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What makes you attractive?
[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] Mercy and faithfulness …Garland attractive … help me love righteousness, bringing me happiness, to others blessedness.
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Sure hope of a world free from …
[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] Our world has beauty, but viruses ravage; much love and kindness, but sins hurt and damage. Our world is...
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Imagine …
I’m a lion in a cage in an angry roaring rage … … I’m a frightened little mouse quietly scuttling round the house. … I’m a Mummy feeling wild for I’...
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A tooth's tale!
18, and front teeth capped, filed to points and wrapped …in lockdown, the ‘full crown’ came loose One dentist had retired and appointments were scarce … get mixed with my sandwich …? …
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Packing
As you move on into this journey, future, this new year, abandon … acquire …
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That third verse is
Posted on Fri, 10 Apr 2015
That third verse is especially lovely, and captures that view. All birds of prey seem so elegant, especially the kite. Is the pic a kite, I thought their tails were always more, or less, forked? I know I'm sometimes puzzled at the 'less forked'...
Read full commentPosted in A First Foraging
I thought it was a dog, but
Posted on Mon, 30 Mar 2015
I thought it was a dog, but it seemed to be a cat! Liked the digging and the perfume. But wasn't sure about the 'his' in the last line - is it the husband having nine lives or should it be 'your' referring to the cat? Maybe I'm totally wrong, if...
Read full commentPosted in The Prodigal
What a lovely little inciden
Posted on Fri, 27 Mar 2015
What a lovely little inciden capturedt! Was it a green woodpecker? I gather they do hammer sometime but my husband used to tell me, if it's the hammering you hear, then it's the greater spotted. He keeps having to turn my attention to it anyway,...
Read full commentPosted in Spotted at Dawn
It's lovely what you took in
Posted on Sat, 07 Mar 2015
It's lovely what you took in in your micro-glance, refreshing you for the rest of your journey. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in The A1 Crosses the River Swale
A lot to think about there,
Posted on Sat, 21 Feb 2015
A lot to think about there, and well written of course. How difficult to live with great skill, humbly and kindly. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in "All the World's a Stage"
I can only say, how
Posted on Mon, 09 Feb 2015
I can only say, how compassionate and caring the staff are where my father-in-law is. (and it is just a basic nursing home, largely council funded, they have recently introduced a very minimal top-up and of course there is always means testing)....
Read full commentPosted in Room Six - Tooting Bec Asylum...1982
I really liked the way you
Posted on Tue, 03 Feb 2015
I really liked the way you slipped in the descriptions of the garden eg ' the smell of pine as refreshing as a bucket of snow, needles crunching underfoot.' That whole paragraph seems to have so much vivid description just tucked in...
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Horrible, Bee. Getting
Posted on Wed, 28 Jan 2015
Horrible, Bee. Getting callous like this to animal suffering, must so easily lead to callousness to human suffering too. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Giving Them a VOICE
A lot of concentrated vivid
Posted on Sun, 25 Jan 2015
A lot of concentrated vivid images here, and memories, and the contrast of attitudes to danger and hurts. Specially liked the first verse, and the lines about the moss. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Earth Heart (3)
Interesting cameo of bright
Posted on Fri, 16 Jan 2015
Interesting cameo of bright memories, a bit like Jolono's recent 'Under a London Sky' memories of the beginning of a courtship. I liked ''Occasion marked: Us and 'Coat-hanger tourists' too. The Brolga Dance certainly sounded...
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