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I have 1996 stories published in 16 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 3688969 times and 612 of my stories have been cherry picked.
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Gospel – Good News from God

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] I’m not ashamed of the gospel , the gospel of Christ, the Lord: … Righteousness by faith alone!

Cautionary Pictures 4)

A heart that clings to things will find those things take wings one day.
Cherry

Cautionary Pictures 3)

Easy to break, hard to mend, quarrel begun hard to end.

The Sad Singing Washing Machine

Washing machine starts a mad beep song … her poking finger’s found a button to press to make that lovely sound … the water seal was pierced by their thin sharp pins.

Certain Hope

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] No pain, and not in need; completely blessed, and freed from evil, sin and all brought on us by the fall...

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1453 of my comments have received 1495 Great Feedback votes

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It is so nice to have

Posted on Fri, 06 Nov 2015

It is so nice to have attention drawn to the detail of one little flower. You notice so much more than with a big bloom. I remember looking long at one autumn leaf with a little girl I was helping to look after, and making a poem on that, and her...

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Posted in In Passing

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I like the way you've

Posted on Wed, 04 Nov 2015

I like the way you've captured this bit of escapism, Cassie!  'no cause to hide, I can be who I am'
It does seem a pity when people feel they can't be themselves in the real world, though others use the term 'I'm just being myself...

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Posted in what goes up

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I catch whisps of where you

Posted on Tue, 03 Nov 2015

I catch whisps of where you are coming from, but then revert to feeling your playing with the reader with a mixture of eerie and trying to provoke discomfort, always with your rolling rhymes and rhythm, mixing a real message with a bit of...

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Posted in Limbo

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I like what you have written

Posted on Tue, 03 Nov 2015

I like what you have written about the false glitz and warmth at Christmas, the wearying distractions to true delight and happiness, satisfying service, and worship.

The early part also made me think of 'when the time had fully come, God...

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Posted in The Image Of The Christ Child

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Pleasant companionship

Posted on Tue, 03 Nov 2015

Pleasant companionship warming the hard seasons. Interesting interjection of the respite in winter from summer labours. Rhiannon

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Posted in Novemberesque

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gives the feeling of no-one

Posted on Wed, 28 Oct 2015

gives the feeling of no-one to remember and grieve him, memory of him blown away. Sad. Rhiannon

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Posted in 'Incident on the Line'

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This did make me think, Tina,

Posted on Tue, 27 Oct 2015

This did make me think, Tina, of so many who feel the loss of a daughter or son of whom they never had good memories, a loss double. Memories so sweet must hurt so much, but you wouldn't have not had them, I'm sure.

I did so like the last...

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Posted in Baobabs and Bedouins

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This is very effective. The

Posted on Sat, 24 Oct 2015

This is very effective. The early part and the contrast.

If it is how you are feeling now, I would say, Seek out that music of heart again! Personally, of course,  I would pray, and read God's love letter (the Bible) to me when feeling...

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Posted in Silence in my heart

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This reminded me somehow

Posted on Fri, 23 Oct 2015

This reminded me somehow about the book of Ecclesiastes, where the imperfectness of everything, incompleteness in this life is shown. I think maybe I'll have to come back to this, there's so much there, so many different metaphors to think about...

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Posted in Who am I?

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bit of fun, quirky. Dreamy

Posted on Wed, 21 Oct 2015

bit of fun, quirky. Dreamy view, then the slog (reinvigorated?) Rhiannon

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Posted in Monday Night

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