobtrusively, to make it scarper, or dance as you say! ...

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Posted in Opinion - Five Reasons for Rhyme

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Maturing friendship with age,

Posted on Wed, 23 Nov 2016

Maturing friendship with age, from sharing the enjoyment of gardens and food to music, with brief attempts at a bit of current affairs and worries' discussions in the middle. Rhiannon

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Posted in The old Heifer and the Two old Bulls at Peace

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You touch on information

Posted on Sat, 12 Nov 2016

You touch on information about many different issues here. Songs can be very rousing, eg when soldiers are having to go into physical conflict which may lead to bad injury or death.

I love singing, as you probably realise! And particularly...

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Posted in Autobiography - To Revolution Singing

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Very enjoyable read. Love the

Posted on Sun, 06 Nov 2016

Very enjoyable read. Love the area, from taking my youngest two on lots of frequent short breaks exploring. I felt on tenterhooks for you carrying that tray so determinedly! 

The toilet reminded me of a holiday in France when I was about...

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Posted in Studland, missing fingers, a rabid dog called Bob and a privy

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Nice to 'see'/'hear you again

Posted on Sat, 05 Nov 2016

Nice to 'see'/'hear you again. and cleverly twisting your mathematical words around!

I take it this is about moving forward after loss, while showing how much is lost. warm greetings, and prayer. Rhiannon

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Posted in Divided

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Oh, I do like this. Simple

Posted on Mon, 31 Oct 2016

Oh, I do like this. Simple and short verbal picture and message. And we all need to take to heart that the seeds of honesty; respect; integrity; truth, are the things that work, in the long run. Rhiannon

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Posted in Autumn Colours

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