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I have 2115 stories published in 17 collections on the site.
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Procrastination

It may be too late, but never too soon, to say you are sorry, and get a duty done. Never too soon to remember your promise, but better late than...

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An attempt at some fun poems during December on the day's numbers, for children

Preparation Time

Before we celebrate let’s pause and wait … too much too soon is no celebration just exhaustion!

“Your kingdom come”

You do not feel God near, but know he sees and knows and understands, and soon you’ll hear his voice, freed from your woes. In awe of all his power...

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1545 of my comments have received 1593 Great Feedback votes

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I enjoyed your singing word

Posted on Mon, 05 Dec 2016

I enjoyed your singing word-play 'nonsense' Elsie. Keyboards can be enslaving and mind-and-limb numbing. Though I felt the burst of freedom and lively activity could get rather self-centred and hedonistic?! Rhiannon

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Posted in Humour - Wasting me foddle dee doddle dee time (nonsense rhyme for Poetry Monthly)

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 I think of rhymes as part of

Posted on Mon, 28 Nov 2016

 I think of rhymes as part of what makes verse 'sing' or something like music, and, as I think your intimating, does help to clip it into  memory, not heavy and forced, but slipped in unobtrusively, to make it scarper, or dance as you say! ...

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Posted in Opinion - Five Reasons for Rhyme

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Maturing friendship with age,

Posted on Wed, 23 Nov 2016

Maturing friendship with age, from sharing the enjoyment of gardens and food to music, with brief attempts at a bit of current affairs and worries' discussions in the middle. Rhiannon

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Posted in The old Heifer and the Two old Bulls at Peace

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You touch on information

Posted on Sat, 12 Nov 2016

You touch on information about many different issues here. Songs can be very rousing, eg when soldiers are having to go into physical conflict which may lead to bad injury or death.

I love singing, as you probably realise! And particularly...

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Posted in Autobiography - To Revolution Singing

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Very enjoyable read. Love the

Posted on Sun, 06 Nov 2016

Very enjoyable read. Love the area, from taking my youngest two on lots of frequent short breaks exploring. I felt on tenterhooks for you carrying that tray so determinedly! 

The toilet reminded me of a holiday in France when I was about...

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Posted in Studland, missing fingers, a rabid dog called Bob and a privy

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Nice to 'see'/'hear you again

Posted on Sat, 05 Nov 2016

Nice to 'see'/'hear you again. and cleverly twisting your mathematical words around!

I take it this is about moving forward after loss, while showing how much is lost. warm greetings, and prayer. Rhiannon

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Posted in Divided

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Oh, I do like this. Simple

Posted on Mon, 31 Oct 2016

Oh, I do like this. Simple and short verbal picture and message. And we all need to take to heart that the seeds of honesty; respect; integrity; truth, are the things that work, in the long run. Rhiannon

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Posted in Autumn Colours

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You have the ability to

Posted on Mon, 31 Oct 2016

You have the ability to squeeze in a lot of interesting detail to keep the reader's attention, Elsie. Having done quite a bit of distribution of leaflets from chapel, I know the feeling of suddenly the variety of steps, paths, letterboxes all...

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Posted in A Tour of My Neighbourhood

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So easy for a situation to

Posted on Sat, 29 Oct 2016

So easy for a situation to escalate when there is tension and a bit of distrust and resentment. 'The solution, it was decided, is straightforward replies with honesty during these questioning periods.' seems that there was a calming...

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Posted in Chet and the Prisoners - 18

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I can't remember whether Toyo

Posted on Fri, 28 Oct 2016

I can't remember whether Toyo's wife is Japanese. If so, it seems hard about not reading anything in Japanese, but I suppose they just don't have enough fluent Japanese readers to check out what is being read? Friendship like this between the...

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Posted in Chet and the Prisoners - 17

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