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I have 2185 stories published in 17 collections on the site.
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Myths based on Truth

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] Belovèd myths, imagined place where superheroes dangers face to rescue from the monster pest, succeed in...

More Snowdrops ! (hidden away)

Is that a drift of snow peeping over the top of the bank? …
Cherry

Are you wanting to be …

No man is an island though you may want to be alone, independent and totally free, private, no duties, responsibilities gone, doing just what you...

Faith in His Word

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] Fear observes the problems sore, and puffs them up to scare. Faith sees opportunities – God’s work in which...
Cherry

‘Twinkle, twinkle … what?’@102

At 102 she can’t hear well and is confused and forgetful, but likes it when her grandson plays hymns and songs on his violin that she knew in younger days … and for his young daughter he plays, ‘Twinkle, twinkle little star … …
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1557 of my comments have received 1608 Great Feedback votes

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A vivid scene, tautly told.

Posted on Sun, 02 Oct 2016

A vivid scene, tautly told. Rhiannon

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Posted in The Mystery of Cat

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I don't understand it all,

Posted on Wed, 07 Sep 2016

I don't understand it all, but it doesn't seem to be a picture of the caring God we meet in the Bible, and came to earth with an answer for our sweat and fetters that we have made for ourselves, both now and fulness to come. What the fool...

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Posted in Maker's Mark

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Describing well temptation's

Posted on Tue, 30 Aug 2016

Describing well temptation's voice and the confusing reasoning and depression induced. Showing so clearly the need of a good friend at one's side to help if the cycle is really to be broken, and of course the Holy Spirit's help can make such a...

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Posted in Sober Tomorrow

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Clever little parable of the

Posted on Thu, 25 Aug 2016

Clever little parable of the importance of each contributing, each needing each other, as the Bible teaches in1 Corinthians 12 about the church (people, believers, not the building!) being the body of Christ, eg if the foot should say, "...

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Posted in Hanger

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Got the calypso rhythm

Posted on Thu, 25 Aug 2016

Got the calypso rhythm somehow, Linda! I liked the way you showed the forced rhythm - a bit like I had to do in my limericks. I hope there is a lot of safe enjoyment of the music, in playing, hearing and (gentle!) shaking, and laughter and...

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Posted in CARNIVAL

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This sounds like the hurt of

Posted on Wed, 17 Aug 2016

This sounds like the hurt of unkind words, which those saying them often don't think about. ('Sticks and stones may hurt my bones, but words will never hurt me' being so clearly untrue) Often it is only Christ's Holy Spirit who can comfort, and...

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Posted in Poison Needles

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A humourous teasing of the

Posted on Mon, 08 Aug 2016

A humourous teasing of the tourists getting London 'done'! with thought to the broken dreams of others. I remember being shown tourists landing in Scotland from a cruise ship when I was young, and being told they were coming to do Scotland in a...

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Posted in FIFTH COLUMN (LONDON)

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Nice to see you around again,

Posted on Tue, 02 Aug 2016

Nice to see you around again, Richard, and still having enjoyable family gatherings. What is 'game of 20,000'? Rhiannon

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Posted in At Danny's Place

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So many 'grand schemes' seem

Posted on Wed, 27 Jul 2016

So many 'grand schemes' seem to become white (or grey) elephants. I suppose the post-war renovation was in haste, and also maybe it was rebuilding the community spirit that needed attention too. 'Better builds' can so easily become the...

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Posted in ELEPHANT PARK (LONDON)

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I can't do much reading on a

Posted on Sun, 17 Jul 2016

I can't do much reading on here on a Sunday, Penny, but I saw this when posting my weekly hymn, and just had a look, and could picture the memories and imagination of childhood wonder and timelessness of day and darkness. Last but one line, I...

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Posted in Endless Summer

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