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I have 2167 stories published in 17 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 5648558 times and 681 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1551 of my 13,420 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1600 votes

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Cherry

Diamonds of truth

I remember a child (about 8 years old) in Sunday School saying something like ‘It’s a good idea to say you believe in God – if it’s wrong you won’t...

Recognising our ignorance

The wisest know how ignorant they are … But He with power to hold within his hands the wind, … knows everything, all things He understands – so listen! to the truth He’s told …

Happy Weary Industry

Labourers wearily industrious in farm, field and hill - will they more leisure gain if machines take the strain? Industrial revolution. Folks flock...
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Present Grace, Future Perfect

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] … a leper … He touched him – no infection passed, …from Jesus cleansing flowed to cure … A man was paralysed …down through the roof they lowered him … First, Jesus pardoned him – some sneered …
Cherry

Illumination leaking in …

Confined to bed, an open window, a far-away hoot …
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1551 of my comments have received 1600 Great Feedback votes

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You have caught here the

Posted on Tue, 22 May 2018

You have caught here the feeling of looking down on your life and family's ways when far apart, and the place you've just left, like if one could see a film catching each on their travels. It reminded me of one of my children (when very young)...

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Posted in On Leaving Home

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Very clever! I love seeing

Posted on Wed, 23 May 2018

Very clever! I love seeing those first leaves emerging, and the simple cotyledon leaves often making food so that the more complex leaves can then grow. I liked this very much. The fragility and freshness of new leaves is lovely too isn't it, and...

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Posted in cotyledons

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Oh, I really liked that -

Posted on Tue, 22 May 2018

Oh, I really liked that - just thinking of the lovely blossom simply. Short lived, but still lovely as you describe when it first falls, before trampling and mixing with … . Rhiannon

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Posted in on the way to the letterbox

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I did have a little look, and

Posted on Sat, 14 Apr 2018

I did have a little look, and saw a suggestion that pale colours can use the weaker sun better, and are thereore more prevalant in the spring. Will return if gather any more thought on it!! Rhiannon

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Posted in Spring Yellows

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I've been away. Just seen

Posted on Thu, 12 Apr 2018

I've been away. Just seen this. It seems to speak of an attempt to return to where one once knew a welcome, but for some reason there is no acceptance, no resonance. I also thought the line 'the only growing is old.' very telling, and...

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Posted in wind

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! I love to see the crinkled

Posted on Sat, 24 Mar 2018

! I love to see the crinkled up little leaves poking or 'squirting' out! So delicate often of colour and texture too. Rhiannon

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Posted in Growth Spurt

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A lovely idea for Poetry

Posted on Sun, 18 Mar 2018

A lovely idea for Poetry Monthly. If we could donate our heart with its feelings and songs, how would we cultivate it?! Rhiannon

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Posted in Heart Songs ( Poetry Monthly

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 A lovely picture of a family

Posted on Thu, 15 Mar 2018

 A lovely picture of a family happy in the grace, values, and life given by Jesus. Rhiannon

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Posted in Everyone Can Have Life

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A dreamy time of day, and you

Posted on Fri, 09 Mar 2018

A dreamy time of day, and you've caught the sights rarely noticed and descibed them in such interesting ways. I felt the quiet of an evening stroll! Rhiannon

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Posted in Walking home from shopping 8/3/18

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I see you've done some work

Posted on Sat, 03 Mar 2018

I see you've done some work on this, smoothing, clarifying and introducing yet more ideas I think. Lots of interesting metaphors and observations. Personally, I feel you could in time probably make the reading even smoother, but that would...

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Posted in predator (just re uploaded)

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