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THE CHOSEN ONES ( PART FOUR )

By skinner_jennifer on Thu, 24 Mar 2011

now we are getting know the family.

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THE CHOSEN ONES ( PART THREE )

By skinner_jennifer on Thu, 24 Mar 2011

The child realises she made a mistake.

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THE CHOSEN ONES ( PART TWO )

By skinner_jennifer on Wed, 23 Mar 2011

The child knew she was doing wrong, but couldn't resist the fine herbs.

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THE CHOSEN ONES ( PART ONE )

By skinner_jennifer on Wed, 23 Mar 2011

Another part of the introduction to the story.

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I have to say that I really

Posted on Wed, 30 May 2018

I have to say that I really enjoyed that first stanza, I could just picture a moss covered wall and on the other side a bank leading down to a woodland of bluebells.

So beautiful and mysterious.

Jenny.

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I enjoyed your poem Di, it

Posted on Mon, 28 May 2018

I enjoyed your poem Di, it had a lighthearted feel to it as I read. I could feel the cool air as the turbines rotate.

Relaxing read.

Jenny..

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I had this vision in my mind

Posted on Thu, 12 Apr 2018

I had this vision in my mind's eye of a woman sitting on a cliff top looking out to sea and reminiscing of lost love. I know I'm probably miles away from what your poem was saying, but I found it so haunting and sad, yet so poetic and written...

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I can understand exactly

Posted on Mon, 19 Mar 2018

I can understand exactly where you're coming from Richard. It takes so many hours of hard writing and searching for answers to your questions, I think only other writers really understand the amount of time that goes into putting a piece of work...

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Hi Elsie,

Posted on Mon, 19 Mar 2018

Hi Elsie,

just loved reading this piece, especially the bit about:-

Festival and carnival and fireworks to bright the dull

Seventies and eighties fancy dress and shops that sell it.

Fish and chips, cornish pasty,...

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I'm very much enjoying

Posted on Mon, 19 Mar 2018

I'm very much enjoying reading these chapters Richard. Gives great insight into another time, another place in history which always fascinates me.

I'm looking forward to finding out if there maybe love in Matties eyes.

Jenny.

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Some great descriptions here

Posted on Tue, 13 Mar 2018

Some great descriptions here Richard, you could be describing the two crows that come to feed in our garden every morning, especially in the last stanza.

Enjoyed reading.

Jenny.

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Being able to translate into

Posted on Fri, 09 Mar 2018

Being able to translate into poetry what you are seeing, is such a gift. You have that talent in bucket loads in this poem. I was with you all the way and very much enjoyed reading.

Jenny,

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Feels like a true story of

Posted on Tue, 06 Mar 2018

Feels like a true story of the way many people feel. Makes me glad I'm out of the rat race, as I hated the last job I had and couldn't wait to be made redundant.

Good read.

Jenny.

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What a great idea for a poem

Posted on Fri, 23 Feb 2018

What a great idea for a poem. Love the idea of the title, 'invisible air is cut and sown' kind of said it all for me.

Enjoyed and thank you for sharing.

Jenny.