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I have 1835 stories published in 16 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2536181 times and 535 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1318 of my 12,051 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1356 votes

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November 5

Fizzing fireworks brief and bright red and orange, gold and white, rocket, catherine wheel and candle, silent sparklers – carrot handle for the metal...
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Jesus touched the leper

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] He came and begged on bended knee, with great desire, humility, believing Christ’s ability: Christ touched...

Aging Glow

Rosy glow in old age appearing …
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Pressures

Who’d be a politician? – reviled, however hard they tend to their constituents’ needs, and pompousness discard. … Would you have stood aright? …

Demons shudder

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] People laugh at fear of sprites, ghosts or ghouls, and all such frights … do they ever really wonder is...

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1318 of my comments have received 1356 Great Feedback votes

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Good to read your writing

Posted on Wed, 03 Aug 2022

Good to read your writing full of good humour again, Jean, and that you are still able to enjoy life, and have your daughter(s)' company. Also good that some of the Palsy problem has stopped, maybe these things can quietly improve when you aren't...

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Posted in chemo 4

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Enjoyed the gently drawn

Posted on Wed, 03 Aug 2022

Enjoyed the gently drawn picture. Though at the end I wondered about the title, as their stages, seeming to reflect her own life.…liked their last stage when colours had dulled and become subtle. … had a great beauty.

Seems she...

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Posted in Age Cannot Wither Her

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realisitc and expressive!

Posted on Wed, 03 Aug 2022

realisitc and expressive! Could feel the experience! Rhiannon

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Posted in Sea Swept

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A metaphor for not

Posted on Wed, 03 Aug 2022

A metaphor for not unnecessarily provoking? Rhiannon

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Posted in How ******* Stupid Can You Get?

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Your last verse brings to

Posted on Mon, 01 Aug 2022

Your last verse brings to mind the constant sound of the crashing of the waves, with few to hear. Powerful and awesome and enjoyable. Rhiannon

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Posted in Fingal's Cave

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I think to leave memories in

Posted on Wed, 27 Jul 2022

I think to leave memories in the family of friends that are pleasant and even thankful is more important, One's name remembered with pleasure, at least for awhile. And to be in God's family, and that forever will be so much more wonderful too....

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Posted in Forget-Me-Not

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It's certainly a lovely area,

Posted on Sun, 24 Jul 2022

It's certainly a lovely area, especially out of the town on the Downs with the wind and views and sound of the crashing waves (I remember saying to my young sons once how I wished I could photograph the sound!), and even its own beach and the...

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Posted in The Artist of Swanage Downs

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Quite a picture of the cool

Posted on Fri, 22 Jul 2022

Quite a picture of the cool of the evening, with dust, and sound settling with the heat of the day. A strong memory. Rhiannon

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Posted in Bed and Board by The Silk Road

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The wind sounding vowels, and

Posted on Fri, 22 Jul 2022

The wind sounding vowels, and stones consonants! Interesting metaphor!

choices cedeed, monocrops seeded - deft phrasing!

We are commanded to be stewards in our world but to try to do good, not for greed.

and an...

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Posted in sound escape

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Even reading the term

Posted on Sat, 16 Jul 2022

Even reading the term 'woodland' brings a feeling of green shade, and a feeling of fresh air straying through it! Trees do seem to survive quite a waiting for rain, but then they can drink it up, and as you say it feeds their beauty. Is that...

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Posted in Silver Birch

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