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Arn't those birds amazing
Posted on Thu, 31 Oct 2019
Arn't those birds amazing with the designs they make in the sky? Like your poem with it's creative images, they are magnificent to watch and the most artistic birds when in flight.
I love the idea of them looking like a scatter of black...
You describe a wild child in those first five lines which I adore. That feeling of wanting...yet needing freedom to be you and not what others expect. Having those little reminders at the end of your poem, so as to not give up hope, but like the...
what you are telling me is so much like the schools around where I live, young people drug pushing and teenagers living with no hope and so becoming addicted. My partner's grand daugher who is twenty two said she won't be getting...
Some beautiful and mysterious information in your poem onemorething. I've never seen a black heron like the one in your picture before, I agree they are very much Halloween birds with those huge majestic wings. You've captured their essence...
what a crazy mix up. It must have been devastating for him as much as it was for you. Isn't it strange how we can misunderstand situations? I wonder how different things would have been had you stuck around and spoken to him...
the passion you felt for Al shines through in this part. It's not just the fact that you loved him, but that you were willing to give up every thing for him. When we're young we need our dreams and should take chances...well in my...
I was so absorbed in this part of your life. It reminded me of a time in my own life when love got the better of me. Love can be so cruel at times, yet wonderful at other times.
Arn't those birds amazing
Posted on Thu, 31 Oct 2019
Arn't those birds amazing with the designs they make in the sky? Like your poem with it's creative images, they are magnificent to watch and the most artistic birds when in flight.
I love the idea of them looking like a scatter of black...
Read full commentPosted in starlings
This is such an appealing
Posted on Mon, 28 Oct 2019
This is such an appealing poem onemorething. I love the idea of painting on wings and disappearing with this little bird. Enchanted as always.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Tree from a window
You describe a wild child in
Posted on Sat, 26 Oct 2019
You describe a wild child in those first five lines which I adore. That feeling of wanting...yet needing freedom to be you and not what others expect. Having those little reminders at the end of your poem, so as to not give up hope, but like the...
Read full commentPosted in Wood Anemones
Hello Di,
Posted on Thu, 24 Oct 2019
Hello Di,
what you are telling me is so much like the schools around where I live, young people drug pushing and teenagers living with no hope and so becoming addicted. My partner's grand daugher who is twenty two said she won't be getting...
Read full commentPosted in Uncertainties
Some beautiful and mysterious
Posted on Fri, 25 Oct 2019
Some beautiful and mysterious information in your poem onemorething. I've never seen a black heron like the one in your picture before, I agree they are very much Halloween birds with those huge majestic wings. You've captured their essence...
Read full commentPosted in Black Herons
What an amazing sight to see
Posted on Fri, 25 Oct 2019
What an amazing sight to see all those apples piled high and getting used. I like how you descibe what you are seeing, in this poem.
We have crows and magpies that simply love to sit in the neighbour's apple tree and peck away at the fruit...
Read full commentPosted in Harvest!
A disturbing story that
Posted on Wed, 23 Oct 2019
A disturbing story that leaves the reader wondering as to whether Robin is found guilty or not.
Some great descriptions which gave the story atmosphere and you had me absorbed from beginning to end.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Judith Wilkinson
Oh dear Jean,
Posted on Thu, 24 Oct 2019
Oh dear Jean,
what a crazy mix up. It must have been devastating for him as much as it was for you. Isn't it strange how we can misunderstand situations? I wonder how different things would have been had you stuck around and spoken to him...
Read full commentPosted in Al in Minneapolis
Oh Jean,
Posted on Sun, 20 Oct 2019
Oh Jean,
the passion you felt for Al shines through in this part. It's not just the fact that you loved him, but that you were willing to give up every thing for him. When we're young we need our dreams and should take chances...well in my...
Read full commentPosted in Al and the Wonderful Summer
Hi Jean,
Posted on Sat, 19 Oct 2019
Hi Jean,
I was so absorbed in this part of your life. It reminded me of a time in my own life when love got the better of me. Love can be so cruel at times, yet wonderful at other times.
On to next part with anticipation.
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Read full commentPosted in Al and the Levecar
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