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Observing
Look through any window of the train … passing … glimpse of lives, then all their faces gone.
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Wild Rose …
pink blush of beauty climbing the hedges … fragile, fleeting ….
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Light to the Bleakness 2. of series based on old carols
[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series].[2.based on the carol, ‘In the bleak mid-winter’ by Christina Rossetti] In the bleak mid-winter all is cold, troubles biting, bitter – Love foretold God is coming bringing light...
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Dog’s Mercury
Emerging through the littered leaves of the woodland floor …
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Emmanuel (= God with us) 1. of series based on old carols
[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] [1, based on the carol 'O come, O come, Emmanuel'] O come, O come, Emmanuel, all people need good news – Noël* to give life purpose … Rejoice, Emmanuel has come – the Light to shine for everyone.…
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It's lovely what you took in
Posted on Sat, 07 Mar 2015
It's lovely what you took in in your micro-glance, refreshing you for the rest of your journey. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in The A1 Crosses the River Swale
A lot to think about there,
Posted on Sat, 21 Feb 2015
A lot to think about there, and well written of course. How difficult to live with great skill, humbly and kindly. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in "All the World's a Stage"
I can only say, how
Posted on Mon, 09 Feb 2015
I can only say, how compassionate and caring the staff are where my father-in-law is. (and it is just a basic nursing home, largely council funded, they have recently introduced a very minimal top-up and of course there is always means testing)....
Read full commentPosted in Room Six - Tooting Bec Asylum...1982
I really liked the way you
Posted on Tue, 03 Feb 2015
I really liked the way you slipped in the descriptions of the garden eg ' the smell of pine as refreshing as a bucket of snow, needles crunching underfoot.' That whole paragraph seems to have so much vivid description just tucked in...
Read full commentPosted in uncorrected proof two.
Horrible, Bee. Getting
Posted on Wed, 28 Jan 2015
Horrible, Bee. Getting callous like this to animal suffering, must so easily lead to callousness to human suffering too. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Giving Them a VOICE
A lot of concentrated vivid
Posted on Sun, 25 Jan 2015
A lot of concentrated vivid images here, and memories, and the contrast of attitudes to danger and hurts. Specially liked the first verse, and the lines about the moss. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Earth Heart (3)
Interesting cameo of bright
Posted on Fri, 16 Jan 2015
Interesting cameo of bright memories, a bit like Jolono's recent 'Under a London Sky' memories of the beginning of a courtship. I liked ''Occasion marked: Us and 'Coat-hanger tourists' too. The Brolga Dance certainly sounded...
Read full commentPosted in Brolga Dance
Your collection of images in
Posted on Tue, 13 Jan 2015
Your collection of images in the early part of this is breathtaking as usual, and displays your noticing eye and clarity of putting the images into words succinctly for others.
– but poetry can be about all sorts of things, the pleasant,...
Read full commentPosted in Ars Poetica
… but as you said, it is the
Posted on Sat, 03 Jan 2015
… but as you said, it is the space between that is full of good memories. Here the beginning, so beautifully described, and such pleasure, and seen now as the beginning of a full life, despite all the hardships, and the agony of parting. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Epiphany
I hadn't really realised the
Posted on Thu, 01 Jan 2015
I hadn't really realised the length of time involved from the beginning of the trouble, or how much was done at each stage of better health. This fills in so much of 'the spaces between' all along the way, the very hard spaces, and the happier...
Read full commentPosted in The Story of One Remarkable Lady
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