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Atheism Folly
[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] “There is no God”: the fool’s opinion. The Lord observes to see if anyone …
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Big River, Big Life
Anaconda large and long with a squeeze that’s very strong … River dophins rather pink …cayman black …
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Complicated lives of the little creatures!
…build retreats on rocks and vegetation with … skilfully spin a fine silk net, all set … eco-engineer …
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The Rock
R is for Revelation, Righteous, Resurrected, Reigning … C is for Christ, crucifixion, coming, church …
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The Wind in the Willows
The wind in the willows … buzzing and teeming …winter remembrances picture …
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Sounds quite a special
Posted on Sat, 30 Aug 2014
Sounds quite a special holiday. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Holiday letter to Jess
From the skies, and ceiling,
Posted on Fri, 15 Aug 2014
From the skies, and ceiling, to the intriguing descriptions of his home, I enjoyed the structure of this piece, and for a moment forgot what I would really feel like living there myself. The idea of the changing patterns of the trash was good too...
Read full commentPosted in Another Man's Treasure
My mother-in-law, nearly 95,
Posted on Wed, 13 Aug 2014
My mother-in-law, nearly 95, has had no real contact with hearing/seeing the news for a long time. She read something brief recently, and commented, 'who would have thought in this day and age'. I was quite taken aback, realising she had...
Read full commentPosted in One of a Kind
I'm not sure if I read this
Posted on Sun, 03 Aug 2014
I'm not sure if I read this before, but if so, I think if so I must have done so too quickly. I have now caught its picture more clearly, and really feel how it has captured much of both worlds quite simply, and effectively.
Read full commentIt reminds me...
Posted in Touring the City
I enjoyed your journey among
Posted on Sat, 26 Jul 2014
I enjoyed your journey among the changing shades. Your spaces are much more vast than in England's farms and countryside, I think.
Read full commentI looked up Leshenaultia, but it seemed to have a 'c' between the 's' and 'h', if I had the right plant....
Posted in Yellow Days
This is very well 'sculpted',
Posted on Wed, 16 Jul 2014
This is very well 'sculpted', Bee, and the interweaving rhymes heighten the flow. So much unsaid, left to the imagination, including what kind of love could lead to such a parting, and the finality of not being able to yet ask that question...
Read full commentPosted in Smiling, Waving and Crying
I liked this very much too.
Posted on Sat, 12 Jul 2014
I liked this very much too. Concise, but not obscure. Actually, I thought that the rhino's horn looks like a pointed bone, so poetic licence! Particularly liked 'Labouring body lumbers' alliteration.
Read full commentand in the last lines...
Posted in Thandi
Well put, Taris. I think I
Posted on Wed, 09 Jul 2014
Well put, Taris. I think I would add that the desire to obey God needs to be there, though if it is really there then there will be a realisation of the need for his help to do so, and for his forgiveness of the constant failings.
Read full commentThere is...
Posted in Burning Bridges
The contrast of escape to the
Posted on Mon, 07 Jul 2014
The contrast of escape to the garden peace, observation and imagination, with the tension of everyday struggles of communications and misunderstandings of relationship interestingly portrayed, Maisie. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in the bench
You leave us with wondering
Posted on Tue, 01 Jul 2014
You leave us with wondering about the background to this. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in White Walls Of Hope
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