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Evocative memories. Nice to
Posted on Sat, 08 Oct 2022
Evocative memories. Nice to share. Reminded me of granddaughter emerging after we'd settled her last night, to say she's heard what she thought was a thief, and she was afraid. My husband had been earlier reading her a story where a missionary...
Read full commentPosted in Mysterious Times
Funny ending, oversleeping,
Posted on Thu, 06 Oct 2022
Funny ending, oversleeping, but the other contestant going out too soon! After all the dictating of less and less sleep, seemed funny to have to guess when to wake up. I take it this is very imaginative fiction! Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in The .......zzz ZZZ Part Four.
I hadn't heard of your bad
Posted on Sun, 02 Oct 2022
I hadn't heard of your bad storm, Richard. Glad you are over it and coped.
I liked the brief refernece to the lovely sound of the ripples at the end, when night hides the glints. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Ripples of Stream
This is very interesting
Posted on Fri, 30 Sep 2022
This is very interesting Maxine. I take it it really happened to you, not a made-up story. I think you said that the hours allowed for sleep were shortened each day. Will be interesting to read how it went. Long way to travel. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in The .......Part Two
Another lovely intense little
Posted on Sat, 01 Oct 2022
Another lovely intense little poem, feeling the rushing wind brushing your face! My father loved standing on the promenade in West Wales in a gale saying it was 'blowing the cobwebs from his head' after so much deskwork in London! I loved the...
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I respect how much you get on
Posted on Fri, 30 Sep 2022
I respect how much you get on with things, Jean, and also your openness about doing probably unwise things when exhausted. I liked your last sentence! It reminded me of ' And God is faithful; he will not let you be tempted beyond what you can...
Read full commentPosted in Chemo 10
Written so tightly, but begs
Posted on Sat, 24 Sep 2022
Written so tightly, but begs so many questions. Feel you get to know her enough to realise how much you'd like to understand as to how she is now! Did she keep clean from the cocaine herself, get through her degree, and the self-harming …? ...
Read full commentPosted in Sha-leigh - one of a series of my make-believe snapshots
I'm glad you highlighted the
Posted on Thu, 22 Sep 2022
I'm glad you highlighted the pleasure of taking time to breathe in the fragrances and feel the softness (and squelchiness sometimes!) of the damp green beneath your feet! Rhiannon;
Read full commentPosted in In Lucid Dreams
I'm so glad I know that that
Posted on Tue, 20 Sep 2022
I'm so glad I know that that is not the future!! Amazing to imagine a world government forming (must be authoritarian), but when that is superceded by a computer, I suppose there is no possibility of criticizing or changing its views at all...
Read full commentPosted in It's the year. . .
Difficult to comment on a
Posted on Wed, 21 Sep 2022
Difficult to comment on a story in progress. But your descriptions and vocabulary are well-thought out. I dislike halloween type stories or fictional meddling and fascination with evil, so not sure how I'll find your imaginations! Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in In the Vale of the Shadow King (Part Two of Six)
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