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I have 2116 stories published in 17 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 5193489 times and 660 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1545 of my 13,423 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1593 votes

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Cherry

The Wind in the Willows

The wind in the willows … buzzing and teeming …winter remembrances picture …
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Wisdom for the Rich

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] Pressured, and troubled by increase of wealth, … Is it secured, will it be quite enough? Those who are envious don’t realise – it’s tough! …

Star Wars

Fame breeds jealousies … tongues claw and fight.
Cherry

Simple things

Busy, busy working frenzy … no time to spare to stop for simple things …

Soul Food

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] Having fasted, Jesus, hungry heard the tempter tell him to ‘Turn the stones to bread, for You are God the...

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1545 of my comments have received 1593 Great Feedback votes

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Ever amazed by your skill

Posted on Fri, 26 Feb 2016

Ever amazed by your skill Terry, though I must admit, early on I was hoping for a twist that her dreams were imagination, and maybe an element of humour, and by the end I did want to give her a shake and tell her to look for a future service for...

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Posted in The Stone

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Interesting idea!

Posted on Thu, 18 Feb 2016

Interesting idea!

Seems some sort of metaphor in that – if the person or thing is doing her/his/its job well, you don't notice it, only notice when the job isn't being done properly! Rhiannon

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Posted in I am a sheradised annular nail

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A delicately drawn picture,

Posted on Sun, 14 Feb 2016

A delicately drawn picture, Frances. And such a beautiful bird as seen by following your link. Never heard of it, least alone seen it (unless in tropical bird collections maybe, but certainly not in natural surroundings, foraging) I suppose that...

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Posted in Splendid Blue

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Very sad, and you certainly

Posted on Fri, 05 Feb 2016

Very sad, and you certainly seem to have given her a lot of time, and effort. Her Buddhist ideas don't seem to give her much peace or purpose, nor does she sound as if she has found others of that persuasion to support her.
When we first...

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Posted in Sarah

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Oh, do plant a willow tree,

Posted on Wed, 03 Feb 2016

Oh, do plant a willow tree, Terry, whoever it weeps for!
As usual you paint a full and interesting picture, full of interesting musical rhymes.
I think we can take some encouragement from some of the 'cleanings-up' that have been done...

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Posted in A Willow Tree

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A picture, somehow of body in

Posted on Sun, 24 Jan 2016

A picture, somehow of body in post-surgery shock, mixed with peace and relief, and a sense of moving forwards. Good to share. Rhiannon

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Posted in Fine

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I liked the title, but it

Posted on Sat, 23 Jan 2016

I liked the title, but it also reminded me of the power/danger of words written down [Make me a beauty; ugly monster; object of hate; Angel of Death.] which, unless 'fed to the flame', can backfire, as proved by the...

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Posted in A4

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But oh, to have those

Posted on Sun, 17 Jan 2016

But oh, to have those memories! A richness not all own.

I was struck by mountains...marathons, and molehills – to thinking things that are molehills to some, can be mountains or marathons to another. Rhiannon

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Posted in Mad Man Moon

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Immediately trying to recall

Posted on Wed, 13 Jan 2016

Immediately trying to recall the last draft! Those 2 first lines are so poignant somehow as an introduction of such a poignant synopsis of the remembered that was transient and fragile like the shimmering, shivering chandelier. (a lot of...

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Posted in Chandelier

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How long the day does seem if

Posted on Mon, 11 Jan 2016

How long the day does seem if discouraged or depressed, and how easily the weather affects feelings. We do appreciate the bright weather when it comes at present don't we, and need to try to counteract feelings of gloom that we know are based on...

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Posted in Today Will Soon Be Yesterday

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