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I have 2150 stories published in 17 collections on the site.
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1542 of my comments have received 1589 Great Feedback votes

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Enjoyed the series of cameos,

Posted on Sat, 19 Mar 2016

Enjoyed the series of cameos, and especially the waves crumbling at the boy's feet, and the jet-skiers nearly being dethroned. Rhiannon

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Posted in At the beach

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Care is more palliative in a

Posted on Mon, 14 Mar 2016

Care is more palliative in a hospice nowadays, isn't it? I suppose that is part of the difference between being in a hospital or hospice at such a time? Rhiannon

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Posted in A Passing Thought (Poetry Monthly)

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Seems some deep poignant

Posted on Fri, 11 Mar 2016

Seems some deep poignant disillusionment. Serenity will always get disturbed in this life, and even with respect and honesty in companionship, so much hurt can happen. I hope you know some real serenity and hope in midst of the cacophony times....

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Posted in Sunlight like smiles

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Though the line 'told you to

Posted on Fri, 04 Mar 2016

Though the line 'told you to go' comes up at the beginning, doesn't it.

'you scared me; scarred me' makes a very memorable line.

The agony of disturbing thoughts that keep returning and making one ill, is agonising to read...

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Posted in Nuthoused

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Tragic. You've put this under

Posted on Wed, 02 Mar 2016

Tragic. You've put this under 'Love' because love needs more care than clothes and coal. Rhiannon

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Posted in Too Cold for Snow...

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in a nut-shell, the place of

Posted on Sun, 28 Feb 2016

in a nut-shell, the place of a well-loved pet as part of life's landscape for a while, and how the shock of any big change affects the scenery around oneself. Rhiannon

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Posted in The Theory of Everything and Nothing

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Ever amazed by your skill

Posted on Fri, 26 Feb 2016

Ever amazed by your skill Terry, though I must admit, early on I was hoping for a twist that her dreams were imagination, and maybe an element of humour, and by the end I did want to give her a shake and tell her to look for a future service for...

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Posted in The Stone

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Interesting idea!

Posted on Thu, 18 Feb 2016

Interesting idea!

Seems some sort of metaphor in that – if the person or thing is doing her/his/its job well, you don't notice it, only notice when the job isn't being done properly! Rhiannon

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Posted in I am a sheradised annular nail

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A delicately drawn picture,

Posted on Sun, 14 Feb 2016

A delicately drawn picture, Frances. And such a beautiful bird as seen by following your link. Never heard of it, least alone seen it (unless in tropical bird collections maybe, but certainly not in natural surroundings, foraging) I suppose that...

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Posted in Splendid Blue

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Very sad, and you certainly

Posted on Fri, 05 Feb 2016

Very sad, and you certainly seem to have given her a lot of time, and effort. Her Buddhist ideas don't seem to give her much peace or purpose, nor does she sound as if she has found others of that persuasion to support her.
When we first...

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Posted in Sarah

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