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I have 2071 stories published in 17 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 4627456 times and 643 of my stories have been cherry picked.
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Repatriation

Coming home from war: Will things be as before? will Nellie be waiting? will the country be grateful for what we have done – has freedom been won...
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Gold cherry

A sleepy mid-July mid-afternoon

Azure sky green leaves lie against the blue, and puffs of white float by. All is quiet except a wood-pigeon’s constant thrusting note. A car sweeps...
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The generous enriched

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] The generous will reap – impoverished those who keep from sharing what they can and should, begrudging to do...
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Crisis Moment

Battle in the blood: hostile invaders immobilised, stabbed, or eaten …crisis as invaders beaten …
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God promised …

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] A future descendant will deal with the devil, that snake who so slyly has drawn you to evil, to question My...

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1509 of my comments have received 1553 Great Feedback votes

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Seems some deep poignant

Posted on Fri, 11 Mar 2016

Seems some deep poignant disillusionment. Serenity will always get disturbed in this life, and even with respect and honesty in companionship, so much hurt can happen. I hope you know some real serenity and hope in midst of the cacophony times....

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Posted in Sunlight like smiles

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Though the line 'told you to

Posted on Fri, 04 Mar 2016

Though the line 'told you to go' comes up at the beginning, doesn't it.

'you scared me; scarred me' makes a very memorable line.

The agony of disturbing thoughts that keep returning and making one ill, is agonising to read...

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Posted in Nuthoused

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Tragic. You've put this under

Posted on Wed, 02 Mar 2016

Tragic. You've put this under 'Love' because love needs more care than clothes and coal. Rhiannon

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Posted in Too Cold for Snow...

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in a nut-shell, the place of

Posted on Sun, 28 Feb 2016

in a nut-shell, the place of a well-loved pet as part of life's landscape for a while, and how the shock of any big change affects the scenery around oneself. Rhiannon

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Posted in The Theory of Everything and Nothing

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Ever amazed by your skill

Posted on Fri, 26 Feb 2016

Ever amazed by your skill Terry, though I must admit, early on I was hoping for a twist that her dreams were imagination, and maybe an element of humour, and by the end I did want to give her a shake and tell her to look for a future service for...

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Posted in The Stone

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Interesting idea!

Posted on Thu, 18 Feb 2016

Interesting idea!

Seems some sort of metaphor in that – if the person or thing is doing her/his/its job well, you don't notice it, only notice when the job isn't being done properly! Rhiannon

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Posted in I am a sheradised annular nail

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A delicately drawn picture,

Posted on Sun, 14 Feb 2016

A delicately drawn picture, Frances. And such a beautiful bird as seen by following your link. Never heard of it, least alone seen it (unless in tropical bird collections maybe, but certainly not in natural surroundings, foraging) I suppose that...

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Posted in Splendid Blue

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Very sad, and you certainly

Posted on Fri, 05 Feb 2016

Very sad, and you certainly seem to have given her a lot of time, and effort. Her Buddhist ideas don't seem to give her much peace or purpose, nor does she sound as if she has found others of that persuasion to support her.
When we first...

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Posted in Sarah

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Oh, do plant a willow tree,

Posted on Wed, 03 Feb 2016

Oh, do plant a willow tree, Terry, whoever it weeps for!
As usual you paint a full and interesting picture, full of interesting musical rhymes.
I think we can take some encouragement from some of the 'cleanings-up' that have been done...

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Posted in A Willow Tree

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A picture, somehow of body in

Posted on Sun, 24 Jan 2016

A picture, somehow of body in post-surgery shock, mixed with peace and relief, and a sense of moving forwards. Good to share. Rhiannon

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Posted in Fine

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