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I have 2075 stories published in 17 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 4672148 times and 645 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1512 of my 13,236 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1556 votes

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The lesser light

What a wonderful moon we have: silvery glow – we watch it grow and shrink, rise and glide, and slowly sink calm for lovers and travellers’ guide in...
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Stopped in their tracks

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] Stunned by the clarity, stopped in their tracks, speaks with authority – wisdom attracts. Wise, good and...

When is a pipe a tu_ _?

… it’s an underground train. Some people call it a ‘pipe’ ”. !
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No longer gold

Coal has been gold in winter’s cold: red flames to warm in chill of storm. In cities smoke collected to choke, so coal that was mined was mostly...

Disinterested

"I like to sit on the fence agree with all supporting none – it’s an awkward perch, for with a thoughltess lurch I can fall on my nose and my...
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1512 of my comments have received 1556 Great Feedback votes

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Richard, you only press 'mark

Posted on Mon, 18 Dec 2017

Richard, you only press 'mark this comment as great feedback' if you feel it has been a particularly helpful comment. Then a blue flier comes up to indicate you or someone else has found that comment helpful. If you click on where it says 'follow...

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Posted in A Bear

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Picture of a bond. Rhiannon

Posted on Mon, 18 Dec 2017

Picture of a bond. Rhiannon

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Posted in A Bear

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Very difficult to attempt

Posted on Tue, 05 Dec 2017

Very difficult to attempt this. Getting to know the lad must have helped you try to convey the way his thoughts would be vocalised in what would be to us a fairly disjointed way.

One little thing. I thought he stood firm on refusing...

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Posted in Son of Fred (Part 1)

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Clicking the 'follow' button

Posted on Thu, 30 Nov 2017

Clicking the 'follow' button on a story you read puts the name of the author on your personal 'authors you follow' page – listed under 'Read' on the right hand side of the page.

I'm not sure what you mean about a new heading. But if you...

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Posted in Jesus ... I Am

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Richard, there is much of

Posted on Thu, 30 Nov 2017

Richard, there is much of interest and opening up of the Way here, but do you realise you've put it all into the comment box a second time? Rhiannon

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Posted in Jesus ... I Am

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Kids learning the

Posted on Wed, 29 Nov 2017

Kids learning the difficulties of being 'king'!

Not a comfortable job if all out to remove you. Actually good leadership is not so much an honour as exceedingly hard work I would think! Rhiannon

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Posted in Being King

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Delightful pictures conveyed

Posted on Tue, 28 Nov 2017

Delightful pictures conveyed in few words!

Good to see your work again, Richard. How are you all? Rhiannon

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Posted in I Lay in the Grass

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Enjoyed that, Graham! The

Posted on Sun, 26 Nov 2017

Enjoyed that, Graham! The mixture of the other creatures going about their routine business, but to the one trying to sleep wakefulness is nonsense, such a strange place.Liked the description of the closed flowers! Rhiannon

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Posted in Silly O'clock

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Hi, Jane. Do you usually go

Posted on Tue, 31 Oct 2017

Hi, Jane. Do you usually go for city/culture(?) breaks because you have so much of the open countyside in your daily life and work? and then feel withdrawal symptoms from your pets too? Rhiannon

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Posted in Silva in Lisbon

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Many really thoughtful

Posted on Sun, 17 Sep 2017

Many really thoughtful descriptions. I particularly liked 'emerald mosses' myriad mound like the backs of giants beneath the ground' . Very evocative of those lush lumpy humps in the damp woods!

I sometimes lost the connections,...

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Posted in time travelling

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