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Hi onemorething,
Posted on Tue, 05 Nov 2019
Hi onemorething,
isn't life full of ups and downs? I think the one thing anyone can take from reading this is, that with each new day life can have a funny way of turning things around, if we just have patience and try to look on the...
Arn't those birds amazing with the designs they make in the sky? Like your poem with it's creative images, they are magnificent to watch and the most artistic birds when in flight.
I love the idea of them looking like a scatter of black...
You describe a wild child in those first five lines which I adore. That feeling of wanting...yet needing freedom to be you and not what others expect. Having those little reminders at the end of your poem, so as to not give up hope, but like the...
what you are telling me is so much like the schools around where I live, young people drug pushing and teenagers living with no hope and so becoming addicted. My partner's grand daugher who is twenty two said she won't be getting...
Some beautiful and mysterious information in your poem onemorething. I've never seen a black heron like the one in your picture before, I agree they are very much Halloween birds with those huge majestic wings. You've captured their essence...
Hi onemorething,
Posted on Tue, 05 Nov 2019
Hi onemorething,
isn't life full of ups and downs? I think the one thing anyone can take from reading this is, that with each new day life can have a funny way of turning things around, if we just have patience and try to look on the...
Read full commentPosted in New Beginnings
A beautiful piece of nature
Posted on Mon, 04 Nov 2019
A beautiful piece of nature painted in words.
Lovely Rhiannon.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in November Bloom
What a wonderful story for
Posted on Tue, 05 Nov 2019
What a wonderful story for children of all ages. I very much enjoyed and thank you for sharing.
By the way it would look great with illustrations.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in DELIA AND THE RAIN CAPE.
Wish I knew someone like
Posted on Tue, 05 Nov 2019
Wish I knew someone like granny glue. I can imagine she will be sadly missed.
Nice thoughtful poem.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Granny Glue
Hear, hear! Luigi,
Posted on Thu, 31 Oct 2019
Hear, hear! Luigi,
I love the idea of these birds being free spirits. I think your poem said it all.
Jenny. xx
Read full commentPosted in Geese
Arn't those birds amazing
Posted on Thu, 31 Oct 2019
Arn't those birds amazing with the designs they make in the sky? Like your poem with it's creative images, they are magnificent to watch and the most artistic birds when in flight.
I love the idea of them looking like a scatter of black...
Read full commentPosted in starlings
This is such an appealing
Posted on Mon, 28 Oct 2019
This is such an appealing poem onemorething. I love the idea of painting on wings and disappearing with this little bird. Enchanted as always.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Tree from a window
You describe a wild child in
Posted on Sat, 26 Oct 2019
You describe a wild child in those first five lines which I adore. That feeling of wanting...yet needing freedom to be you and not what others expect. Having those little reminders at the end of your poem, so as to not give up hope, but like the...
Read full commentPosted in Wood Anemones
Hello Di,
Posted on Thu, 24 Oct 2019
Hello Di,
what you are telling me is so much like the schools around where I live, young people drug pushing and teenagers living with no hope and so becoming addicted. My partner's grand daugher who is twenty two said she won't be getting...
Read full commentPosted in Uncertainties
Some beautiful and mysterious
Posted on Fri, 25 Oct 2019
Some beautiful and mysterious information in your poem onemorething. I've never seen a black heron like the one in your picture before, I agree they are very much Halloween birds with those huge majestic wings. You've captured their essence...
Read full commentPosted in Black Herons
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