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I have 2155 stories published in 17 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 5518327 times and 677 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1546 of my 13,371 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1595 votes

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Atheism Folly

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] “There is no God”: the fool’s opinion. The Lord observes to see if anyone …

Big River, Big Life

Anaconda large and long with a squeeze that’s very strong … River dophins rather pink …cayman black …
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Cherry

Complicated lives of the little creatures!

…build retreats on rocks and vegetation with … skilfully spin a fine silk net, all set … eco-engineer …

The Rock

R is for Revelation, Righteous, Resurrected, Reigning … C is for Christ, crucifixion, coming, church …
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Cherry

The Wind in the Willows

The wind in the willows … buzzing and teeming …winter remembrances picture …
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1546 of my comments have received 1595 Great Feedback votes

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Can you see the stars clearly

Posted on Fri, 19 Jun 2015

Can you see the stars clearly where you are? When we were down in Pembrokeshire we got out on a clear night and it was good to see them so much more clearly (not that there is too much light pollution here), though we had to wait til so late for...

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Posted in I'm Not Here to Talk to You...

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Some perceptive points of

Posted on Sun, 14 Jun 2015

Some perceptive points of understanding of the struggles of teenage years. So many are afraid to try to teach their young anything, and afraid to get close even, and listen and understand and share and love. Rhiannon

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Posted in ‘Excuse Me for My Suicide’

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To be ignored can hurt so

Posted on Thu, 11 Jun 2015

To be ignored can hurt so much more than to be reviled. But some people do find it so hard to show feelings, and show caring, even if they do. Maybe they got hurt when young too? So, bitterness isn't going to help, maybe trying to show some...

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Posted in Requiem to a Friendship Damaged

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packed to bursting with

Posted on Mon, 01 Jun 2015

packed to bursting with metaphor and detail of stealthy activity of dusk! Rhiannon

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Posted in Night Moves...

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Thank you so much again,

Posted on Tue, 26 May 2015

Thank you so much again, Stephen for that thoughtful appreciation, and I am so glad you enjoy these verses. It is difficult to analyse one's own writing. I certainly try to keep a rhythm and make quite a bit of use of rhyme and consonant and part...

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Posted in Coastal Path (3) – birds

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So enjoyed catching up with

Posted on Tue, 19 May 2015

So enjoyed catching up with this one, Tina. So many little details brought in lightly. Liked the bonfires' end and the starlings. Rhiannon

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Posted in Run Roe Deer Run

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Brings to mind scenes from

Posted on Thu, 14 May 2015

Brings to mind scenes from the era of my childhood somehow.
On second time round reading this, I think the 'goodbye to brief lives and all that might have been.' and the ceasing to be, brings to my mind a pratical approach...

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Posted in A Small Ceasing to Be

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I've been wanting to get out

Posted on Wed, 06 May 2015

I've been wanting to get out into the countryside at night, and forgetting, or the difficulties of our caring for the elderly. My daughter spent a year high in the Alps and spoke wonderingly about the clarity of the 'jewels in the sky'. A few...

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Posted in Lights in the Sky

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I have never been there, and

Posted on Mon, 04 May 2015

I have never been there, and not likely to, now. This sounds like it is based on a lovely clear etched memory. Rhiannon

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Posted in Now Blooms the Magnolia

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I feel I'm watching into the

Posted on Fri, 01 May 2015

I feel I'm watching into the tank to try and decide what my in-laws want to do.
What I found with both of them is that though we would try to get some stimulation going, eg videos, they would easily say they'd seen it before or weren't...

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Posted in Surface Tension

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