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I have 2028 stories published in 16 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 4207305 times and 627 of my stories have been cherry picked.
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Wherever

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] It is too wonderful to plumb how wide and full your scanning sight, your knowledge of my inmost thought, in...
Cherry

Shiny Brown

Rain or sun we’ll have fun in the squelchy and squishy jump and splash it thickly melted-chocolate sticky of the path in the wood today: bluebells...
Cherry

Elusive Silver

An enigmatic colour this on the scales of a herring or a ‘silverfish,’ and the reflecting sheen of a mirror’s screen, greyer than white, whiter than...
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His Majesty

I may choose to be a loner, I may hide my past and plans; but I can’t flee my Creator, every inmost thought … Power and love of God consider, when you feel he does not care; he alone wise help can render, strength renew: persist in prayer.

The Impossible Move

They seem to think life started in the sea – somehow, but plants appeared on land, and then – unplanned some moving creatures in the water thought...

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1481 of my comments have received 1524 Great Feedback votes

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Nice to see you back. Your

Posted on Thu, 16 Jun 2016

Nice to see you back. Your verse has a dreamy quality somehow, of persevering when the way has been hard, but there is comfort and some stability, and enjoyment in the surroundings even in the dark and rainy days.

I do like the 'fat...

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Posted in Gloaming

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To have voice recordings, not

Posted on Sat, 04 Jun 2016

To have voice recordings, not just photographs, must be rather nice, and I suppose especially something personal and memorable like that. Rhiannon

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Posted in Drive carefully

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Another marathon, Terry. I

Posted on Sat, 14 May 2016

Another marathon, Terry. I get the impression it must be very satisfying to get all that rhythm and rhyme of words flowing, whatever the meaning.

As you know surreal isn't my medium, and I tend to try to work out every detail that's going...

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Posted in Rough Roads To Roam (Poetry Monthly)

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But you had enjoyed the

Posted on Wed, 27 Apr 2016

But you had enjoyed the sharing and the watching, and stimulating each other's thinking of such things. As for eternity, I'm sure the new creation will have just as wonderful things to marvel at! Rhiannon

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Posted in T'is the Season...

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"Sometimes I sits and thinks,

Posted on Tue, 26 Apr 2016

"Sometimes I sits and thinks, and sometimes I just sits…" or 'Stop the world, I want to get off, for a minute!'
Seriously, a nice picture of relaxation. Rhiannon

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Posted in Can I Just be...

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How you picture the flashing

Posted on Mon, 25 Apr 2016

How you picture the flashing thoughts filming through the mind in a second.

Lovely last two lines. Rhiannon

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Posted in Diagnosis a True Beginning

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Evokes the warmth and

Posted on Fri, 22 Apr 2016

Evokes the warmth and relaxation and hum of a summer day, where so much is growing and fruitful and living anew. Rhiannon

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Posted in Where the Bee Sucks

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Thank you for the reminder

Posted on Tue, 19 Apr 2016

Thank you for the reminder that it is Parkinson's Awareness Week, and for the perseverance of the two of you, and your daughter's input and willingness in the background. As you say, the brain is such a complex organ, and there seem to be...

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Posted in Exactly What is Parkinson's, Anyway?

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I've just noticed the 'Poetry

Posted on Sat, 09 Apr 2016

I've just noticed the 'Poetry Monthly' section, and so noticed this. You've packed a lot in cleverly. I don't agree with evolutionary assumptions, but in a now 'fallen/damaged' world the poor housefly does show us such a mixture of beauty and...

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Posted in Musca Domestica (Poetry Monthly)

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Chock-full to bursting with

Posted on Thu, 07 Apr 2016

Chock-full to bursting with so much to think about, things to laugh about, things to appreciate of your struggles, be drawn back with you to happy memories of young-mother days (but long forgotten the struggles and insecurities of those times)....

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Posted in Not Quite Fern Hill (Poetry Monthly)

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