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I have 1220 stories published in 6 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 3627436 times and 481 of my stories have been cherry picked.
2540 of my 18,821 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 2616 votes

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What a happy scene you've

Posted on Sun, 28 Jul 2019

What a happy scene you've created in this chapter Richard.

On to next part with anticipation.

Jenny.

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Posted in Someone's Son Chapter 13

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I'm glad Sheldon's dad is

Posted on Sun, 28 Jul 2019

I'm glad Sheldon's dad is back, after the last chapter I thought he'd gone again.

Jenny.

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Posted in Someone's Son Chapter 12

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Sounds like the children are

Posted on Sun, 28 Jul 2019

Sounds like the children are having a wonderful holiday and you're in a great part of the country too.

Jenny.

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Posted in West Wales

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Hello Di,

Posted on Sun, 28 Jul 2019

Hello Di,

I agree with insert, I could imagine you reading this poem to an audience, it has some great metaphors too, like:-

Stream's dark tongue slow seeks

down, seep low, cleaving,

licks silt lips' stillness....

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Posted in grass/july

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Still very much enjoying

Posted on Sat, 27 Jul 2019

Still very much enjoying Richard.

Jenny.

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Posted in Someone's Son Chapter 11

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Oh dear! I have a feeling

Posted on Sat, 27 Jul 2019

Oh dear! I have a feeling things are about to change in Sheldon's life. 

Jenny.

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Posted in Someone's Son Chapter 10

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What a wonderful chapter

Posted on Sat, 27 Jul 2019

What a wonderful chapter Richard, I could feel the atmosphere of Sheldon and his dad splashing around and then the party, you describe so well their feelings. It was a pleasure to read.

Jenny.

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Posted in Someone's Son Chapter 9

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That's amazing Richard, you

Posted on Fri, 26 Jul 2019

That's amazing Richard, you should feel very proud of yourself. I didn't know it was a true story, that makes it even more special.

Having Esther to proof read your work must have been such a great help, she sounds like a gem.

You...

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Posted in Someone's Son Chapter 7

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I wonder what Sheldon will do

Posted on Fri, 26 Jul 2019

I wonder what Sheldon will do! On to next part to find out.

Jenny.

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Posted in Someone's Son Chapter 8

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What a wonderful ending to

Posted on Fri, 26 Jul 2019

What a wonderful ending to this chapter. His dad seems like a great father.

Jenny.

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Posted in Someone's Son Chapter 7

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