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I have 2113 stories published in 17 collections on the site.
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Material and eternal provision

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] Never again would He flood the whole earth. Yearly the seasons will bring plants’ rebirth. Tells of the Day...
Cherry

To know but be unknown

Facebook smiles and ‘touched-up ’lives – charade. Out and about, ‘on parade’, masquerade: …

Atheism Folly

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] “There is no God”: the fool’s opinion. The Lord observes to see if anyone …

Big River, Big Life

Anaconda large and long with a squeeze that’s very strong … River dophins rather pink …cayman black …
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Another marathon, Terry. I

Posted on Sat, 14 May 2016

Another marathon, Terry. I get the impression it must be very satisfying to get all that rhythm and rhyme of words flowing, whatever the meaning.

As you know surreal isn't my medium, and I tend to try to work out every detail that's going...

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Posted in Rough Roads To Roam (Poetry Monthly)

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But you had enjoyed the

Posted on Wed, 27 Apr 2016

But you had enjoyed the sharing and the watching, and stimulating each other's thinking of such things. As for eternity, I'm sure the new creation will have just as wonderful things to marvel at! Rhiannon

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Posted in T'is the Season...

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"Sometimes I sits and thinks,

Posted on Tue, 26 Apr 2016

"Sometimes I sits and thinks, and sometimes I just sits…" or 'Stop the world, I want to get off, for a minute!'
Seriously, a nice picture of relaxation. Rhiannon

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Posted in Can I Just be...

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How you picture the flashing

Posted on Mon, 25 Apr 2016

How you picture the flashing thoughts filming through the mind in a second.

Lovely last two lines. Rhiannon

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Posted in Diagnosis a True Beginning

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Evokes the warmth and

Posted on Fri, 22 Apr 2016

Evokes the warmth and relaxation and hum of a summer day, where so much is growing and fruitful and living anew. Rhiannon

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Posted in Where the Bee Sucks

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Thank you for the reminder

Posted on Tue, 19 Apr 2016

Thank you for the reminder that it is Parkinson's Awareness Week, and for the perseverance of the two of you, and your daughter's input and willingness in the background. As you say, the brain is such a complex organ, and there seem to be...

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Posted in Exactly What is Parkinson's, Anyway?

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I've just noticed the 'Poetry

Posted on Sat, 09 Apr 2016

I've just noticed the 'Poetry Monthly' section, and so noticed this. You've packed a lot in cleverly. I don't agree with evolutionary assumptions, but in a now 'fallen/damaged' world the poor housefly does show us such a mixture of beauty and...

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Posted in Musca Domestica (Poetry Monthly)

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Chock-full to bursting with

Posted on Thu, 07 Apr 2016

Chock-full to bursting with so much to think about, things to laugh about, things to appreciate of your struggles, be drawn back with you to happy memories of young-mother days (but long forgotten the struggles and insecurities of those times)....

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Posted in Not Quite Fern Hill (Poetry Monthly)

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Maybe if you were trying to

Posted on Tue, 05 Apr 2016

Maybe if you were trying to inspire young artists and drew them in to look at that detail of the tree, and talked of the changes you'd observed over the years, maybe it would get them interested in drawing the whole with more understanding....

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Posted in The Art of Art

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Hard work and nature-watching

Posted on Sun, 27 Mar 2016

Hard work and nature-watching (lovely to see lapwings) can be very refreshing and shake frustrations out. Rhiannon

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Posted in Not Just Any Sunday

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