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I have 2071 stories published in 17 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 4627455 times and 643 of my stories have been cherry picked.
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Cherry

From dawn ’til …

The country sleeps … the beginning and ending of another day.
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Cherry

Seeing the end from the …

Composing … Exciting beginning – but where is it going?t Is the goal in view, the end, the conclusion? Can you follow it through, keep the attention...
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Abraham's willingness, Christ's Great Sacrifice

Abraham's willingness points forward to Christ's great sacrifice

How did it arise?

Exquisite the painting, admired, bestowed delight for the viewers and compliments flowed … but not to the artist whom none of them knew, though...

Salt and Light needed

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] What good can we do if we follow the right? Christ said that each one will be salt and a light – we’ll bring...

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1509 of my comments have received 1553 Great Feedback votes

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I liked the title, but it

Posted on Sat, 23 Jan 2016

I liked the title, but it also reminded me of the power/danger of words written down [Make me a beauty; ugly monster; object of hate; Angel of Death.] which, unless 'fed to the flame', can backfire, as proved by the...

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Posted in A4

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But oh, to have those

Posted on Sun, 17 Jan 2016

But oh, to have those memories! A richness not all own.

I was struck by mountains...marathons, and molehills – to thinking things that are molehills to some, can be mountains or marathons to another. Rhiannon

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Posted in Mad Man Moon

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Immediately trying to recall

Posted on Wed, 13 Jan 2016

Immediately trying to recall the last draft! Those 2 first lines are so poignant somehow as an introduction of such a poignant synopsis of the remembered that was transient and fragile like the shimmering, shivering chandelier. (a lot of...

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Posted in Chandelier

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How long the day does seem if

Posted on Mon, 11 Jan 2016

How long the day does seem if discouraged or depressed, and how easily the weather affects feelings. We do appreciate the bright weather when it comes at present don't we, and need to try to counteract feelings of gloom that we know are based on...

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Posted in Today Will Soon Be Yesterday

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Counselling needed in

Posted on Sun, 10 Jan 2016

Counselling needed in sensitive communication with your patient in those few minutes you have at your disposal. And how (not) to make things worse by trying too hard to be jolly? Rhiannon

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Posted in What Seems to be the Problem?

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Well, you seem to have made

Posted on Wed, 06 Jan 2016

Well, you seem to have made this 'memory film' live to the reader, anyway! I felt quite envious of the 'picking up a pig' incident. Rhiannon

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Posted in Happy Days

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In the midst of it all, there

Posted on Sun, 03 Jan 2016

In the midst of it all, there are some good leaders of industry, who actually do have respect from their workforce, who do probably (or some of them!) acknowldege their debt to good leadership. (a bit like those households in the days of slavery...

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Posted in the PLAGUE

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I didn't think about the

Posted on Mon, 04 Jan 2016

I didn't think about the title until afterwards, either. I like attempts at 'autobiography of a …' on inanimate objects. Unusual, but fun. Rhiannon

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Posted in The Wardrobe

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You are able at triggering

Posted on Thu, 31 Dec 2015

You are able at triggering others to the ordinary pleasures we can enjoy every day, and have enjoyed through all the days of life. Rhiannon

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Posted in Of a New Year's Eve

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I like the way you describe

Posted on Wed, 30 Dec 2015

I like the way you describe the smile – genuine, creases round the eyes, with a private twinkle in the eye – that describes well the sharing of warmth, acceptance, sense of love, that is so missed if it's just a facial smile, feelings hidden....

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Posted in Sometimes...

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