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Some food for thought in this
Posted on Wed, 09 Oct 2019
Some food for thought in this poem Rhiannon. You got me thinking about when, where and how I came to write a poem or story.I suppose it's a bit like writing a post card to someone and remembering the country or resort, but not absolutely sure...
I love how you bring Ella Fitzgerald's voice into the poem, that is a wonderful way to describe her voice. Like her voice this poem is so relaxing and unhurried, the words just flow so easily and left me with a calm feeling.
Hares live in such a fragile different world to us, I think you've incredible insight into these creatures in your poem, showing not only their courage, but also their acceptance for failure.
I was so looking forward to the next part of your story Penny, and you haven't disappointed. This little band of friends are certainly having an adventure they won't forget.
Brilliant! I also agree with airyfairy about getting it published...
I like how you speak of autumn like old age, because that's exactly what it represents to me. Those resting years when we can teach the young what we've learned from being a child through to mother hood and lead them with hope in their hearts....
Some food for thought in this
Posted on Wed, 09 Oct 2019
Some food for thought in this poem Rhiannon. You got me thinking about when, where and how I came to write a poem or story.I suppose it's a bit like writing a post card to someone and remembering the country or resort, but not absolutely sure...
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I love how you bring Ella
Posted on Mon, 07 Oct 2019
I love how you bring Ella Fitzgerald's voice into the poem, that is a wonderful way to describe her voice. Like her voice this poem is so relaxing and unhurried, the words just flow so easily and left me with a calm feeling.
Thank you Di...
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Great Rhinnaon and so full of
Posted on Sat, 05 Oct 2019
Great Rhinnaon and so full of fun to read, put a smile on my face.
Jenny.
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Hares live in such a fragile
Posted on Fri, 04 Oct 2019
Hares live in such a fragile different world to us, I think you've incredible insight into these creatures in your poem, showing not only their courage, but also their acceptance for failure.
Jenny.
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Hi Rhiannon,
Posted on Wed, 02 Oct 2019
Hi Rhiannon,
your descriptions bring together the enduring like minded harmony and beauty.
Enjoyed reading.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in A jewel, a flower and a friend
We too have the same problem
Posted on Wed, 02 Oct 2019
We too have the same problem with our car mirrors, but my partner''s the driver and it doesn't seem to bother him so I just leave them alone.
Jenny.
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I was so looking forward to
Posted on Thu, 26 Sep 2019
I was so looking forward to the next part of your story Penny, and you haven't disappointed. This little band of friends are certainly having an adventure they won't forget.
Brilliant! I also agree with airyfairy about getting it published...
Read full commentPosted in "The Trouble with Magical Beings" (A Fantasy) Chapter 8
Perfect Rhiannon, and all my
Posted on Fri, 27 Sep 2019
Perfect Rhiannon, and all my sentiments exactly. Loved the idea of the patchwork of new display.
Lovely poem.
Jenny.
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I like how you speak of
Posted on Mon, 23 Sep 2019
I like how you speak of autumn like old age, because that's exactly what it represents to me. Those resting years when we can teach the young what we've learned from being a child through to mother hood and lead them with hope in their hearts....
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Such a juicy poem Di, that
Posted on Tue, 24 Sep 2019
Such a juicy poem Di, that sweet taste that leaves me wanting more.
Very much enjoyed this one Di. Those blackberries can be turned into so many puddings can't they?
Jenny.
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