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I have 2103 stories published in 17 collections on the site.
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Think about it!

And none can tell what agony he suffered in that agonizing crucifixion. Yes, helped, but do not underestimate prolonging torture, slow extinction of...

Two bowls

His job to put fresh food waste out (and through the day she piled the lot into a bowl upon the shelf) but often he forgot. One day he heard her give a shout – ‘Where is my salad bowl …

The Servant King (Maundy Thursday)

A gentle King who on a donkey rode, and then humility he also showed by washing feet – but know this humble King has all the mighty power which can...

Jesus approaching his departure

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] The time was coming soon – he knew just what he’d have to bear and do in love to save his people – all who...

Looking down on the city’s departures …

Like spokes on a wheel they travel out far in all directions, by train or car. Going where? and Why? … When weary of going will they be knowing …

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1537 of my comments have received 1585 Great Feedback votes

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Well put, Taris. I think I

Posted on Wed, 09 Jul 2014

Well put, Taris. I think I would add that the desire to obey God needs to be there, though if it is really there then there will be a realisation of the need for his help to do so, and for his forgiveness of the constant failings.
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Posted in Burning Bridges

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The contrast of escape to the

Posted on Mon, 07 Jul 2014

The contrast of escape to the garden peace, observation and imagination, with the tension of everyday struggles of communications and misunderstandings of relationship interestingly portrayed, Maisie. Rhiannon

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Posted in the bench

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You leave us with wondering

Posted on Tue, 01 Jul 2014

You leave us with wondering about the background to this. Rhiannon

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Posted in White Walls Of Hope

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This is very touching, real

Posted on Tue, 01 Jul 2014

This is very touching, real and vivid. The slow bereavement, the mind swimming about, but not agitated. The brevity and conciseness and form helps. Rhiannon

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Posted in For Ann

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Some lovely threads, and

Posted on Tue, 24 Jun 2014

Some lovely threads, and detail again – so much beauty out there to see and feel, and you share and beckon us to look! Rhiannon

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Posted in Poetry and That

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It  is the videoing aspect,

Posted on Tue, 10 Jun 2014

It  is the videoing aspect, and it would seem the lack of sober trial, and the apparent pleasure and fickleness in accusing and carrying out judgement that is puzzling and shocking. Or am I wrong? Rhiannon

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Posted in Crime and Punishment

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I'm only able to dip in from

Posted on Sun, 01 Jun 2014

I'm only able to dip in from time to time, as we are having a little holiday.
You have given much thought here to bring in quite a number of points unobtrusively on tthe history. Rhiannon
 

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Posted in "Oh, It's a Lovely War!"

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That last verse seems

Posted on Tue, 27 May 2014

That last verse seems tantalizing – what is she/you troubled about in the relationship/conversation? hope waking manages to put the worry to rest?! I suppose it is all up to the reader to imagine? Rhiannon

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Posted in A Glass of Water

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Some helpful thoughts there,

Posted on Wed, 07 May 2014

Some helpful thoughts there, Taris. And a very helpful Bible verse. In the last sentence do you mean 'Study his (God's) word'? Rhiannon

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Posted in Our Prayers

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Beautiful and comfortable,

Posted on Fri, 02 May 2014

Beautiful and comfortable, sprightly, and certainly not in a routine rut! Enjoyed your comfortable musing. Rhiannon

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Posted in The Blue Chair

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