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Where the lie leads
There once was a lady who swallowed a lie, I don’t know why she swallowed the lie, but by and by …
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A helpful tongue
[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] … How good to hear a timely word to calm or cheer or guide …
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Masks
Masks to keep your germs in, or germs of others out will also hide your cheeky grin – your friendship some may doubt. but when those masks we can...
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My ‘Mamgu’ (c.1880 - 1969)
(pronounced Mam- ggy as in 'eggy', South-Wales word for Grandmother, meaning ‘dear mother’) Lived up the long hill from the town, half-way up the little mountain., by the cemetery – her husband had been the stonemason …
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Hawthorn
White May bouquet, tumbling in the hedge, pattern delicate, exquisite: white petals, pale green centres, red anther spots, (sometimes the petals rich...
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The walk around the town, and
Posted on Mon, 27 Jan 2014
The walk around the town, and her irritation over Alfred Jones' visits makes her seem more real, not just a line drawing of someone long ago! The Slug and Lettuce - what a fascinating name for a pub, must be some interesting history to...
Read full commentPosted in Consequences - Chapter 18
This seems a development of
Posted on Mon, 09 Nov 2015
This seems a development of one the other day you took off? But more clearly of the change with aging now. Hard when the touch and the speech and memory decays. The title intrigued me as I've been working on one entitled 'Show and tell', but at...
Read full commentPosted in Kiss and Tell (Poetry Monthly)
It is so nice to have
Posted on Fri, 06 Nov 2015
It is so nice to have attention drawn to the detail of one little flower. You notice so much more than with a big bloom. I remember looking long at one autumn leaf with a little girl I was helping to look after, and making a poem on that, and her...
Read full commentPosted in In Passing
I like the way you've
Posted on Wed, 04 Nov 2015
I like the way you've captured this bit of escapism, Cassie! 'no cause to hide, I can be who I am'
Read full commentIt does seem a pity when people feel they can't be themselves in the real world, though others use the term 'I'm just being myself...
Posted in what goes up
I catch whisps of where you
Posted on Tue, 03 Nov 2015
I catch whisps of where you are coming from, but then revert to feeling your playing with the reader with a mixture of eerie and trying to provoke discomfort, always with your rolling rhymes and rhythm, mixing a real message with a bit of...
Read full commentPosted in Limbo
I like what you have written
Posted on Tue, 03 Nov 2015
I like what you have written about the false glitz and warmth at Christmas, the wearying distractions to true delight and happiness, satisfying service, and worship.
The early part also made me think of 'when the time had fully come, God...
Read full commentPosted in The Image Of The Christ Child
Pleasant companionship
Posted on Tue, 03 Nov 2015
Pleasant companionship warming the hard seasons. Interesting interjection of the respite in winter from summer labours. Rhiannon
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gives the feeling of no-one
Posted on Wed, 28 Oct 2015
gives the feeling of no-one to remember and grieve him, memory of him blown away. Sad. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in 'Incident on the Line'
This did make me think, Tina,
Posted on Tue, 27 Oct 2015
This did make me think, Tina, of so many who feel the loss of a daughter or son of whom they never had good memories, a loss double. Memories so sweet must hurt so much, but you wouldn't have not had them, I'm sure.
I did so like the last...
Read full commentPosted in Baobabs and Bedouins
This is very effective. The
Posted on Sat, 24 Oct 2015
This is very effective. The early part and the contrast.
If it is how you are feeling now, I would say, Seek out that music of heart again! Personally, of course, I would pray, and read God's love letter (the Bible) to me when feeling...
Read full commentPosted in Silence in my heart
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