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Hi Penny,
Posted on Thu, 05 Sep 2019
Hi Penny,
I loved Jenny's and Daniel's dreams of what they wished for, gave me a big smile, though I'm not really sure about Daniel's robots, but that's just me being a female. ...
that poem about I'm nearly three you can't see me, reminded me of when my son was that age and I'd play peep o with him, by putting my hands across my eyes and then opeing them, it would have him giggling so much. You've...
Hi Penny,
Posted on Thu, 05 Sep 2019
Hi Penny,
I loved Jenny's and Daniel's dreams of what they wished for, gave me a big smile, though I'm not really sure about Daniel's robots, but that's just me being a female. ...
Read full commentPosted in "The Trouble with Magical Beings" (A Fantasy) Chapter 3
Hi Penny,
Posted on Tue, 03 Sep 2019
Hi Penny,
I like your poem and the dreamy idea of gazing up and wondering what's out there feeding your imagination.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Looking up
Brilliant story Penny and
Posted on Wed, 04 Sep 2019
Brilliant story Penny and right up my street. Can't wait to read more.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in "The Trouble with Magical Beings " (A fairytale) Chapter 1
A clever poem Di,
Posted on Tue, 03 Sep 2019
A clever poem Di,
I like the idea of us all being stones in the wall and holding each other up, but if one should escape and another follows, the wall could collapse.
like you say, to keep in balance we have to work together with...
Read full commentPosted in wall
Hi Jane,
Posted on Sun, 01 Sep 2019
Hi Jane,
that second stanza was so moving. Especially:-
The gulping sea eternal, my cradle
We watched you ride her curling lips
A very clever metaphor and symbol of how this amazing creature shows to be a gentle giant...
Read full commentPosted in Echoes of a Dead Whale
Definitely a dreamy poem
Posted on Sat, 31 Aug 2019
Definitely a dreamy poem Richard, with a need to write.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Wind at My Back
Di, that's amazing. To think
Posted on Thu, 29 Aug 2019
Di, that's amazing. To think you witnessed that sparrowg in distress, then thankfully it was fine. I'm so glad the poor bird was okay in the end.
I've had to stop feeding the wild birds because certain people in our local magazine have...
Read full commentPosted in With Obsidian Eyes
Sounds like the beginning of
Posted on Tue, 27 Aug 2019
Sounds like the beginning of an interesting story.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Love has no boundaries
What a great idea for the I P
Posted on Thu, 22 Aug 2019
What a great idea for the I P Rhiannon.
I love the fact they were all strangers when they got on the bus, yet all the commotion had bought them closer.
A fun poem with plenty of rhythm and rhyme.
Very much enjoyed.
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Read full commentPosted in from the bus' mouth …
Hi Rhiannon,
Posted on Mon, 19 Aug 2019
Hi Rhiannon,
that poem about I'm nearly three you can't see me, reminded me of when my son was that age and I'd play peep o with him, by putting my hands across my eyes and then opeing them, it would have him giggling so much. You've...
Read full commentPosted in KidsSpeak
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