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River in Spate
Downpour falling river filling spilling tumbling … the ocean vast at last.
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Cautionary Pictures 5)
Cocksure cockiness– carelessness, and ignorance – comes a cropper, comeuppance; nose in the air – ‘look around!’ ‘watch the ground’! ‘beware!’ ‘...
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Gospel – Good News from God
[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] I’m not ashamed of the gospel , the gospel of Christ, the Lord: … Righteousness by faith alone!
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Cautionary Pictures 4)
A heart that clings to things will find those things take wings one day.
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Cautionary Pictures 3)
Easy to break, hard to mend, quarrel begun hard to end.
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So sad, effectively told in
Posted on Wed, 26 Aug 2015
So sad, effectively told in its simplicity and brevity. Is it based on a number of incidents or one in particular? Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Spilt Milk
Very sad. I expect if you are
Posted on Wed, 26 Aug 2015
Very sad. I expect if you are waiting for a possible explanation if feels like it may solve something for you, though probably it wouldn't really make a difference to the shattering bereavement. The 'whether to have a PM or not' must be so hard,...
Read full commentPosted in Post mortem results
It's even more difficult if
Posted on Mon, 24 Aug 2015
It's even more difficult if you're talking to someone who seems to feel an obligation to continue, and doesn't pick up on the hints that you feel that you need to go, but you don't want to lie about a committment, but you can't really say, 'I've...
Read full commentPosted in Loose Ends
the action of waves, real and
Posted on Thu, 06 Aug 2015
the action of waves, real and metaphoric, haven't got my head totally around the beachcombing. The waves wash away and bring in flotsam and jetsam?
Read full commentInprints = Imprints?
Rhiannon
Posted in Beach
the abyss of your absence
Posted on Wed, 22 Jul 2015
the abyss of your absence such a telling phrase in so many situations. Though it does reflect a good relationship that has been experienced. And for you, the shared enjoyment of the details of your surroundings, especially the nature...
Read full commentPosted in Opacity of Glass
There is a lot of lovely
Posted on Sun, 19 Jul 2015
There is a lot of lovely metaphor again here, maybe rather concentrated for taking it all in? The chorus is lovely and I liked Enticing the sun into scything the night, starry-eyed very much.
Read full commentThe whole rhythmic form is well worked...
Posted in Sleep In My Arms Lullaby
Very cleverly written. I too
Posted on Sun, 19 Jul 2015
Very cleverly written. I too like acrostic poems, but so often they do feel rather forced, but this doesn't, and the bringing in of the initial letters for each line seems very neatly done. I particularly like the lines Threatening all but...
Read full commentPosted in 'Why Ever Not'
Hungry, alive Injured,
Posted on Sun, 05 Jul 2015
Hungry, alive Injured, survived brought to mind those feelings of many after disasters.
Read full commentExhausted, taxed drew such an unexpected lesson for perservering.
It also brought to my mind how being puffed up and...
Posted in Positive Thinking
You have a knack of
Posted on Thu, 02 Jul 2015
You have a knack of describing your feelings. When I had to wake to my father-in-law's calls, when he was still here, I got to frequently not be able to get back to sleep, and in the end found I had to mix sometimes doing something (reading,...
Read full commentPosted in A.M.
I agree with randy-johnson.
Posted on Sun, 28 Jun 2015
I agree with randy-johnson.T
The problems with Darwin's theory are far greater now than when he formed it, when he felt sure that the mechanisms would become clear. Natural selection is only the means of creatures dying out if environment...
Read full commentPosted in I Can't Believe In Darwin's Theory
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