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I have 2136 stories published in 17 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 5354530 times and 667 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1540 of my 13,288 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1586 votes

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The Wind in the Willows

The wind in the willows … buzzing and teeming …winter remembrances picture …
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Wisdom for the Rich

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] Pressured, and troubled by increase of wealth, … Is it secured, will it be quite enough? Those who are envious don’t realise – it’s tough! …

Star Wars

Fame breeds jealousies … tongues claw and fight.
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Simple things

Busy, busy working frenzy … no time to spare to stop for simple things …

Soul Food

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] Having fasted, Jesus, hungry heard the tempter tell him to ‘Turn the stones to bread, for You are God the...

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1540 of my comments have received 1586 Great Feedback votes

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It does seem to have the feel

Posted on Sat, 26 Sep 2015

It does seem to have the feel of the girl who's been so sick and a bit nightmarey with fever, and feeling the oddness of convalescence and everything feeling distorted, and also the feel of a little girl wanting to be a bit removed from...

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Posted in Slow Burn

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Very enjoyable going on the

Posted on Thu, 24 Sep 2015

Very enjoyable going on the walk with you again, and the sense of time and the kind of noticing that goes with the speed, or lack of it, of a walk makes it seem very real. A lovely Pick of the Day too.
I've been trying to catch the...

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Posted in In July

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What a nice way to end, and

Posted on Sat, 19 Sep 2015

What a nice way to end, and even the advice she was able to give him, really just nudging him on the way he had been tending to go of realising how much these people had done for him, and his need of showing his changed attitudes.
It...

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Posted in The Wanderlust Lady and the Door to Door Salesman - 41 The End

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From an extremely brief

Posted on Mon, 14 Sep 2015

From an extremely brief offering to a very lengthy one! Certainly not sure I've followed it all (though as usual your rolling, rhythmic rhyming is very effective), but the thoughts that come to mind at the end are that there was a new start after...

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Posted in Boa's Ark

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A dream like mix of memories

Posted on Sat, 12 Sep 2015

A dream like mix of memories and imaginings and hopes to ease the stress? (did you mean 'dreams of memories' rather than 'dreamt of memories' in the last stanza?)

gifting treasures in the form of shells and gleaming gems –- a...

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Posted in Did You...

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Enjoyable scene as Bee says,

Posted on Sat, 12 Sep 2015

Enjoyable scene as Bee says, and a clever use of the IP without making the colours too dominant. Rhiannon

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Posted in Eveningesque

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Oh, the tragedy and agony

Posted on Fri, 11 Sep 2015

Oh, the tragedy and agony that no-one, especially the mother, was watching over her wisely, perceptively, nurturingly. Rhiannon

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Posted in The One...

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How intriguing, Terry! There

Posted on Thu, 10 Sep 2015

How intriguing, Terry! There seems such a lot that can be unpacked from that: the fading things that come to life again, the relivening of the daze dismembering December (January sometimes seems a daze to people after the excitement of the end of...

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Posted in Remember

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This brought back memories!

Posted on Wed, 09 Sep 2015

This brought back memories! My mother (recently widowed) coming awhile and calling herself 'chief cook and nappy washer'! the full buckets, and the feeling, 'I feel totally ignorant, but only I can really understand and help this child at all.'...

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Posted in The Weight of Snow

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This is very moving, Terry –

Posted on Sun, 06 Sep 2015

This is very moving, Terry – and it 'moves' well! I take it it's metaphor after metaphor to show the distress, the emptiness, the tragedy of the feeling of hopelessness at losing her. And that certainly comes over, and especially with the...

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Posted in Alone Again

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