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I have 2169 stories published in 17 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 5665286 times and 682 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1552 of my 13,433 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1601 votes

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Cherry

5

5 days for school – Monday, Tuesday, Wednesday, and then Thursday, Friday; 5 fingers on each hand (though one is called a thumb) 5 petals on a...

What do you want most this Christmas?

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] He offers what we need the most … Those things which we enjoyed at first were soon disclosed as really worst.… and in your heart his joy is wrought.
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Cherry

4

4 sides to a square …
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Cherry

3

… and every day there’s 3 main meals …

Procrastination

It may be too late, but never too soon, to say you are sorry, and get a duty done. Never too soon to remember your promise, but better late than...

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1552 of my comments have received 1601 Great Feedback votes

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So important, those last two

Posted on Mon, 28 Sep 2015

So important, those last two lines, and the whole poem speaks of imortant things being 'taught' that are probably unnoticed by many, rather than the whisking of children hither and thither for special experiences and 'education'. I think we found...

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Posted in A Natural Mum

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Nice little incident. There

Posted on Mon, 28 Sep 2015

Nice little incident. There are often those occasional little sparks of communiation, memories, and humour that help to realise that the confused person is still there somewhere inside, and help to be able to show love and warmth more...

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Posted in Journeys

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It does seem to have the feel

Posted on Sat, 26 Sep 2015

It does seem to have the feel of the girl who's been so sick and a bit nightmarey with fever, and feeling the oddness of convalescence and everything feeling distorted, and also the feel of a little girl wanting to be a bit removed from...

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Posted in Slow Burn

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Very enjoyable going on the

Posted on Thu, 24 Sep 2015

Very enjoyable going on the walk with you again, and the sense of time and the kind of noticing that goes with the speed, or lack of it, of a walk makes it seem very real. A lovely Pick of the Day too.
I've been trying to catch the...

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Posted in In July

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What a nice way to end, and

Posted on Sat, 19 Sep 2015

What a nice way to end, and even the advice she was able to give him, really just nudging him on the way he had been tending to go of realising how much these people had done for him, and his need of showing his changed attitudes.
It...

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Posted in The Wanderlust Lady and the Door to Door Salesman - 41 The End

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From an extremely brief

Posted on Mon, 14 Sep 2015

From an extremely brief offering to a very lengthy one! Certainly not sure I've followed it all (though as usual your rolling, rhythmic rhyming is very effective), but the thoughts that come to mind at the end are that there was a new start after...

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Posted in Boa's Ark

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A dream like mix of memories

Posted on Sat, 12 Sep 2015

A dream like mix of memories and imaginings and hopes to ease the stress? (did you mean 'dreams of memories' rather than 'dreamt of memories' in the last stanza?)

gifting treasures in the form of shells and gleaming gems –- a...

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Posted in Did You...

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Enjoyable scene as Bee says,

Posted on Sat, 12 Sep 2015

Enjoyable scene as Bee says, and a clever use of the IP without making the colours too dominant. Rhiannon

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Posted in Eveningesque

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Oh, the tragedy and agony

Posted on Fri, 11 Sep 2015

Oh, the tragedy and agony that no-one, especially the mother, was watching over her wisely, perceptively, nurturingly. Rhiannon

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Posted in The One...

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How intriguing, Terry! There

Posted on Thu, 10 Sep 2015

How intriguing, Terry! There seems such a lot that can be unpacked from that: the fading things that come to life again, the relivening of the daze dismembering December (January sometimes seems a daze to people after the excitement of the end of...

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Posted in Remember

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