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I have 1835 stories published in 16 collections on the site.
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Fact truths, or ideas

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] “There are no absolutes” – some say: “just choose whatever suits – today. Be happy in your chosen way and...
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Wind and squelch and far views

4/1/23 Blasting wind on the Shropshire hills squelching down beside the narrow wooded Lydehole Dingle looking northwards over Cove Dale to Wenlock...
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Guaranteed Hope

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] King Jesus holds out hope that’s guaranteed by God: when sliding on a slippery slope, listen to loving Word...
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Tickety, tickety, tock,

Tickety, tickety, tock, all eyes upon the clock – the hand moves straight, time cannot wait – and never can flick or turn back! A second past...
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Light-Cycle

December weak light, January, bleak light, spring light increasing: warm, life-awakening … never none – … but never too far, deep-freezing, never too near, frizzling.
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1318 of my comments have received 1356 Great Feedback votes

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Evocative memories. Nice to

Posted on Sat, 08 Oct 2022

Evocative memories. Nice to share. Reminded me of granddaughter emerging after we'd settled her last night, to say she's heard what she thought was a thief, and she was afraid. My husband had been earlier reading her a story where a missionary...

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Posted in Mysterious Times

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Funny ending, oversleeping,

Posted on Thu, 06 Oct 2022

Funny ending, oversleeping, but the other contestant going out too soon! After all the dictating of less and less sleep, seemed funny to have to guess when to wake up. I take it this is very imaginative fiction! Rhiannon

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Posted in The .......zzz ZZZ Part Four.

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I hadn't heard of your bad

Posted on Sun, 02 Oct 2022

I hadn't heard of your bad storm, Richard. Glad you are over it and coped.

I liked the brief refernece to the lovely sound of the ripples at the end, when night hides the glints. Rhiannon

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Posted in Ripples of Stream

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This is very interesting

Posted on Fri, 30 Sep 2022

This is very interesting Maxine. I take it it really happened to you, not a made-up story. I think you said that the hours allowed for sleep were shortened each day. Will be interesting to read how it went. Long way to travel. Rhiannon

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Posted in The .......Part Two

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Another lovely intense little

Posted on Sat, 01 Oct 2022

Another lovely intense little poem, feeling the rushing wind brushing your face! My father loved standing on the promenade in West Wales in a gale saying it was 'blowing the cobwebs from his head' after so much deskwork in London! I loved the...

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Posted in high seas

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I respect how much you get on

Posted on Fri, 30 Sep 2022

I respect how much you get on with things, Jean, and also your openness about doing probably unwise things when exhausted. I liked your last sentence! It reminded me of ' And God is faithful; he will not let you be tempted beyond what you can...

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Posted in Chemo 10

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Written so tightly, but begs

Posted on Sat, 24 Sep 2022

Written so tightly, but begs so many questions. Feel you get to know her enough to realise how much you'd like to understand as to how she is now! Did she keep clean from the cocaine herself, get through her degree, and the self-harming …? ...

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Posted in Sha-leigh - one of a series of my make-believe snapshots

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I'm glad you highlighted the

Posted on Thu, 22 Sep 2022

I'm glad you highlighted the pleasure of taking time to breathe in the fragrances and feel the softness (and squelchiness sometimes!) of the damp green beneath your feet! Rhiannon;

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Posted in In Lucid Dreams

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I'm so glad I know that that

Posted on Tue, 20 Sep 2022

I'm so glad I know that that is not the future!! Amazing to imagine a world government forming (must be authoritarian), but when that is superceded by a computer, I suppose there is no possibility of criticizing or changing its views at all...

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Posted in It's the year. . .

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Difficult to comment on a

Posted on Wed, 21 Sep 2022

Difficult to comment on a story in progress. But your descriptions and vocabulary are well-thought out. I dislike halloween type stories or fictional meddling and fascination with evil, so not sure how I'll find your imaginations! Rhiannon

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Posted in In the Vale of the Shadow King (Part Two of Six)

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