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I have 2149 stories published in 17 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 5478950 times and 674 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1542 of my 13,341 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1589 votes

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Relationship

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] “Immanuel” means “God with us” – to you is he a stranger? He wants a real relationship, so came, lay in a...
Cherry

Turn of the year ’scape

Scrawny trees stark on pale clear sky tangled twigs and mistletoe orbs; jaded damp sodden turf, wintery stillnes ’til sudden stormy shake of blasting...
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Journeying

What difference made by passing gong? … our foolish fritterings don’t repeat.
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Cherry

Spaceship Food

a rework of a piece for an IP a long time ago on ‘Skeuomorphism'*
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Why Bethlehem's remembered

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] Now Bethlehem’s remembered throughout the ages vast, for there the Prince was born whose just government...

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1542 of my comments have received 1589 Great Feedback votes

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Hi, Richard. I like 'wept'.

Posted on Thu, 20 Oct 2016

Hi, Richard. I like 'wept'.

'Follow me' is for others to click on as everyone has a section (under 'Read' on the right hand side of the screen) of 'Authors you follow'. If you click on anyone else's 'Follow me' their link should then be on...

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Posted in Environmental Interlude

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Interesting little picture. I

Posted on Tue, 18 Oct 2016

Interesting little picture. I hadn't heard the word 'polliwog' for tadpole before. Rhiannon

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Posted in The Toe

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Much of interest and

Posted on Mon, 17 Oct 2016

Much of interest and informative here. I felt the ease in temperature a little with the snow falling. When he mentions making the furniture, I remembered part of my father's letter about his war experiences when they made some furniture, and...

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Posted in Chet and the Prisoners - 8

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Hi, Jean. Didn't the locals

Posted on Tue, 11 Oct 2016

Hi, Jean. Didn't the locals get to whipping around to getting some clothing in it to them? I suppose there was a lot of chaos with so many suddenly going off to war, and the centre was out in the country, but surely those running the camp could...

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Posted in Chet and the Prisoners - 3

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Very interesting. Makes you

Posted on Mon, 10 Oct 2016

Very interesting. Makes you see it from the eyes of such a one caught up in it. Easy to see the necessity of the authorities to do something in a time of war and concern for embedded spies, and also to realise everything got done very hastily,...

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Posted in Chet and the Prisoners - 2

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A vivid scene, tautly told.

Posted on Sun, 02 Oct 2016

A vivid scene, tautly told. Rhiannon

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Posted in The Mystery of Cat

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I don't understand it all,

Posted on Wed, 07 Sep 2016

I don't understand it all, but it doesn't seem to be a picture of the caring God we meet in the Bible, and came to earth with an answer for our sweat and fetters that we have made for ourselves, both now and fulness to come. What the fool...

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Posted in Maker's Mark

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Describing well temptation's

Posted on Tue, 30 Aug 2016

Describing well temptation's voice and the confusing reasoning and depression induced. Showing so clearly the need of a good friend at one's side to help if the cycle is really to be broken, and of course the Holy Spirit's help can make such a...

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Posted in Sober Tomorrow

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Clever little parable of the

Posted on Thu, 25 Aug 2016

Clever little parable of the importance of each contributing, each needing each other, as the Bible teaches in1 Corinthians 12 about the church (people, believers, not the building!) being the body of Christ, eg if the foot should say, "...

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Posted in Hanger

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Got the calypso rhythm

Posted on Thu, 25 Aug 2016

Got the calypso rhythm somehow, Linda! I liked the way you showed the forced rhythm - a bit like I had to do in my limericks. I hope there is a lot of safe enjoyment of the music, in playing, hearing and (gentle!) shaking, and laughter and...

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Posted in CARNIVAL

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