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I have 2075 stories published in 17 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 4673785 times and 645 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1512 of my 13,237 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1556 votes

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Wisdom for the Rich

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] Pressured, and troubled by increase of wealth, … Is it secured, will it be quite enough? Those who are envious don’t realise – it’s tough! …

Star Wars

Fame breeds jealousies … tongues claw and fight.
Cherry

Simple things

Busy, busy working frenzy … no time to spare to stop for simple things …

Soul Food

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] Having fasted, Jesus, hungry heard the tempter tell him to ‘Turn the stones to bread, for You are God the...
Cherry

A Winning Handshake

Always in trouble, mischievous, gullible, embittered, a rebel – but sport brought a medal; in a dream he went forward to receive the award, extended his arm for the usual handshake …

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1512 of my comments have received 1556 Great Feedback votes

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You touch on information

Posted on Sat, 12 Nov 2016

You touch on information about many different issues here. Songs can be very rousing, eg when soldiers are having to go into physical conflict which may lead to bad injury or death.

I love singing, as you probably realise! And particularly...

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Posted in Autobiography - To Revolution Singing

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Very enjoyable read. Love the

Posted on Sun, 06 Nov 2016

Very enjoyable read. Love the area, from taking my youngest two on lots of frequent short breaks exploring. I felt on tenterhooks for you carrying that tray so determinedly! 

The toilet reminded me of a holiday in France when I was about...

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Posted in Studland, missing fingers, a rabid dog called Bob and a privy

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Nice to 'see'/'hear you again

Posted on Sat, 05 Nov 2016

Nice to 'see'/'hear you again. and cleverly twisting your mathematical words around!

I take it this is about moving forward after loss, while showing how much is lost. warm greetings, and prayer. Rhiannon

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Posted in Divided

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Oh, I do like this. Simple

Posted on Mon, 31 Oct 2016

Oh, I do like this. Simple and short verbal picture and message. And we all need to take to heart that the seeds of honesty; respect; integrity; truth, are the things that work, in the long run. Rhiannon

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Posted in Autumn Colours

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You have the ability to

Posted on Mon, 31 Oct 2016

You have the ability to squeeze in a lot of interesting detail to keep the reader's attention, Elsie. Having done quite a bit of distribution of leaflets from chapel, I know the feeling of suddenly the variety of steps, paths, letterboxes all...

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Posted in A Tour of My Neighbourhood

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So easy for a situation to

Posted on Sat, 29 Oct 2016

So easy for a situation to escalate when there is tension and a bit of distrust and resentment. 'The solution, it was decided, is straightforward replies with honesty during these questioning periods.' seems that there was a calming...

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Posted in Chet and the Prisoners - 18

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I can't remember whether Toyo

Posted on Fri, 28 Oct 2016

I can't remember whether Toyo's wife is Japanese. If so, it seems hard about not reading anything in Japanese, but I suppose they just don't have enough fluent Japanese readers to check out what is being read? Friendship like this between the...

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Posted in Chet and the Prisoners - 17

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Richard, Would this be a kite

Posted on Tue, 25 Oct 2016

Richard, Would this be a kite, or buzzard, or …? Rhiannon

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Posted in I Am Strength

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Neatly written again. I guess

Posted on Tue, 25 Oct 2016

Neatly written again. I guess even if the arrow in the eye were mythical, it would seem to be symbolic of the conquest. Rhiannon

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Posted in KING HAROLD GODWINSON

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The German Government soon

Posted on Sat, 22 Oct 2016

The German Government soon rewarded him with a detainee officer’s pay of $2.50 per week.” Does that mean he was a prisoner of war not an internee? Or, I suppose, maybe it means he was in US at the outbreak of war, so wouldn't be...

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Posted in Chet and the Prisoners - 12

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