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I have 2105 stories published in 17 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 5073956 times and 656 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1538 of my 13,402 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1586 votes

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Jesus approaching his departure

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] The time was coming soon – he knew just what he’d have to bear and do in love to save his people – all who...

Looking down on the city’s departures …

Like spokes on a wheel they travel out far in all directions, by train or car. Going where? and Why? … When weary of going will they be knowing …

Answers – Clarity

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] Wisdom’s calling: answers now for those troubled, wondering how to make sense of troubled days, progress...
Cherry

Contrast focussing thought

If we hadn’t sat though winter drear would the snowdrops rouse such cheer? Would the …
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Light for the stumbling

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] The world was dark, a place of stumbling ground, the residents for truth fumbled around; In pity, God, who...

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1538 of my comments have received 1586 Great Feedback votes

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Beautiful and comfortable,

Posted on Fri, 02 May 2014

Beautiful and comfortable, sprightly, and certainly not in a routine rut! Enjoyed your comfortable musing. Rhiannon

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Posted in The Blue Chair

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a 'you-shaped hole' – that's

Posted on Mon, 28 Apr 2014

a 'you-shaped hole' – that's very expressive of  loss of any kind, and so difficult for anyone else to understand and appreciate.
(I remember being so glad when we exchanged our very oil-marked kitchen carpet for a piece of vinyl!) ...

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Posted in After You'd Gone...

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Choosing pebbles/choosing

Posted on Mon, 21 Apr 2014

Choosing pebbles/choosing words, smooth right through – a vivid metaphor, while keeping private the mysteries of the occasion. Rhiannon

(liked the picture, reminded me of some seen on stormy beaches – I think people return to see if they'...

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Posted in Stones

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Can't say I understand all

Posted on Sat, 19 Apr 2014

Can't say I understand all your musings here, Tina. But I'm happy that scripture makes clear that Jesus is coming back, but that will be the culmination of all, - yes the resurrection of the dead, but also a judgement, so that it is so important...

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Posted in A Sudden Resurrection (I.P.)

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Apart from your usual

Posted on Sat, 19 Apr 2014

Apart from your usual niftyness with rhythm and rhyme, Alvin, you have opened up, with a light touch,  good thoughts about developing a loving care, a real constant sharing and thinking of the others ups and downs, and needs, and not just '...

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Posted in I NEVER HEARD HER CRY

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Is the picture yours, Bee?

Posted on Thu, 17 Apr 2014

Is the picture yours, Bee? This has a lovely feel of painting someone and mixing it with memories and so many thoughts of the person that can't be painted on and yet somehow can affect the painting to somehow impart character and experiences....

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Posted in Emily

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Well, Bee, it just shows - I

Posted on Mon, 07 Apr 2014

Well, Bee, it just shows - I only just noticed this now, because I checked on you, as so often I mostly have a check of the new poetry.  I too have a growing list of contributors, many of whom mostly do prose only, and see what I can follow. I've...

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Posted in Complaint

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Hi, Moya, read all three

Posted on Mon, 31 Mar 2014

Hi, Moya, read all three parts together. You seem to have started on a huge labour!
I was intrigued by your moving from 'the big, bad businesses' and the pleasure people  have in laying into anonymous people as a group, to the more personal...

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Posted in The Labour Planet - A Working Title - Part Three

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A beautiful place, well

Posted on Tue, 01 Apr 2014

A beautiful place, well described, which I know well, though this seems to have been a sad, poignant journey up. Rhiannon

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Posted in Mynydd Carningli (for TP's parents)

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Nice to remember these family

Posted on Fri, 28 Mar 2014

Nice to remember these family and funny incidents. I feel all such malapropisms I've heard have comepletly gone from my mind, but maybe some will come back. I do remember one of my sons who was reading quite early asking, with bewilderment why...

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Posted in Out of the Mouths...(I.P.)

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