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THE CHOSEN ONES ( PART THIRTY FIVE )

By skinner_jennifer on Sun, 17 Apr 2011

Evelyne and Meradith have more than one encounter.

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THE CHOSEN ONES ( PART THIRTY FOUR )

By skinner_jennifer on Sat, 16 Apr 2011

Ivan returns to the cave with his new friend.

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THE CHOSEN ONES ( PART THIRTY THREE )

By skinner_jennifer on Sat, 16 Apr 2011

There's good news and bad news!

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THE CHOSEN ONES ( PART THIRTY TWO )

By skinner_jennifer on Thu, 14 Apr 2011

Can things get any worse?

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Hi Jean,

Posted on Sat, 19 Oct 2019

Hi Jean,

I was so absorbed in this part of your life. It reminded me of a time in my own life when love got the better of me. Love can be so cruel at times, yet wonderful at other times.

On to next part with anticipation.

...

Posted in Al and the Levecar

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If I were a young Jenny in

Posted on Tue, 15 Oct 2019

If I were a young Jenny in your story I'd be loving this adventure even with the dangers that are ahead.

I loved the way you had the snake talking and that other strange creature...a Tarsier, what a cool name.

Still very much...

Posted in "The Trouble with Magical Beings" (A Fantasy) Chapter 10

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This is such a moving poem

Posted on Mon, 14 Oct 2019

This is such a moving poem onemorething. I could imagine the whale's soul looking down on its body wittnessing those wires holding its skeleton together. To me it was as if the whale itself had written the poem and was describing a memory of its...

Posted in Whale bones

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Hi Jane, you echo the

Posted on Sun, 13 Oct 2019

Hi Jane, you echo the struggle some people have with their demons in this poem, that cry for help, feelings of isolation when life seems so pointless...yet I like how you describe the fact that no matter how far down in the pit life takes you,...

Posted in Strange Light

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Isn't it great looking back

Posted on Tue, 08 Oct 2019

Isn't it great looking back onemorething. Thinking of the excitement of having some pocket money to spend and going from one ride to another. All those fairground guys, who seemed to us young teenagers to be so clever as they took risks when...

Posted in Nostalgia At The Fair

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Hi Penny,

Posted on Sun, 13 Oct 2019

Hi Penny,

Wiltshire where I live is supposed to be a place for deer, yet I've only ever seen one from a distance once and I've been living here since 1987. I know what you mean about hunting them, which for me is a great shame too. ...

Posted in Nature's Ambiance

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Hi Penny,

Posted on Sun, 13 Oct 2019

Hi Penny,

I'm sure I read this part before, but maybe I imagined it. I love the part about the huge trees parting and lettting the moonlight through to light their way...truely magical.

Jenny.

Posted in "The Trouble with Magical Beings" (A Fantasy) Chapter 9

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Hi Richard,

Posted on Mon, 14 Oct 2019

Hi Richard,

I read this like you were painting on canvas and describing what you were seeing. So much of art work is down to colour. I enjoyed your impressions in a poem.

Jenny.

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Hi Rhiannon,

Posted on Sun, 13 Oct 2019

Hi Rhiannon,

isn't it wonderful to get out whenever you choose? Sounds like you enjoyed your walk as much as we did. That little girl has certainly got the right idea. So often in our busy lives we miss all the little pleasures, but it's...

Posted in Nature's Ambiance

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Hi Jean,

Posted on Sun, 13 Oct 2019

Hi Jean,

what an interesting piece of writing. We don't have that kind of thing in England, but I have seen films about these sorority organisations and they seem pretty harsh if you don't follow their rules. I wouldn't have lasted a day...