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I have 28 stories published in 3 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 3394 times and 16 of my stories have been cherry picked.
15 of my 67 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 19 votes

My stories

Camp Echo - Chapter 10

Chapter Ten - Coke for Germany second edition Living with Aeriol you never knew exactly where you were, what would happen next, who might arrive on...

Camp Echo - Chapter 9

Chapter Nine - Davy and Nathan second edition It rang four times before someone picked up. “Hello,” the voice answered. “Ah, yeah, hi...” Max couldn’...
Cherry

Camp Echo - Chapter 8

Chapter Eight - Introductions Second Edition Max woke early, it was cold in the apartment, it was always cold, and he hated that. A bit of sunshine...

Camp Echo - Chapter 7

Chapter Seven - Relations. second edition “Jules babe your still here,” Max smiled as he entered the living room. The smell of stale smoke hung in...

Camp Echo - Chapter 6

The story so far... Max shares an apartment and a relationship with Aeriol. Max's confidant Geoffrey is no longer around, he's gone overseas, to Brazil. Jules also shares their apartment in a kind of unofficial fashion , he's always there, but he rests a mystery. Alex turns out to be the brother of Nads (Nadia). Having slept with Aeriol, he confides in him that he fancies Max. They end up in bed together, Alex and Max, but nothing happened. Nadia has a relationship with May (Mayaan), who also has a thing for Aeriol, which I guess makes Aeriol bi, and May too. Outside of these complex relationships there is Reuben, but he's also planning to move overseas, leaving behind Davy. But who exactly is Davy and why does this boy seem to fascinate Max? Our hero , is that really Max, or Aeriol, or even Jules? They've all been getting high, smoking dope, chanting in an ashram, getting off, and almost getting busted in an early morning raid. There are others too, Chester and his son Michael, whose apparently a dream, but then there's the reality of all that. Which just about brings us up to date and to this next chapter aptly titled Magic Mushrooms. Now read on...

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15 of my comments have received 19 Great Feedback votes

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It's always

Posted on Fri, 31 Jan 2020

It's always the young who pay the price

As the old fools sit and roll the dice.

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Posted in A Hymn for Silent Bells

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Confused!

Posted on Thu, 30 Jan 2020

I read it, had to look up some words, couldn't find "groan-sat." I don't really think I understood it. It was supercharged with imagery, but the descriptions seemed truncated and it jumped. I think I'm not clever enough to read this, although I...

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Posted in Lose the ivory towers - a novel

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Loved the twist

Posted on Wed, 29 Jan 2020

Half expected something was up with the classic line, "I'm a doctor." Are you going to continue the story? More portraits of people in the city or what happens when Grace emerges onto the night time streets of Manor House? There's a few things to...

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Posted in On the Night Tube Home

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The End...

Posted on Tue, 21 Jan 2020

First, thank you to everyone who read and commented. Those comments are both very nice to receive and useful points to note. I am also very appreciative of being picked as Book of the Week, as well as the cherry awards, a great honour.

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Posted in Milo Chapter Eleven

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From a band playing music, to

Posted on Tue, 14 Jan 2020

From a band playing music, to setting up a tepee, planting lovely yellow and gold flowers for tiedyeing, barbecues on hot rocks, and the cats watching it all, everything happened in that garden in Swindon, inspired in part by the heritage of a...

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Posted in An Unexpected Change

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