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Lovely poem Penny. A reminder
Posted on Sat, 14 Sep 2019
Lovely poem Penny. A reminder of this beautiful creature and the inspiring nature all around, all we have to do is believe that just because we can't see something, doesn't mean it does not exist.
I loved Jenny's and Daniel's dreams of what they wished for, gave me a big smile, though I'm not really sure about Daniel's robots, but that's just me being a female. ...
Lovely poem Penny. A reminder
Posted on Sat, 14 Sep 2019
Lovely poem Penny. A reminder of this beautiful creature and the inspiring nature all around, all we have to do is believe that just because we can't see something, doesn't mean it does not exist.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in There are no such things as Unicorns
Hi Penny,
Posted on Sat, 14 Sep 2019
Hi Penny,
your imagination is astounding and I'm so glad I can share this adventure.
Thank you for sharing.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in "The Trouble with Magical Beings" (A Fantasy) Chapter 7
Oh! Penny, this is fantastic.
Posted on Sat, 07 Sep 2019
Oh! Penny, this is fantastic. You've lovingly restored my childhood days.
You've managed to tap into your characters minds.
Still very much enjoying.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in "The Trouble with Magical Beings" (A Fantasy) Chapter 5
Hi Richard,
Posted on Sat, 07 Sep 2019
Hi Richard,
I like the way you describe wanting to savour every moment, for moments can be gone in an instant.
You also describe that wonderful feeling of being retired and having time to just be and enjoy those moments under a...
Read full commentPosted in Hush at Last
Hi Penny,
Posted on Thu, 05 Sep 2019
Hi Penny,
I loved Jenny's and Daniel's dreams of what they wished for, gave me a big smile, though I'm not really sure about Daniel's robots, but that's just me being a female. ...
Read full commentPosted in "The Trouble with Magical Beings" (A Fantasy) Chapter 3
Hi Penny,
Posted on Tue, 03 Sep 2019
Hi Penny,
I like your poem and the dreamy idea of gazing up and wondering what's out there feeding your imagination.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Looking up
Brilliant story Penny and
Posted on Wed, 04 Sep 2019
Brilliant story Penny and right up my street. Can't wait to read more.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in "The Trouble with Magical Beings " (A fairytale) Chapter 1
A clever poem Di,
Posted on Tue, 03 Sep 2019
A clever poem Di,
I like the idea of us all being stones in the wall and holding each other up, but if one should escape and another follows, the wall could collapse.
like you say, to keep in balance we have to work together with...
Read full commentPosted in wall
Hi Jane,
Posted on Sun, 01 Sep 2019
Hi Jane,
that second stanza was so moving. Especially:-
The gulping sea eternal, my cradle
We watched you ride her curling lips
A very clever metaphor and symbol of how this amazing creature shows to be a gentle giant...
Read full commentPosted in Echoes of a Dead Whale
Definitely a dreamy poem
Posted on Sat, 31 Aug 2019
Definitely a dreamy poem Richard, with a need to write.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Wind at My Back
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