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I have 2022 stories published in 16 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 4172066 times and 625 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1474 of my 12,983 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1517 votes

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Toddler opening presents

When you are one it’s really fun to tear off the paper to find what’s inside there. … And then that bag they put the wrapping paper in …
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Cherry

Why didn’t I really like it?

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/A_Girl_with_a_Watering_Can A copy of this was given by an aunt when I was quite young. She was loving and kindly but...

Come! See! [6. of series based on old carols]

O come, all you faithless … see the wonder in Bethlehem. Baby, King Jesus, born to be our proxy. O come, do not ignore him, O come, bow now before him, receive his gifts, adore him, Christ, the Lord …
Cherry

The Focussed Day

Focus on love focus on giving focus on joy focus on feasting focus on family and friends and also those drifting – pity and compassion shelter and...

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1474 of my comments have received 1517 Great Feedback votes

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I hadn't really realised the

Posted on Thu, 01 Jan 2015

I hadn't really realised the length of time involved from the  beginning of the trouble, or how much was done at each stage of better health. This fills in so much of  'the spaces between' all along the way, the very hard spaces, and the happier...

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Posted in The Story of One Remarkable Lady

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I'm afraid I hadn't noticed

Posted on Sun, 14 Dec 2014

I'm afraid I hadn't noticed this last week. It has an intriguing wistfulness. Love the feeling of the wind, and the sounds can be so varied and odd - nice when comfy indoors, like the sounds of the rain. Rhiannon

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Posted in Wild and Beautiful

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You've rephrased some of

Posted on Wed, 17 Dec 2014

You've rephrased some of these thoughts, while redrawing the moment (stopping the clock in a sense) and there is much tender beauty in the captured scene, linked to past memories, and present struggles, which could help others. Rhiannon

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Posted in Quarter to January

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The interview with

Posted on Tue, 16 Dec 2014

The interview with Ipnasoletok is fascinating. Was the ban on speaking their languages lifted in later years? It reminds me of youngsters in Wales years ago having to wear a board saying 'Welsh Not' i think if caught speaking the language, but in...

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Posted in We Who Survived -16 - Perrin Whitman and the Indians -part 3

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There has always been a

Posted on Sun, 14 Dec 2014

There has always been a tension between being open with any nationality about things in their lives that are definitely coming between their hearts and God, and what is just more minor things, and cultural differences between people of different...

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Posted in We Who Survived -14 - Perrin Whitman and the Indians -part 1

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The sun sets over the birches

Posted on Mon, 08 Dec 2014

The sun sets over the birches –
pencil-sketched on a gun-metal sky

that's lovely and fits the beautiful picture so well. Such evenings are times for memories and longing. regards, Rhiannon
[ricochets  of lathe and...

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Posted in December Late Afternoon

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This has made me think how

Posted on Tue, 18 Nov 2014

This has made me think how such a saved letter can bring memories of the person active and communicating, maybe more than a photograph. Rhiannon

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Posted in PS No PS

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How sad, how difficult

Posted on Wed, 12 Nov 2014

How sad, how difficult visiting in that situation, just hoping more is appreciated than shows, like when someone is in a coma. It there are earlier happy memories I suppose one has to fix on them. I'm so thankful that at present, both my in-laws...

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Posted in The Shadow of Lilith

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the snatch of breath when a

Posted on Mon, 20 Oct 2014

the snatch of breath when a sunburst rips apart a darkening autumn evening sky.  Lovely picture.

Such moments still happen but unexpectedly, as the remembered little incidents and smiles in this, – going back we'd just store them...

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Posted in All in an Autumn Evening

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HI, Shannan. Sorry to hear

Posted on Sun, 19 Oct 2014

HI, Shannan. Sorry to hear things hav e been pretty tough.
Keeping up with friends on facebook seems to be a mixed blessing – you can catch up with the news they want to share, but for real friendship you need face to face friends you can...

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Posted in May you have a Facebook Rainbow

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