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I have 2172 stories published in 17 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 5703875 times and 683 of my stories have been cherry picked.
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If spin-dryers were uninvented …

In days of yore when we were newly wed, it was awhile before we could afford a twin-tub or a spinner, and for a while I tried to squeeze – as Grandma...
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War Confined?

If there were no bombs or dynamite, no nukes or WMDs men still would war, dispute and fight, but maybe more confined to battlefields – no missiles...
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Promised from the beginning

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] A God who is almighty, a God who does not lie, a God who knows the future, and promised to supply eternal...
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Sheep, flowers and sunlight

Park the car, hungry excited sheep and lambs run down to the gate …the conical steep wooded hill … what is that odd stick-stalk at the side of the way? Soon a troupe of them –
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Folly forsakes the foundation

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] Foundational truth from which wisdom flows is knowledge and reverence of the Being who knows the compass of truth …won’t carefully ponder … presuming there’s no-one far greater than we …

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1552 of my comments have received 1601 Great Feedback votes

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I suppose the lyrics of 'Cars

Posted on Mon, 14 Aug 2017

I suppose the lyrics of 'Cars' is suggesting the difficulties of facing handling social relationships, and wanting a place of retreat, to emerge when ready. Having many people around, all talking can be difficult if you have some Asperger...

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Posted in The Piano

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You also show how trying to

Posted on Fri, 11 Aug 2017

You also show how trying to help can be quite gruelling and tiring, and complicated in having a constant change of newcomers to try to understand how they will take what you say, and the rules that have to be. You seemed to have had much...

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Posted in 2002-05 My memories of working at a hostel for homeless men

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Thanks, Elsie. I've ordered

Posted on Mon, 01 May 2017

Thanks, Elsie. I've ordered that. It sounds very special. Rhiannon

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Posted in Shlamek

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We now have another lad to

Posted on Tue, 01 Aug 2017

We now have another lad to try to understand. Again, you seem to guess so much of the why of what can seem odd behaviours. Sugar relaxes away from tension and the jarring thoughts, doesn't it? I'm glad you brought in again his happy memories of...

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Posted in Jack Mutant - Which Way is Down? (part 4)

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I'd been wondering if you

Posted on Tue, 25 Jul 2017

I'd been wondering if you would manage to get back into this. You do seem to have a great ability in getting into his mind, sympathetically, and seeing how he might be seeing, feeling things.

I remember when my son was in (quite a small)...

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Posted in Jack Mutant - Which Way is Down? (Part 3)

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It is interesting that though

Posted on Tue, 04 Jul 2017

It is interesting that though some details of our history gets vague, we can have very sharp recollections of feelings we had of hurt, confusion, misunderstanding, panic, and growing understanding of others' reactions which at first seemed...

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Posted in Joe's Roses

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There seems to be a four

Posted on Sat, 24 Jun 2017

There seems to be a four-dimensional effect here as the time element comes in with the stretching and opening, and fading, withering. And the shrivelling uprooted weeds in piles with the insects crawling around and through (the weeds are the '...

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Posted in Summer Thrills.

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The picture of your faithful

Posted on Sun, 18 Jun 2017

The picture of your faithful dog, who understands to be with you, patient for when you feel like communicating, seems a good model for friendship that is there, but undemanding, especially through grief and hard readjustments. Rhiannon

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Posted in The Reproachful Muse

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I would say that Darwin's

Posted on Thu, 22 Jun 2017

I would say that Darwin's theory is not sound science, but hypothesis, a suggestion, which if he were alive now, he would probably hesitate more to suggest, as the methods and evidence he believed would become more clear, have retreated with more...

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Posted in Why 'Scientific' Materialism is Unsound

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This has a pleasing form and

Posted on Wed, 21 Jun 2017

This has a pleasing form and flow to it, Elsie, and hints in an unusual way at the situation there, and the memories.

Is the car reference an indication of many abandoned cars around, with no money to be repaired, run or taken to a dump?...

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Posted in Craigmillar

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