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Salt and Light needed
[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] What good can we do if we follow the right? Christ said that each one will be salt and a light – we’ll bring...
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The way it should be (childhood rituals)
Walking up to Nursery – Grandpa in tow, going down at last the steps – ‘I go first you know’ – – mutter not by Grandpa heard, behind him Mums press...
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Finding the Castle in the village of Richard's Castle.
Waves of ox-eye daisies shaking in the breeze … up the old steps to the top of the ruined keep
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Warnings are kind
[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] … The warning is offer to leave the ways of rebellion that grieve – to Jesus’ love, ways to cleave.
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Storm, no rain!
air … water … earth … fire!
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I like the way you describe
Posted on Wed, 30 Dec 2015
I like the way you describe the smile – genuine, creases round the eyes, with a private twinkle in the eye – that describes well the sharing of warmth, acceptance, sense of love, that is so missed if it's just a facial smile, feelings hidden....
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Terry, I think you'd get a
Posted on Thu, 24 Dec 2015
Terry, I think you'd get a lot more reads and analysis if you posted them as a series (maybe making them into a collection), say one every other day. Each could be read quite quickly then and maybe reread and thought about. (I know they're...
Read full commentPosted in Eugene and the Pumpkin Pie
Marcia this is lovely and
Posted on Thu, 03 Dec 2015
Marcia this is lovely and clever, the arrangements really works. Are you meaning this for Poetry Monthly which is all about visual poetry (see under 'blogs' at RH edge of page)? Usually we are encouraged to put (Poetry Monthly) in brackets in the...
Read full commentPosted in look away ..... .... ... .. . . . . . ."Poetry Monthly"
You've again skilfully woven
Posted on Tue, 01 Dec 2015
You've again skilfully woven your tale, with rhythm and rhyme, and many sharp points being made (eg the counterparts of diamonds, hearts, are never clubs or spades.)
Read full commentWhen there are injustices seeming done, and conclusions maybe...
Posted in Shut-Down City
an encouragement to cherish
Posted on Tue, 01 Dec 2015
an encouragement to cherish the good memories, and lay some down - in our own lives and in others'. Rhiannon
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Men searching, seeking to
Posted on Fri, 27 Nov 2015
Men searching, seeking to understand … get a glimpse, but can't see the whole of the answer … only supernatural revelation can do that, fill in the gaps, even help us understand the words we are told, or as much as we need to know. Rhiannon
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Interestingly put, Tina. So
Posted on Thu, 26 Nov 2015
Interestingly put, Tina. So easy to get distraught over loose ends, and to miss 'jobs' more important or just noticing some beauty, which you so well describe.
(on rainbows, we were thrilled a couple of days ago in seeing a bright wide '...
Read full commentPosted in Ironing Unironed
Brings the era to life, or
Posted on Sat, 21 Nov 2015
Brings the era to life, or its trappings to memory. The longing for hugs is always there, whether the home be relatively poor, or rich, and whether we have them or don't, the value of them remains clearly felt. Rhiannon
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At least he knew he didn't
Posted on Thu, 19 Nov 2015
At least he knew he didn't look his age! Rhiannon
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This would make a lovely
Posted on Wed, 18 Nov 2015
This would make a lovely journal entry. And each observation brings in touch or sound as well as colour. It somehow feels tantalizing that you could develop it a bit more. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Summer
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