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Promised from the beginning
[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] A God who is almighty, a God who does not lie, a God who knows the future, and promised to supply eternal...
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Sheep, flowers and sunlight
Park the car, hungry excited sheep and lambs run down to the gate …the conical steep wooded hill … what is that odd stick-stalk at the side of the way? Soon a troupe of them –
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Folly forsakes the foundation
[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] Foundational truth from which wisdom flows is knowledge and reverence of the Being who knows the compass of truth …won’t carefully ponder … presuming there’s no-one far greater than we …
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Reliable Friends
Support that is bought can never be relied upon but … solid friendships forge …loyalties reliable ….
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When again …?
Hiding from bombs, … dreaming … kindness brings tears – hearts warmed and stilled. Strengthening hope, faith – war now on earth but halcyon days will come again …
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I see you've done some work
Posted on Sat, 03 Mar 2018
I see you've done some work on this, smoothing, clarifying and introducing yet more ideas I think. Lots of interesting metaphors and observations. Personally, I feel you could in time probably make the reading even smoother, but that would...
Read full commentPosted in predator (just re uploaded)
I think much of the time with
Posted on Fri, 02 Mar 2018
I think much of the time with dementia, or other types of memory loss, the self-awareness of that loss is quite limited, especially after the first stages. Sometimes it seems that much is lost that have been very superficial concerns, worries and...
Read full commentPosted in Lethe
Lovely picture. Reminder to
Posted on Fri, 23 Feb 2018
Lovely picture. Reminder to listen to the 'snowball of sounds'! The birds seem to know the season's making gentle progress don't they? I like the idea of their stitching. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in emperor's new clothes
You still seem to be inside
Posted on Wed, 21 Feb 2018
You still seem to be inside his skin, bringing to life so many difficulties of adolescence and the struggles of a rather isolated lad with fixations and not a lot of homely understanding and support. And the difficulties of all in the secondary...
Read full commentPosted in Jack Mutant - Which Way is Down? (part twelve)
The Bible book of Proverbs
Posted on Tue, 20 Feb 2018
The Bible book of Proverbs has so much about using words, doesn't it? Empty gabbling (like your Niagra falls illustration), words that hurt unnecessarily, words that are healing (like your productive land illustration) and gentle. eg 'A word...
Read full commentPosted in More Words
I guess the enjoyment of snow
Posted on Mon, 19 Feb 2018
I guess the enjoyment of snow gets more child-like again as we get older, as the need to travel for work doesn't bring the frustrations usually. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in The Snow
Some thoughtful leading to
Posted on Sat, 17 Feb 2018
Some thoughtful leading to thinking about the blessing of the commandments, so important as a foundation in life, and to realising our need of his forgiveness for our failings, through Jesus's death and resurrection. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Vacation Bible School (Book 2)
I so liked your pun on the
Posted on Wed, 14 Feb 2018
I so liked your pun on the Inspiration Point!! And I had to look up 'Freshet', which I must try to remember! Especially liked the last line, and the wealth of alliteration.
I was a bit puzzled by 'murmer curdles' ('murmur'?) and...
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Real friendship need a real
Posted on Tue, 13 Feb 2018
Real friendship need a real sharing, and caring, not a 'face-book' like façade or platitudes. It is rare, but precious, and knows when to visit, when to leave, when to speak, understands, often through going through difficulties together....
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This seems in such stark
Posted on Sun, 04 Feb 2018
This seems in such stark contrast to what you describe as your beautiful Solway plain. Both the person and the countryside can be damaged, can come back to freshness. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Dope
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