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9
… We ring 9, then 9 again, and 9 once more on a phone if there is a …
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8
8 legs on a spider – 4 on each side (4 and 4 makes 8); 8 tentacles on an octopus (like arms) An octagon is a flat shape with 8 straight sides ‘octo’...
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7
7 days in every week – … 7 full musical notes in the scale.: …
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Trees
Gnarled roots extending, gripping, stabilising the soil branches lifting, spreading leaves to shade and shelter, exchange gases, refreshing the...
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6
6 sides (including top and bottom) to cubes and bricks. And every insect …
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This is very effective. The
Posted on Sat, 24 Oct 2015
This is very effective. The early part and the contrast.
If it is how you are feeling now, I would say, Seek out that music of heart again! Personally, of course, I would pray, and read God's love letter (the Bible) to me when feeling...
Read full commentPosted in Silence in my heart
This reminded me somehow
Posted on Fri, 23 Oct 2015
This reminded me somehow about the book of Ecclesiastes, where the imperfectness of everything, incompleteness in this life is shown. I think maybe I'll have to come back to this, there's so much there, so many different metaphors to think about...
Read full commentPosted in Who am I?
bit of fun, quirky. Dreamy
Posted on Wed, 21 Oct 2015
bit of fun, quirky. Dreamy view, then the slog (reinvigorated?) Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Monday Night
I liked this too, though I
Posted on Wed, 21 Oct 2015
I liked this too, though I also thought you might think of a stronger climax line. The last but one seems to balance the third - disjointedness and then your world coming together, presumably a sense of things making sense, fitting together,...
Read full commentPosted in discord to harmony (revised)
Not easy to show friendship
Posted on Wed, 14 Oct 2015
Not easy to show friendship when someone is wanting to withdraw to private memories, but to show affection, and will be there when conversation wanted? Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Where the Seabirds Fly
You seem to have captured
Posted on Mon, 12 Oct 2015
You seem to have captured something of that strange feeling of convalesence (salt on the arm!), when the mind (and body) is not working quite normally yet (slight temperature still, perhaps), and trying to come to terms with life again. The sight...
Read full commentPosted in Reflections
Seems like a maturing of
Posted on Fri, 09 Oct 2015
Seems like a maturing of companionship as age and the turmoils of life creep in. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in It was Summer - that First Morning
I like the way you 'throw in'
Posted on Wed, 07 Oct 2015
I like the way you 'throw in' lines like about the difficulties of finding the way out in IKEA (living so far from one, we have found them quite overwhelming on our occasional visits!) and not having time to think about the emptiness that will...
Read full commentPosted in Stepping Stones (Poetry Monthly)
So honest, so sad, so simply
Posted on Sat, 03 Oct 2015
So honest, so sad, so simply and clearly written. There does seem some sort of deep caring love there, and a trusting love to some extent, but that can't (at present) meet, and a looking for excitement that won't satisfy. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Clocking In
Some interesting thought
Posted on Wed, 30 Sep 2015
Some interesting thought threads here, Terry, and play on the sounds of vale/veil/countervail.
Read full commentIn line 3 is it meant to be 'vail'' or veil' ?
Posted in Vale of Tears
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