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Sounds like the children are
Posted on Sun, 28 Jul 2019
Sounds like the children are having a wonderful holiday and you're in a great part of the country too.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in West Wales
Hello Di,
Posted on Sun, 28 Jul 2019
Hello Di,
I agree with insert, I could imagine you reading this poem to an audience, it has some great metaphors too, like:-
Stream's dark tongue slow seeks
down, seep low, cleaving,
licks silt lips' stillness....
Read full commentPosted in grass/july
Still very much enjoying
Posted on Sat, 27 Jul 2019
Still very much enjoying Richard.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Someone's Son Chapter 11
Oh dear! I have a feeling
Posted on Sat, 27 Jul 2019
Oh dear! I have a feeling things are about to change in Sheldon's life.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Someone's Son Chapter 10
What a wonderful chapter
Posted on Sat, 27 Jul 2019
What a wonderful chapter Richard, I could feel the atmosphere of Sheldon and his dad splashing around and then the party, you describe so well their feelings. It was a pleasure to read.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Someone's Son Chapter 9
That's amazing Richard, you
Posted on Fri, 26 Jul 2019
That's amazing Richard, you should feel very proud of yourself. I didn't know it was a true story, that makes it even more special.
Having Esther to proof read your work must have been such a great help, she sounds like a gem.
You...
Read full commentPosted in Someone's Son Chapter 7
I wonder what Sheldon will do
Posted on Fri, 26 Jul 2019
I wonder what Sheldon will do! On to next part to find out.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Someone's Son Chapter 8
What a wonderful ending to
Posted on Fri, 26 Jul 2019
What a wonderful ending to this chapter. His dad seems like a great father.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Someone's Son Chapter 7
The trouble with Troy is that
Posted on Fri, 26 Jul 2019
The trouble with Troy is that he knows Sheldon is too scared of him. It's hard to keep away from bullies when they're so close. I hope Sheldon starts to realize that friends just don't scare each other.
Onto next part.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Someone's Son Chapter 6
I don't know why, but part of
Posted on Fri, 26 Jul 2019
I don't know why, but part of me feels sorry for Troy, he seems to be a troubled boy that's in need of help.
Still continuing to enjoy.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Someone's Son Balance of Chapter 5
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