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I have 2156 stories published in 17 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 5531818 times and 677 of my stories have been cherry picked.
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The difference between scorning and genuine doubts

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] 1) Cynical of truth and trust … 2) Those whose nagging doubts are real, puzzlement, confusion feel, but are willing to research …
Cherry

Larking about in the dark

“Let’s play in the dark”, said big sister. “Yes”, said little sister. Curtains drawn, lights out — what a lark! Bump! Waa-aa-aagh-aagh!! Lights on. ‘...
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Cherry

In a moment …

“I just bumped into a wall. I knew it was there and thought …

When circumstances are difficult and puzzling

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] Called out of darkness, freed and released … Darkness of troubles – ignorant of ‘Why?’ … So we can trust on in the dark days … Gone is the greater blindness of soul …
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1546 of my comments have received 1595 Great Feedback votes

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You certainly made an

Posted on Tue, 28 Nov 2023

You certainly made an entertaining nail-biting tale out of it. I think I had suspicions early on, and then got caught up in your tension! And I didn't think about those puzzling eyes in your image!

Are there laws about kittens crossing...

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Posted in The Targovishte Quandary - Part 3 of 3

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Brings out the calm of the

Posted on Tue, 28 Nov 2023

Brings out the calm of the end of day at the seashore beautifully. Rhiannon

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Posted in at dusk today

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A cold description of the

Posted on Sun, 26 Nov 2023

Enjoyed yourr compact cold description of the hard dull cold of the time of year. The piercing look of the grim-looking crows can easily make people think they can see such. (Wouldn't be any use to us if they could!) Rhiannon

Reminded me...

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Posted in A Murder of Crows (Transcendence)

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Fascinating still, especially

Posted on Sun, 26 Nov 2023

Fascinating still, especially when it is being experienced vicariously. Were you expecting to have to keep the children if you got them to your home, and how old are they? If that comes up in part 3, I can wait! Rhiannon

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Posted in The Targovishte Quandary - Part 2 of 3

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I don't know the spot, but

Posted on Mon, 27 Nov 2023

I don't know the spot, but know the area and can imagine its tranquility and the delight of tumbling river, the old woodland and the moss and quiet with mountains and sea both close by. And also the pleasure of having memories of such a place to...

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Posted in Fairy Glen

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Thank you, I'm glad it

Posted on Sat, 25 Nov 2023

Thank you, I'm glad it sounded right with a real cat-owner! Our family, plus cat have moved down the road, and we wonder whether he'll make his way back to our quiet place once he's allowed outside again! Rhiannon

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Posted in A place for a snooze

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Thoughtful.

Posted on Sat, 25 Nov 2023

Thoughtful.

In paragraph one did you mean 'invisible' not invincible? and later on How her mother is doing. She is ill. Critically ill should it be 'How her mother is dying'? Rhiannon

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Posted in Free ice creams every day

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Captivating tale, and very

Posted on Sat, 25 Nov 2023

Captivating tale, and very frustrating to have to wait furher illumination! Well told. I see it is autobiography, and wonder how long ago it was. Rhiannon

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Posted in The Targovishte Quandary - Part 1 of 3

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Yes, your words flow and

Posted on Tue, 21 Nov 2023

Yes, your words flow and descriptions always capture, and you bring out the positives that people have been blessed with even when cut short. The after-life we can have has been made known to us as being bettter than a continuation of walking in...

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Posted in Those We Leave Behind

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I didn't have a picture of a

Posted on Mon, 20 Nov 2023

I didn't have a picture of a fruit fly larva, and thought, just make the point about roughly how small the brain is, - a poppy seed is just under one millimeter I gather. The way that the DNA is 'read' in our cells is being realised to be more...

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Posted in What's going on inside?

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