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Can you see the stars clearly
Posted on Fri, 19 Jun 2015
Can you see the stars clearly where you are? When we were down in Pembrokeshire we got out on a clear night and it was good to see them so much more clearly (not that there is too much light pollution here), though we had to wait til so late for...
Read full commentPosted in I'm Not Here to Talk to You...
Some perceptive points of
Posted on Sun, 14 Jun 2015
Some perceptive points of understanding of the struggles of teenage years. So many are afraid to try to teach their young anything, and afraid to get close even, and listen and understand and share and love. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in ‘Excuse Me for My Suicide’
To be ignored can hurt so
Posted on Thu, 11 Jun 2015
To be ignored can hurt so much more than to be reviled. But some people do find it so hard to show feelings, and show caring, even if they do. Maybe they got hurt when young too? So, bitterness isn't going to help, maybe trying to show some...
Read full commentPosted in Requiem to a Friendship Damaged
packed to bursting with
Posted on Mon, 01 Jun 2015
packed to bursting with metaphor and detail of stealthy activity of dusk! Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Night Moves...
Thank you so much again,
Posted on Tue, 26 May 2015
Thank you so much again, Stephen for that thoughtful appreciation, and I am so glad you enjoy these verses. It is difficult to analyse one's own writing. I certainly try to keep a rhythm and make quite a bit of use of rhyme and consonant and part...
Read full commentPosted in Coastal Path (3) – birds
So enjoyed catching up with
Posted on Tue, 19 May 2015
So enjoyed catching up with this one, Tina. So many little details brought in lightly. Liked the bonfires' end and the starlings. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Run Roe Deer Run
Brings to mind scenes from
Posted on Thu, 14 May 2015
Brings to mind scenes from the era of my childhood somehow.
Read full commentOn second time round reading this, I think the 'goodbye to brief lives and all that might have been.' and the ceasing to be, brings to my mind a pratical approach...
Posted in A Small Ceasing to Be
I've been wanting to get out
Posted on Wed, 06 May 2015
I've been wanting to get out into the countryside at night, and forgetting, or the difficulties of our caring for the elderly. My daughter spent a year high in the Alps and spoke wonderingly about the clarity of the 'jewels in the sky'. A few...
Read full commentPosted in Lights in the Sky
I have never been there, and
Posted on Mon, 04 May 2015
I have never been there, and not likely to, now. This sounds like it is based on a lovely clear etched memory. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Now Blooms the Magnolia
I feel I'm watching into the
Posted on Fri, 01 May 2015
I feel I'm watching into the tank to try and decide what my in-laws want to do.
Read full commentWhat I found with both of them is that though we would try to get some stimulation going, eg videos, they would easily say they'd seen it before or weren't...
Posted in Surface Tension
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