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Hugs
Two arms enfolding … but – … so – …
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Out of safety to please
Cosy bulbs lie safe below, spikes extend … white drop droops to shine and shiver …
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Dear Dad 4*
Dear Dad 4* I’m wondering what you would have thought of the present world difficulties. We were born just after the second world war finished, and...
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What makes you attractive?
[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] Mercy and faithfulness …Garland attractive … help me love righteousness, bringing me happiness, to others blessedness.
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Sure hope of a world free from …
[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] Our world has beauty, but viruses ravage; much love and kindness, but sins hurt and damage. Our world is...
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Very enjoyable going on the
Posted on Thu, 24 Sep 2015
Very enjoyable going on the walk with you again, and the sense of time and the kind of noticing that goes with the speed, or lack of it, of a walk makes it seem very real. A lovely Pick of the Day too.
Read full commentI've been trying to catch the...
Posted in In July
What a nice way to end, and
Posted on Sat, 19 Sep 2015
What a nice way to end, and even the advice she was able to give him, really just nudging him on the way he had been tending to go of realising how much these people had done for him, and his need of showing his changed attitudes.
Read full commentIt...
Posted in The Wanderlust Lady and the Door to Door Salesman - 41 The End
From an extremely brief
Posted on Mon, 14 Sep 2015
From an extremely brief offering to a very lengthy one! Certainly not sure I've followed it all (though as usual your rolling, rhythmic rhyming is very effective), but the thoughts that come to mind at the end are that there was a new start after...
Read full commentPosted in Boa's Ark
A dream like mix of memories
Posted on Sat, 12 Sep 2015
A dream like mix of memories and imaginings and hopes to ease the stress? (did you mean 'dreams of memories' rather than 'dreamt of memories' in the last stanza?)
gifting treasures in the form of shells and gleaming gems –- a...
Read full commentPosted in Did You...
Enjoyable scene as Bee says,
Posted on Sat, 12 Sep 2015
Enjoyable scene as Bee says, and a clever use of the IP without making the colours too dominant. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Eveningesque
Oh, the tragedy and agony
Posted on Fri, 11 Sep 2015
Oh, the tragedy and agony that no-one, especially the mother, was watching over her wisely, perceptively, nurturingly. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in The One...
How intriguing, Terry! There
Posted on Thu, 10 Sep 2015
How intriguing, Terry! There seems such a lot that can be unpacked from that: the fading things that come to life again, the relivening of the daze dismembering December (January sometimes seems a daze to people after the excitement of the end of...
Read full commentPosted in Remember
This brought back memories!
Posted on Wed, 09 Sep 2015
This brought back memories! My mother (recently widowed) coming awhile and calling herself 'chief cook and nappy washer'! the full buckets, and the feeling, 'I feel totally ignorant, but only I can really understand and help this child at all.'...
Read full commentPosted in The Weight of Snow
This is very moving, Terry –
Posted on Sun, 06 Sep 2015
This is very moving, Terry – and it 'moves' well! I take it it's metaphor after metaphor to show the distress, the emptiness, the tragedy of the feeling of hopelessness at losing her. And that certainly comes over, and especially with the...
Read full commentPosted in Alone Again
Interesting comment on a hard
Posted on Fri, 04 Sep 2015
Interesting comment on a hard day. You are one able to make the best of inactivity and even pain with observations and imaginative thought. This reminded me of that Poetry Monthly about windows. Your views out, and the trains of thought...
Read full commentPosted in In Windows
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