Time Is Ticking

Cherry

By forest_for_ever

Mon, 20 Aug 2018
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Time Is Ticking

 

Metronomic, a watcher marks every moment

Essence of life breathed in at birth, a race to run

Ascending or descending at life’s end, the clock stops ticking

Saint or sinner, sheep or goat

Under the gaze of my higher power

Rapture one, or rapture two

Every deed in detail; time is ticking

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Poem
The reflections on life by a middle-aged man
Inspiration Point (work that responds to our weekly writing cue)

Comments

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Well done! While the clock ticks, we've time to realise we'll never measure up to our desires, or his, but can turn for grace for the rest of the ticking time and for when the clock stops! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by airyfairy on

Lovely contribution to the IP.  I like the way that 'ticking' at the end reflects 'metronomic' at the start.  Very well thought out.