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I have 2174 stories published in 17 collections on the site.
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Why worry? Rather …

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] Fear of the future, all that’s unknown, helpless to mould it, weakness we own. Fear’s unproductive unless it turn, trust One who’s …

Appreciated

… not 'PUT-IN' power … 70 years of caring, gracious smile …
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Cherry

Diamonds of truth

I remember a child (about 8 years old) in Sunday School saying something like ‘It’s a good idea to say you believe in God – if it’s wrong you won’t...

Recognising our ignorance

The wisest know how ignorant they are … But He with power to hold within his hands the wind, … knows everything, all things He understands – so listen! to the truth He’s told …

Happy Weary Industry

Labourers wearily industrious in farm, field and hill - will they more leisure gain if machines take the strain? Industrial revolution. Folks flock...
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1552 of my comments have received 1601 Great Feedback votes

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I see you've done some work

Posted on Sat, 03 Mar 2018

I see you've done some work on this, smoothing, clarifying and introducing yet more ideas I think. Lots of interesting metaphors and observations. Personally, I feel you could in time probably make the reading even smoother, but that would...

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Posted in predator (just re uploaded)

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I think much of the time with

Posted on Fri, 02 Mar 2018

I think much of the time with dementia, or other types of memory loss, the self-awareness of that loss is quite limited, especially after the first stages. Sometimes it seems that much is lost that have been very superficial concerns, worries and...

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Posted in Lethe

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Lovely picture. Reminder to

Posted on Fri, 23 Feb 2018

Lovely picture. Reminder to listen to the 'snowball of sounds'! The birds seem to know the season's making gentle progress don't they? I like the idea of their stitching. Rhiannon

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Posted in emperor's new clothes

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You still seem to be inside

Posted on Wed, 21 Feb 2018

You still seem to be inside his skin, bringing to life so many difficulties of adolescence and the struggles of a rather isolated lad with fixations and not a lot of homely understanding and support. And the difficulties of all in the secondary...

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Posted in Jack Mutant - Which Way is Down? (part twelve)

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The Bible book of Proverbs

Posted on Tue, 20 Feb 2018

The Bible book of Proverbs has so much about using words, doesn't it? Empty gabbling (like your Niagra falls illustration), words that hurt unnecessarily, words that are healing (like your productive land illustration) and gentle. eg 'A word...

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Posted in More Words

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I guess the enjoyment of snow

Posted on Mon, 19 Feb 2018

I guess the enjoyment of snow gets more child-like again as we get older, as the need to travel for work doesn't bring the frustrations usually. Rhiannon

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Posted in The Snow

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Some thoughtful leading to

Posted on Sat, 17 Feb 2018

Some thoughtful leading to thinking about the blessing of the commandments, so important as a foundation in life, and to realising our need of his forgiveness for our failings, through Jesus's death and resurrection. Rhiannon

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Posted in Vacation Bible School (Book 2)

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I so liked your pun on the

Posted on Wed, 14 Feb 2018

I so liked your pun on the Inspiration Point!!  And I had to look up 'Freshet', which I must try to remember! Especially liked the last line, and the wealth of alliteration.

I was a bit puzzled by 'murmer curdles'  ('murmur'?) and...

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Posted in Chutes of Spring

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Real friendship need a real

Posted on Tue, 13 Feb 2018

Real friendship need a real sharing, and caring, not a 'face-book' like façade or platitudes. It is rare, but precious, and knows when to visit, when to leave, when to speak, understands, often through going through difficulties together....

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Posted in Hologram

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This seems in such stark

Posted on Sun, 04 Feb 2018

This seems in such stark contrast to what you describe as your beautiful Solway plain. Both the person and the countryside can be damaged, can come back to freshness. Rhiannon

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Posted in Dope

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